Zamros
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Ok, notes:
Loved seeing my favourite arc come to fruition in your edit, though! Bravo!
- Opening crawl - Separatist is misspelled as seperatist
- 8:48 - Noticeable audio splicing during the scene-to-scene transition
- 15:30 - Abrupt transition, needs to be drawn out a bit longer to fit the mood of the scene
- 21:05 - Nothing to do with your edit, but, why didn't he use his super effective lightning powers first?
- 27:25 - Not sure a whipe is appropriate here, considering the change in time/distance is relatively small
- "We must be vigilant, Faro" "Aren't I always?" these lines could easily be cut, they add nothing to the scene and just make it less atmospheric
- Sidenote: Dooku's castle looks like the turrets from Portal and Savage Opress is a stupid name
- We don't need to see Grievous walking out of Dooku's castle towards his ship, he's just restating stuff we literally just heard
- 1:25:20 - Strange cut here
Loved seeing my favourite arc come to fruition in your edit, though! Bravo!