Made a good bit of progress yesterday, about halfway through now and got to one of the most radically different parts of Cimino's second cut. It's a lot of fun (In a nerdy way) reconstructing this version as you can see exactly what has been changed and why...
1st DC Running Order:
1. Picnic Scene (6.5 minutes) - Averill tells Ella that the government has declared war on Johnson County. He asks her to leave. She calls him a "Son of a bitch" and the scene ends with them talking in nihilistic terms about aging and death (A Very long and often tiresome scene).
2. Roller Disco (5 Minutes) - Very fun sequence but it goes on too long, Jim seems to be missing and it feels odd that they are partying just after the deadly secret has been revealed.
3. Waltz (3.5 Minutes) - Again a wonderful scene where Jim and Ellla share a romantic slow dance but it's too long.
4. Talk by the Lake (1 Minute) - Jim again asks Ella to leave Johnson County
2nd DC Running Order:
1. Roller Disco (4 Minutes) -Now contains many insert shots of Averill watching the community dance from the bandstand. We see the looming threat is troubling him, but he eventually joins in the celebration. It is now made clear through extra dialogue that the party is in aid of Ella's birthday and Jim doesn't want to spoil her day.
2. Waltz (2.5 Minutes) - A shorter but still lovely dance where it is further made clear that it is Ella birthday and the special dance is for her - "Talk by the Lake" scene is removed entirely and instead we cut to...
3. Picnic Scene (3 minutes) - Much shorter and very different scene. Now placed post birthday party, we see that Jim finally can't put off the bad news any longer and tells Ella of the danger. She undersands and it ends with new footage of them silently embracing.
Here is the alternate cut of the 'Picnic Scene'. I've coloured the new shots B&W just to show what has been added...
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This is so obviously a superior and more logical cut of 'Heaven's Gate', that it is truly bizarre that Cimino has chosen to forget about it.