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Okay, Heres what i found (time marks based on what my dvd player said):
*0:13:40* during the rocket trip to mongo, there is a noticable cut in the music, I think you cut a close up shot from inside the rocket? The music doesn't join back up quite right and it stands out (I did the same thing when i made that FG serial trailer, at a different point however, them music cuts/joins can be a real pain). If you wanted to fix this all you would have to do is make a cut where the original edit you made was and remove some of the video from either side of that cut, highlight the audio and video to the left and move the highlighted clips closer and closer together, and listen each time you make an adjustment until the music joins back up "on the beat" if you know what im sayin'.
*1:30:13* right after Ming bites the dust and the hawkmen arrive, the cut from that to the celebration ending, that was what i was referring to earlier, because its kinda abrupt how the music kicks in, but compared to how the music sometimes kicks in at other points in the original film it is really not that different, actually its just fine as you have it now i think
The cut at the start with the starfield still stands out to me, lol, i really do think it can be smoother with some trickery, so that the stars dont snap off and the credits dont snap on if you know what i mean. Other than those minor things, your edit is pretty well flawless! I enjoyed it even more this time
Sorry if i caused any greif before, it was not my intention.
*0:13:40* during the rocket trip to mongo, there is a noticable cut in the music, I think you cut a close up shot from inside the rocket? The music doesn't join back up quite right and it stands out (I did the same thing when i made that FG serial trailer, at a different point however, them music cuts/joins can be a real pain). If you wanted to fix this all you would have to do is make a cut where the original edit you made was and remove some of the video from either side of that cut, highlight the audio and video to the left and move the highlighted clips closer and closer together, and listen each time you make an adjustment until the music joins back up "on the beat" if you know what im sayin'.
*1:30:13* right after Ming bites the dust and the hawkmen arrive, the cut from that to the celebration ending, that was what i was referring to earlier, because its kinda abrupt how the music kicks in, but compared to how the music sometimes kicks in at other points in the original film it is really not that different, actually its just fine as you have it now i think
The cut at the start with the starfield still stands out to me, lol, i really do think it can be smoother with some trickery, so that the stars dont snap off and the credits dont snap on if you know what i mean. Other than those minor things, your edit is pretty well flawless! I enjoyed it even more this time
Sorry if i caused any greif before, it was not my intention.