Nic
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I like the second clip, thought I feel we see to much of Clark's blurry face. I'd experiment with either making quicker trims so we see less of his face or imply that Lois's eyesight is failing her because she's going into shock.
The first clip feels...weird. As if we're meant to be tracking the helicopter as it moves from the boat to the oil rig, but the camera fell asleep & now has to play catchup with the dynamic zooms.
I guess what hurts is that I also don't know the context, fully. You say you're trying to cut Clark out of it, so does it take place before or after we meet Lois. If the later, is this part of a flashback we see later on? If so, from who's PoV are we viewing the flashback from, Calrk or one of the fisherman telling Lois the story? If Clark, how does he know what the fisherman said? If the fisherman why not start the flashback from inside the oil rig?
The first clip feels...weird. As if we're meant to be tracking the helicopter as it moves from the boat to the oil rig, but the camera fell asleep & now has to play catchup with the dynamic zooms.
I guess what hurts is that I also don't know the context, fully. You say you're trying to cut Clark out of it, so does it take place before or after we meet Lois. If the later, is this part of a flashback we see later on? If so, from who's PoV are we viewing the flashback from, Calrk or one of the fisherman telling Lois the story? If Clark, how does he know what the fisherman said? If the fisherman why not start the flashback from inside the oil rig?