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Enemy (2013), by Denis Villeneuve, was an interesting film. Slow, calm, and ambiguous - unless you watch the BR extras that is. But while I didn't have a big problem with the pace, I couldn't help but notice that there were a lot of pointless shots that served no purpose - in particular in the first act - and, in my opinion, should've been left on the cutting room floor. Additionally, I disliked the addition of the spiders, which were not in The Duplicate - the book the film is based on. So, the main goals here are:
Original name: Enemy
Fanedit name: Enemy: The Analogue Cut
Original release date: 2013
Fanedit release date: In progress
Faneditor name: Heavisyde
Fanedit type: FanFix
Original run-time: 1hr 26mins (+ credits)
Fanedit run-time: 1hr 07mins (+ credits)
Time cut/added: 19mins cut, 0 mins added
I have cut 19 minutes of footage from the film whilst largely retaining the same plot and nearly all scenes. Somewhat similar approach here to TM2YC's Aerodynamik edit of Blade Runner 2049, which interestingly enough was also directed by Villeneuve. The main result is that the first act is better paced and there's a lot less time spent with characters staring and walking. I could have cut more, but wanted to retain the feel of the original. It's still a slow film, as intended, but now no longer pointlessly slow. I'm mostly done with this now, just in the process of fading audio.
Update 29 Dec 21:
This is now complete and available.
- Tightening the pace in areas where it is unnecessarily slow
- Cutting a few scenes, lines, and shots I felt were unneeded
- Cutting the spiders
- Added intro
- Opening moved to end
- Cut scene with woman in heels killing a spider
- Cut Adam walking out of uni
- Cut Adam walking between rooms
- Cut 1st, 2nd & 3rd sex scenes between Adam & Mary
- Cut Adam leaving uni, buying the film
- Cut Adam walking between rooms, taking off tie
- Cut Mary walking between rooms
- Trimmed 4th sex scene, Mary leaving
- Lowered volume during Adam's dream version of the film
- Trimmed Adam getting up after dreaming
- Trimmed end of shot when Adam is watching the film at night
- Cut Adam getting a laptop charger
- Trimmed Adam scrolling for Fraser Ash's image
- Cut Adam clicking on Daniel Saint Claire's page
- Cut Adam turning back to get his keys
- Cut shots of phone ringing, Adam looking at it
- Trimmed shot of Adam driving
- Shortened Adam getting back into his car after getting the envelope
- Cut some shots of Adam driving to payphone
- Cut shot of Adam looking around after getting out of car (before payphone)
- Shortened Adam walking to payphone
- Trimmed Helen walking towards Anthony
- Cut Adam entering classroom
- Cut Helen arriving on campus
- Trimmed phone ringing when Anthony calls Adam
- Cut Anthony "I don't know what you're talking about", Helen "I think you know", as it is referencing the spiders
- Cut Anthony's spider nightmare, waking up from it
- Cut shot of Adam walking to the hotel
- Cut shots of woman walking through corridoor, Adam noticing her (again, seems to relate to spider storyline)
- Cut shots of Anthony showering, Helen lying down, Anthony staring
- Trimmed shot of city
- Cut shot of Anthony sitting at home with his wife after stalking Mary
- Cut Adam walking into his mother's house
- Cut massive spider in the city
- Cut shot of Adam facepalming
- Rearranged scenes so that Adam visiting his mother comes shortly after his encounter with Anthony, and Anthony delivering his ultimatum to Adam comes immediately after stalking Mary
- Cut Anthony rehearsing his ultimatum
- Cut shot of buildings whilst Anthony's rehearsing
- Trimmed shot of motorbike whilst Anthony's rehearsing
- Trimmed Anthony looking in the mirror before putting on suit
- Trimmed shot of Anthony driving Mary
- Trimmed Adam entering Anthony's building
- Cut man in elevator telling Adam that he has "to go back". A reference to the spider room from the beginning.
- (don't mention) Tiny trim on end of shot
- Cut shot of Adam walking through Anthony's living room
- Cut Adam opening the fridge. Two mentions of bluberries was enough.
- Trimmed Adam staring whilst waiting for Helen
- Cut shot of Adam standing around
- Cut shot of bedroom before Anthony and Mary enter
- Trimmed Anthony/Mary sex scene
- Cut shot of Adam standing around after getting out of bed with Helen
- Cut shot of Adam sitting around after Mary walks towards car
- Lowered volume leading up to and during car crash
- Cut zoom on spiderweb after car crash
- Cut radio broadcast, closing scene
- Moved opening to the end. Works suprisingly well, and alters the meaning of the ending
- Replaced shot of highway during new ending (the mother's voicemail) with shots of Anthony/Adam from the opening spider scene
- Added new closing credits - rescored with "Delusions" from The Devil All the Time
- Moved and recut original closing credits to match rescore
Original name: Enemy
Fanedit name: Enemy: The Analogue Cut
Original release date: 2013
Fanedit release date: In progress
Faneditor name: Heavisyde
Fanedit type: FanFix
Original run-time: 1hr 26mins (+ credits)
Fanedit run-time: 1hr 07mins (+ credits)
Time cut/added: 19mins cut, 0 mins added
I have cut 19 minutes of footage from the film whilst largely retaining the same plot and nearly all scenes. Somewhat similar approach here to TM2YC's Aerodynamik edit of Blade Runner 2049, which interestingly enough was also directed by Villeneuve. The main result is that the first act is better paced and there's a lot less time spent with characters staring and walking. I could have cut more, but wanted to retain the feel of the original. It's still a slow film, as intended, but now no longer pointlessly slow. I'm mostly done with this now, just in the process of fading audio.
Update 29 Dec 21:
This is now complete and available.
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