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TM2YC said:There are three points in that clip I noticed...
03.13 - The music seemed to switch quite suddenly here
If you are referring to the scene where we transition from the bats to Tauriel noticing Kili on the tower, then I kinda like the music change here - I think it works well with the image on screen. I did try other options. This one feels the best to me. You don't find it smooth enough?
TM2YC said:05.53 - The moment Killi is impaled felt a bit quiet (I know it's like that in the movie audio) the way you cut it together. If you can boost the sound of the actual stab impact a bit it'll sound better I think
OK, interesting idea. I'll do that.
TM2YC said:06.10 - It got a little strange around this point visually. Legolas seems to be looking at Tauriel ready to leap to her defence, then we see Thorin and suddenly Orcrist comes from nowhere. Perhaps you could rearrange things so it's clear Legolas is looking at Thorin and not Tauriel just before the sword is thrown, or add some Legolas footage back. If you show Tauriel, then Legolas looking at something the audience is going to think he's looking at Tauriel, even if the next cut is to Thorin, if you see what I mean.
The scene at 06.09 suggests that Legolas looks aside and notices Thorin is about to get stabbed by the Orc. I see if I can edit it better. There's not enough good footage, unfortunately :/
TM2YC said:...the rest sounds good .
Awesome. Thanks.
How do you like my change to the previous video [with the title fade]?