steelio2006
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just found out bout this edit. looks like it'll be solid.
for the rough intro, have u thought bout spreading the credits out a bit. like have them intercut throughout the sequence of hayley running away from the mob of parents.
loved ur version of kris' death. that is really great. the music helps it a lot. in the original, that felt like it was missing something.
Nancy's dream was interesting. dunno if u actually need the shot of the claw coming up from the water or not. other than that, it's solid as well.
for the rough intro, have u thought bout spreading the credits out a bit. like have them intercut throughout the sequence of hayley running away from the mob of parents.
loved ur version of kris' death. that is really great. the music helps it a lot. in the original, that felt like it was missing something.
Nancy's dream was interesting. dunno if u actually need the shot of the claw coming up from the water or not. other than that, it's solid as well.