JasonN,
I finally had a chance to watch the edit. My initial thoughts from the first viewing are very positive.
I absolutly loved the idea of making Padme and the Queen Sisters, and padme remaining on Naboo. That fixed the largest problem I was having when I did my edit, getting Qui-Gon and Obi-wan into the hanger to face off against Maul. It also opened up many more scenes, both action and story, to incorporate into the edit that previously were unusable because Padme was there.
Incorporating Anakin into episode 2 was fantastic, I didn't think I'd like it, but I thought part 2 was done VERY well. It could easily be assumed he was currently Yoda's padawan. And then when palpatine comments on him finally getting his own assignment, becoming more powerful than MASTER yoda, it also allows you to wonder how long Palpatine has been "teaching" and molding Anakin. Actually makes Palpatine even more of a father figure, making Anakins actions in episode 3 more believable. Anakin had too many father figures in the prequals, Qui-Gon, then Obi-wan, then Palpatine, but in this edit, Palpatine is the only father figure. I also like how you treated the trip to Tatooine. When he arrives he already discovers her to be dead, thus eliminating some of the very worst scenes in the entire trilogy, while still accomplishing what needed to be accomplished. In episode 3, I liked they way you handled order 66, eliminated the silly palpatine/yoda battle, and re-edited the final duel. You really cut out the fat, and made it more enjoyable.
As far as some constuctive criticism, I think part 2 and 3 are just fine, but part 1 was a little rough. I had a hard time following the story, and when Obi-wan and Qui-gon meet Jar Jar, and then the very next scene they are preparing for battle, it was the hardest jump to follow, a scene in between these scenes would have helped dramatically. I'm also not a big fan of the gungan battle being incorporated. For just a 20 minute short-film, the movie became too big, too quick, and too complicated at this point. It just never flowed smoothly to me. I think it would work better, if part 1 remained focused on a small rebel group, working from the inside, but that is just my opinion.
Overall, I enjoyed your edit immensly and you've thrown out some ideas nobody else has thought of. It was a refreshing edit which I hope makes it to a DVD release on the site.
I'm going to try another edit of episode 1 for fun utilizing both your ideas and my previous ideas.. I'll send you a private message with a link to download my re-edit of part 1 when it's complete, and if you choose to release it, or use it, that will be your call. I'm just doing it for myself and have no intention of posting it otherwise.
Thanks JasonN, well done.