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What NLE are you using? That's never happened to me. But, instead of accepting the worst case scenario, reach out to a few of us via pm or here on your thread and maybe we can pull you through it like Tremault just attempted to do. It's worth a shot. There are some relatively sharp cookies on this forum.Correct. My problem is a little bit difficult to explain (and Google for troubleshooting), but essentially every instance of the source on my timeline starts from the beginning of the source instead of starting from where it's cut.
No problem. I'm not sure whether there's a rule of thumb, but I'm leaning toward keeping at least some kind of introductory message, simply to alert folks who might have more than one version of which they're watching up front, instead of waiting ~17 minutes for the first cut.* 0:00:00 it is part of fanedit site rules that viewers must own the original to view edits. The intro message needs to be amended to reflect this or removed.
I agree her reaction time is a little bit shorter than I'd prefer, although previously I decided I could live with it. How she would respond to seeing Steve earlier from across the room (as himself) I think would be subjective speculation. She could struggle to believe her eyes and ignore it, or she could immediately run with arms wide open. Arguably, her love for Steve being a blind spot is a theme of the movie, so I think it's reasonable she might accept it at face value (pun intended) first and process it later. Anyway, I'll play with it.* 0:44:51 At this point, it is quite Jarring that Steve suddenly appears. There is no journey from shock to incredulity to realisation. Diana needs time to emotionally process this. There are many shots that could be used. I'd try and use as many shots of the prior interaction as you can, the shot of the watch being placed in her hand. You can obscure his face somehow as though she doesn't want to acknowledge it. you could even possibly use some shots from the first WW movie to show her struggling with her memories.
as a most straightforward idea though, I'd crop the frame so his face is just out of view and show her being pursued by him, then she turns away from the fountain and tries to leave, we see her being held back by the hand, then show her face as she realises it. You probably have your own ideas about it though so I suggest playing with it.
for the audio, you can use https://melody.ml/ to separate music and vocals and then repair the soundtrack.
Good suggestions.* 0:47:03 The apartment scene; at the start of it, you could start Diana's dialogue "oh so this is how you found me" before you cut to the interior. This layering would help ease us in as I initially felt like it was abrupt. the scene also feels short so at the end, I think you can show him looking in the mirror as long as you don't show the reverse shot of the mirror, you could possibly include some of his criticisms of what he sees if you use shots of diana as cutaways.
Hopefully the second half will clarify. The King of Crude is still a character, and he still upsets everyone by claiming disputed territory. There just isn't a literal wall dividing Egypt. Good technical suggestions - thank you.* 1:03:41 This is an abrupt cut, I don't yet understand why we are shown the magazine about King of Crude, but the rest is omitted. If the King of Crude is to be cut out of the movie, then why not cut at 1:03:21 instead? If you want to keep in the fact Max has gone to Cairo, then it might be better to cut a little later, maybe just after Steve's comments about how fast planes go. The audio at the beginning of the next scene needs to be removed. since a new track starts as Barbara is scanning the computer screen, then it's probably best to carry over the audio from Diana and Steve in Max's office.
great work!Greetings! Checking in to report I've finished redoing the rough cuts. Because of how much time elapsed, I couldn't remember my rationale for every decision... but redoing the rough cuts refreshed my memory enough to respond to some of the feedback more specifically.
yes, there are some custom intros available in the resources section if you like. it's up to you whether you have an intro or not.No problem. I'm not sure whether there's a rule of thumb, but I'm leaning toward keeping at least some kind of introductory message, simply to alert folks who might have more than one version of which they're watching up front, instead of waiting ~17 minutes for the first cut.
Yes I see you included them being in egypt, just not the stealing thing. Well I have watched the second half now, so more notes here :-Hopefully the second half will clarify. The King of Crude is still a character, and he still upsets everyone by claiming disputed territory. There just isn't a literal wall dividing Egypt. Good technical suggestions - thank you.
I think that is needed, it would help matters, but I think something extra is required. I feel like it needs something, either a line of dialogue that mentions travelling or some visual of a passenger aeroplane.You could dwell on the found airplane tickets a bit longer by have Steve simply react to the amount of time flight travel takes, that might be enough for the "idea of them flying" works, and still avoid all those plot holes.
Ah yes, I think a) we have the same issue and b) I managed to unintentionally confuse some points for you guys.I think we’re referring to the note:
01:09:26 this is abrupt, they are suddenly in a desert, it's clearly egypt and it's raising the question of "how did they get there".
I had the same narrative I issue here in PM discussion