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I love that you have removed Han using the crossbow. Han has known Chewie for 35 years and has never once used his crossbow...yeah right, Well he used it to escape from Kajiclub and the Raphtas. Your new Raphta edit is great, not much more could be done to make it bearable to watch. The raphtas look like something out of the Ghostbusters.
If i had input into the script i would have personally had Han and Chewie already on the Falcon in Jakku when Finn and Rey escape from the stormtroopers. Han would have just tracked down the falcon at the scrap yard after searching for it for years because Han lost it gambling or had to repay a smuggling debt. Just as they were about to take off Finn and Rey jump onboard and this is how they all meet. Han and Chewie actually fly the Falcon off Jakku . I cant wrap my head around Rey being able to fly the way she did. When did she have access as a young girl to learn to fly. She spent her life scavenging for food to keep herself alive.
Also i would remove the big deal lines between Han and Finn. Finn shows a lack of respect, i personally think you must earn the respect or at least have a friendship before you start calling someone by their surname. Finn then calls him Solo again as they walk to Maz castle.
Is there away to only hear Snoke and not necessarily see him. Maybe just shots of Kylo and Hux looking up as he talks or make the picture darker so we just see Snoke's face partially.
I like Kylo's tantrums after all he is a spoilt brat It makes him conflicted but i totally understand why you choose to cut some of this out.
Removing Luke at the end is intriguing. I would definitely have moved the helicopter shot at the end, it just doesnt fit into Star Wars. It reminds me of Highlander or Cliffhanger. Just does not fit. I worry about episode 8 having lots of these shots while Rey is training.
Nothing to do with this edit but i do think the best part of the film is when we meet Rey scavenging, the music and the feel of loneliness is wonderful, JJ got it spot on , however, during this early part of the film i would have had a couple of scenes whereby Rey struggles to move a heavy piece of scrap, she is too weak , Rey then gets frustrated and actually moves the scrap slightly with her mind but does not necessarily know why and how she does it. This makes the Daniel Craig stormtrooper scene less ridiculous. All of a sudden Rey knows how to use the force.
And if you are some kind of rotoscoping genius , please have Phasma fight Finn during the battle at Maz castle...not just some random stormtrooper...
These are just a few of my ideas but this is your edit and i cant wait to see what you accomplish
If i had input into the script i would have personally had Han and Chewie already on the Falcon in Jakku when Finn and Rey escape from the stormtroopers. Han would have just tracked down the falcon at the scrap yard after searching for it for years because Han lost it gambling or had to repay a smuggling debt. Just as they were about to take off Finn and Rey jump onboard and this is how they all meet. Han and Chewie actually fly the Falcon off Jakku . I cant wrap my head around Rey being able to fly the way she did. When did she have access as a young girl to learn to fly. She spent her life scavenging for food to keep herself alive.
Also i would remove the big deal lines between Han and Finn. Finn shows a lack of respect, i personally think you must earn the respect or at least have a friendship before you start calling someone by their surname. Finn then calls him Solo again as they walk to Maz castle.
Is there away to only hear Snoke and not necessarily see him. Maybe just shots of Kylo and Hux looking up as he talks or make the picture darker so we just see Snoke's face partially.
I like Kylo's tantrums after all he is a spoilt brat It makes him conflicted but i totally understand why you choose to cut some of this out.
Removing Luke at the end is intriguing. I would definitely have moved the helicopter shot at the end, it just doesnt fit into Star Wars. It reminds me of Highlander or Cliffhanger. Just does not fit. I worry about episode 8 having lots of these shots while Rey is training.
Nothing to do with this edit but i do think the best part of the film is when we meet Rey scavenging, the music and the feel of loneliness is wonderful, JJ got it spot on , however, during this early part of the film i would have had a couple of scenes whereby Rey struggles to move a heavy piece of scrap, she is too weak , Rey then gets frustrated and actually moves the scrap slightly with her mind but does not necessarily know why and how she does it. This makes the Daniel Craig stormtrooper scene less ridiculous. All of a sudden Rey knows how to use the force.
And if you are some kind of rotoscoping genius , please have Phasma fight Finn during the battle at Maz castle...not just some random stormtrooper...
These are just a few of my ideas but this is your edit and i cant wait to see what you accomplish