Firstly, the music intros, and that's great, but then kind of dies off and still comes in suddenly. For me, it would work better as a more obvious ramp up. Does that make sense?
Secondly, there's still a close-up inserted of the hand just sitting in a taxidermy mouth, as if that's some kind of restraint, and then Stewart yelling "ow". It's still ridiculous. For me, you could probably overlook it without the closeup (maybe would need another shot there instead?) but with that closeup, it's patently silly. It's obvious that there's no way Stewart's hand is somehow "caught" in that big mouth, so it's just a gag.