Watched my rough cut last night the introdution of Jaguar Paw and his friends suffers a bit from my attempts to keep dialogue so minimal, may have to rethink the opening to find the middle ground between economy while still allowing the viewer to connect with the protaganist.
Main focus of the edit will still be stripping it purely to its chase thriller/family drama elements with as little dialogue as possible. I think a 105 runtime (129 originally minus credits) is about right for that.. not that theres anything wrong with the original. I was only intending on using subtitles in 2 scenes but that may stretch to 3 with the introduction now.