Nic
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So, this is a very good edit, and I am all in favor of how you rearranged the sequencing of the first and third acts. However, there is one thing I want that really bugs me, and that's when Luke tells Han that he'll meet them at rendezvous point, despite the fact that we never see where he goes, and it really highlights that this is an edit.
Now, the way I see this getting fixed would be if there was a special effect wizard to make it so the Falcon and the X-Wng are flying in the same direction, show the fleet, and then, taking a page from Dawn of the Empire, cut to black and have Luke have a vision about his confrontation with his father with him seeing/feeling his death. I think this can be done using the footage from the blu-ray of Luke constructing his lightsaber. I think this would add more strength to Luke's character, knoing he has to face Vader despite the fact that he might possibly die.
Overall, this is a good edit, but it's just a far bit off from being perfect.
Now, the way I see this getting fixed would be if there was a special effect wizard to make it so the Falcon and the X-Wng are flying in the same direction, show the fleet, and then, taking a page from Dawn of the Empire, cut to black and have Luke have a vision about his confrontation with his father with him seeing/feeling his death. I think this can be done using the footage from the blu-ray of Luke constructing his lightsaber. I think this would add more strength to Luke's character, knoing he has to face Vader despite the fact that he might possibly die.
Overall, this is a good edit, but it's just a far bit off from being perfect.