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- I really don't like "and I should care about this because?". To me it sounds a bit childish. Just my taste. Maybe something more classical like "and what of it?", or "and why should we care?", or "It is of no concern to us". Something like that.
- The removal is decent enough but I didn't feel the Klingon lacked honour. We are shown that he knows she is lying to him before he attacks.
- Personnal taste but... I wouldn't go with a classic "prime" font for the subs, stick with a JJ-Trek font.
By the way... it's a shame the subs are hard-encoded into the IMAX version, I'd have liked to have a play with them myself.
The alternate dialogue from the deleted scene is pretty good, it might suggest ideas...
- I really don't like "and I should care about this because?". To me it sounds a bit childish. Just my taste. Maybe something more classical like "and what of it?", or "and why should we care?", or "It is of no concern to us". Something like that.
- The removal is decent enough but I didn't feel the Klingon lacked honour. We are shown that he knows she is lying to him before he attacks.
- Personnal taste but... I wouldn't go with a classic "prime" font for the subs, stick with a JJ-Trek font.
By the way... it's a shame the subs are hard-encoded into the IMAX version, I'd have liked to have a play with them myself.
The alternate dialogue from the deleted scene is pretty good, it might suggest ideas...