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Brumous said:Fine work all through. Planet Vulcan never looked better. The interrupting Ilia with the hailing signal works like a charm. Matting in the larger drydock as the shuttle leaves the station really helps the continuity and scale, a nice Adywan touch there.
Glad you liked the hailing signal bit, I was pretty pleased with that touch .
bionicbob said:FANTASTIC!!! Truly! I am blown away! You have warmed this old Trekie's heart.
Though I do have a couple minor notes regarding the new subtitles....
--I agree with Brumous that they should be one or two sizes larger
--"give me your thoughts." Give needs to be capitalized.
--"One and together, Spock".... while it works, I think a more traditional Vulcan mind meld phrase would be better.... usually it goes like "My mind to your mind... my thoughts to your thoughts...", I know its a small quibble nitpick, but hey, its what us Trekheads do! LOL!
--"His answer lieS elsewhere"... you need an "S" at the end of lie
--"Attacking formation"... I dunno, shouldn't it be just "attack formation" ?
-- "Fire."... for dramatic purposes, wouldn't it be stronger if it ended with an exclamation point ... "Fire!" ?
Thanks and all good points. I did wonder if the Subs were too small, now I know. I also wondered if using a Trek font was a bit too much?
If anyone wants to suggest a subtitle font (Make sure it's free to download ;-)) then go for it. Maybe there is a vintage 1979 subtitle look that somebody knows off?