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Thanks for watching, MrBadcrumble, glad you liked it. I'll try to explain my decisions:
I went from the standpoint of first time viewer and intentionally left out the poisoning so it remains ambiguous until it's clear what it is. That's one of the reasons I cut out the narration, I didn't like him explaining what's obvious. I get it, cut that way can seem odd, but I like such oddities here and there in movies, if they pay off later in the story. And while editing, I amused myself with the fact that Warren is saying "him not knowing" when coffee pot appears (and Quentin shot it exactly like that from the other angle, but he's blabbering all over it), or the notion that Warren is screwing with the old man, pushing him and making him boil... coffee pot, boil... well, you know
Regarding end titles, my first intention was just to replace end title music. When I decided on Bacalov I randomly placed it where it is now. And it clicked. Since it's been established that the letter is BS, it seemed kind of unnecessary for it to be read completely. Just that Mannix asked to read it was enough for me, since he was the one that taunted Warren about it. And then there's just the "dear Marques" tarantinesque repetition... So I left it like that. I also think the camera work has a nice flow with the tune.
Fade ins/outs were made without much thinking, I just went with gut feeling and dynamics of scenes before or after. As for the artifacts you mention, I did check and there weren't any - I guess it must be a codec glitch or something like that... Do they appear every time you play it, in the same place?
P.S.
Tthanks for making me check the file again, I did find one hard to spot edit glitch so I'll be fixing it and also inserting my intro logo animation when I finish it. I just hope I won't piss Dominic Cobb off by submitting this a million times!
I went from the standpoint of first time viewer and intentionally left out the poisoning so it remains ambiguous until it's clear what it is. That's one of the reasons I cut out the narration, I didn't like him explaining what's obvious. I get it, cut that way can seem odd, but I like such oddities here and there in movies, if they pay off later in the story. And while editing, I amused myself with the fact that Warren is saying "him not knowing" when coffee pot appears (and Quentin shot it exactly like that from the other angle, but he's blabbering all over it), or the notion that Warren is screwing with the old man, pushing him and making him boil... coffee pot, boil... well, you know
Regarding end titles, my first intention was just to replace end title music. When I decided on Bacalov I randomly placed it where it is now. And it clicked. Since it's been established that the letter is BS, it seemed kind of unnecessary for it to be read completely. Just that Mannix asked to read it was enough for me, since he was the one that taunted Warren about it. And then there's just the "dear Marques" tarantinesque repetition... So I left it like that. I also think the camera work has a nice flow with the tune.
Fade ins/outs were made without much thinking, I just went with gut feeling and dynamics of scenes before or after. As for the artifacts you mention, I did check and there weren't any - I guess it must be a codec glitch or something like that... Do they appear every time you play it, in the same place?
P.S.
Tthanks for making me check the file again, I did find one hard to spot edit glitch so I'll be fixing it and also inserting my intro logo animation when I finish it. I just hope I won't piss Dominic Cobb off by submitting this a million times!