I just want to say publicly
THANK YOU to
Flyboy707 for his very generous review!
http://fanedit.org/10700/
I think he brought up some very valid points....
I agree, I think there are a couple "low" audio issues. There are a couple of scenes where I used an audio fade transition when I should have just overlayed the audio on the scene. I am trying to correct this bad habit/mistake on my current KHAN edit.
As for the whole Kirk as Captain/Enterprise Refit issue, in retrospect I agree, I should have done something more....
I did put an information caption after the opening episode credits that read "
RELAUNCH POST 18 MONTH REFIT" hoping that would suffice but maybe not...
With whole Kirk/Decker lounge scene, I think I was too focussed with trying to have Decker come across as an over-eager young advancing officer, who viewed Kirk as over the hill and in his way. The "
you have not logged a single star hour in 2.5 years..." was meant to demostrate this, with Decker equating inactivity with inexperience. It was my personal view, Kirk was probably off "
galloping across the galaxy" during the Enterprise refit period, as I don't think Kirk would accept another command other than Enterprise at this point in his career.
But I think Flyboy is probably right, I should done something to make this plot point clearer.