Mainly I was just pointing out the word flaws and the triple redundancy using "movie" in the beginning. Needed to be broken up. Other than that, it is still your description, other than changing Terminator to T-850. BTW, what font did you use for the text? I like it. It's closed to "Machined", but has jaggy points here and there. Thanks for getting back to me on this so I can snag a copy of the font.