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Original film title: The Dark Knight Rises
Fanedit film title: The Dark Knight Saga Recut - Part III[SIZE=+0]
[/SIZE]Date Original Film Was Released: 2012
Date Fanedit Was Released: August, 2014
Original Runtime: 166 mins
New Runtime: 134 mins
Time Cut: ​32 mins
Intention: Nolan's epic bat-trilogy is widely considered to be one of the great cinematic achievements, especially within the superhero genre. Yet despite their many strengths, the films are weighed down by poor attempts at humor, tonal inconsistencies, poor CGI, unnecessary exposition, superfluous characters, and bloated running times.
This series of edits intends to streamline the films, keeping the tone consistent throughout and emphasizing the strongest elements of the series.
Cutlist for Part III (The Dark Knight Rises):
Main Goals:
- Keep the movie moving, and remove scenes/characters unnecessary to moving the plot forward
- cut out Deputy Commissioner Foley and Selina's girlfriend from the movie as much as possible
- Simplify Bane's plan. He wants to terrorize and destroy Gotham, as has always been the plan of the league of shadows.
- Removal of all references to Occupy wall street/99%, rich being overthrown by the poor, people's court etc.
- Decrease Batman's poorly performed dialogue where possible
- Cut back on needless exposition/bad jokes
- Make the police less stupid.
- Reconstruct the ending to have Batman actually die. No Hollywood happy endings.
Full Cutlist:
- Keep the movie moving, and remove scenes/characters unnecessary to moving the plot forward
- cut out Deputy Commissioner Foley and Selina's girlfriend from the movie as much as possible
- Simplify Bane's plan. He wants to terrorize and destroy Gotham, as has always been the plan of the league of shadows.
- Removal of all references to Occupy wall street/99%, rich being overthrown by the poor, people's court etc.
- Decrease Batman's poorly performed dialogue where possible
- Cut back on needless exposition/bad jokes
- Make the police less stupid.
- Reconstruct the ending to have Batman actually die. No Hollywood happy endings.
Full Cutlist:
- Cut CIA agentâs, âWhy does he wear the mask?â. Thatâs the question youâre willing to threaten someone with death for? Now he just says, âTell me about Bane.â
- Cut Mayorâs, âNow thereâs talk of repealing the Dent act, and to that I say, not on my watchâ
- Cut almost all scenes throughout featuring Matthew Modineâs Deputy Commissioner, Foley. His character is grating and smarmy, adding little to the filmâs central narrative.
- Simplified Gordonâs speech, cutting âI have a speech telling the truth about Harvey Dent, maybe the time isnât right. Maybe right now all you need to know is that there are 1,000 inmates in Blackgate prison as a direct result of the Dent act. These are violent criminals, essential cogs in the organised crime machine.â
- Cut Alfredâs story to Bruce in the Batcave about going on holiday during his absence, hoping to see him there in a café happy with kids and family.
- Cut all scenes of Selinaâs girlfriend, as she adds literally nothing to the plot.
- Cut âCall meâ joke, after Selina tells congressman to keep pressure on his gunshot wound.
- Cut Baneâs henchman searching Gordon in the underground lair. Baneâs reading of the speech has been deleted later, so no need to see it revealed here.
- Shortened dialogue between Bane and Henchman, cutting âThe water runs to any one of the outflowsâ.
- Timmed Selina and Bruceâs dance conversation, cutting: âI take what I need from those with more than enough, I donât stand on the shoulders of people with less.â âRobin Hood?â âI think I do more to help people than most of the people in this room, thank you.â âYou think maybe youâre assuming too much?â âMaybe youâre being unrealistic about whatâs really in your pants other than your wallet.â âOuch.â
- Also cut âThereâs a storm coming Mr Wayne. You and your friends better baton down the hatches, because when it hits, youâre gonna wonder how you could have lived so large, and left so little for the rest of us.â âSound like youâre looking forward to it.â
- Cut Lucius mention of Miranda being âquite lovelyâ, and âwe all just want whatâs best for you Bruce.â
- Cut all references to the Batâs autopilot when Lucius shows Bruce âThe Batâ.
- Cut Alfredâs, âSometimes, something rises from the darknessâ
- Cut unnecessary exposition: âYour mentor.â âBane was a member of the league of shadows?â âAnd then he was excommunicated.â
- Changed Alfred's, "Any man who is too extreme for Raz al Gul" to "Any man who was trained by Raz al Gul.", since I have deleted all references during exposition of Bane being excommunicated from League of Shadows.
- Cut stockholders talking about stock prices: âWayne coming back is change. Change is either good or bad. I vote bad.â How did you decide? I flipped a coin.
- Cut Foley and banker conversation outside during Baneâs attack. âIâm not risking my men for your moneyâ âItâs not our money, itâs everybodyâs!â
- Cut one shot of police cars arriving at the scene, and a shot of snipers on the roof.
- Cut Henchmanâs: âThey cut the fiber. Itâs still workingâ Bane: âFor nowâ.
- Cut cops âshoot the tires! Thereâs no shotâ¦â
- âCut Foleyâs, âBack off, back off theyâve got hostages!â
- Cut policemanâs âWhatâs wrong with the lights?â ââWhat the hell was that?â Oh boy, are you in for a show tonight son!â
- Cut cop nervously shooting batmanâs ECG gun, âSorryâ¦â âPut that thing away before you hurt yourself!â.
- Cut Foley and Blakeâs dialogue, âIâm gonna do what Jim Gordon never couldâ âWhatâs that?â âIâm gonna take down the Batman!â
- Cut âSir, but what about the armed robbers?â
- Cut, âHeâs getting away!â âWho do you wanna catch, huh? Some robber, or the son of a bitch you killed Harvey Dent?â
- Cut, âWe lost himâ âHow could you lose him?â âHeâs got a lot of fire power.â âWhat and you donât?â
- Cut, âHeâs heading downtown.â âThen heâs as dumb as he dresses. Close it off gentlemen.â
- Cut Dagartâs needless exposition to Catwoman: âThe ultimate tool for a master jewel thief!â
- Shortened dialogue between Batman and Catwoman, cutting âSee you around!â âYouâre Welcomeâ âI had it under controlâ âThose werenât street thugs, they were trained killers. I saved your life. In return,â¦â
- Cut Batmanâs joke: âMs Kyle? So thatâs what that feels likeâ¦â
- Cut Alfredâs âI see the power of beliefâ
- Cut bruce/Alfred, âYou said he was excommunicated.â âBy Raz al Gul. Who leads them now?â
- Cut Bruce arguing with Selinaâs girlfriend outside her apartment
- Cut Batman to Selina, âI acquired it to keep it out of the wrong handsâ.
- Cut Batman to Bane, âYou were excommunicated by a gang of psychopathsâ
- Cut Foley and Gordonâs, âremind me to tell detail to keep hot heads outâ and âwe could use some hotter heads around here!â
- Moved scene of Blake visiting Gordon in hospital to discuss the tunnels and getting a promotion to detective to after the Batman/Bane fight.
- Cut Miranda and Bruceâs rain-soaked love scene/dialogue by the fireside at Wayne Manor.
- Cut Blake knocking at Wayne Manor with no answer.
- Cut Dr Pavelâs stating the obvious, âThis is now a 4 mega-tonne nuclear bomb!â
- Replaced audio/music/sound effects for football stadium and baneâs bomb reveal scenes.
- Cut Star Spangled banner before football match.
- Cut some of the explosions around the city to keep the pace moving
- Cut one of the wide shots of bridges being blown up.
- Cut âtake control. Take control of your city!â
- Cut ânow we come here not as conquerors but as liberators to return control of the city to the peopleâ.
- Cut âTomorrow you claim what is rightfully yoursâ.
- Cut CIAâs exposition: âPull back the fighters, start high level reconnaissance flights, get the president on the lineâ.
- Cut âtanks and planes cannot stop us from detonating our device. Send and emissary to discuss turns of access for supplies and communication.
- Cut âBane says heâs given Gotham back to the people. They need to know I could lead.â Also âBane would lever let that happenâ âHeâll show his true coloursâ âand youâll be deadâ
- Substantially trimmed Baneâs monologue to the injured Bruce to exclude all mention of Giving Gotham hope to create true despair (âThereâs a reason why this prison is the worst hell on earth. Hope. Everyman who has been in here over the centuries has looked up to the light and imagined climbing to freedom. So easy. So simple. And like shipwrecked men turning to sea water from uncontrollable thirst, many have died trying. I learned here that there can be no true despair without Hope. So as I terrorise Gotham I will feed its people hope to poison their souls. I will let them believe that they can survive so that you can watch them clamoring over each other to stay in the sun.â
- Cut convo between Selina and girlfriend in wrecked house. âThis was someoneâs home. Now itâs everyoneâs homeâ. Thereâs a storm coming remember, this is what you wanted.â
- Cut Blake and Orphanage director âAny news of the commissioner? The less you know the betterâ Also cut âhowâre the boys doing?â âok, they have some tv etcâ
- Cut exposition about the bomb, âthey already know, and it will go off in 23 days regardless of Baneâs revolution or what we or the outside world choose to do.â
- Your appeasement plan might not be as practical as you thoughtâ
- Cut Blake rescuing Tate from shootout.
- Cut âThere were people living upstairs.â âRound them up for judgment!â
- BIG CUT: all peoplesâ court/exile scenes.
- Cut Gordon confronting coward Foley at his home.
- Cut Talia from helping Gordon track the bomb, now we can assume she was arrested when trying to meet the police.
- Cut Gordon getting arrested, and his subsequent âtrialâ and exile/death, ice scene.
- Cut Wayne to Talia â I wonât forget youâ âI knowâ
- Cut Wayne/Lucius âFly ok? âYeah, even without the autopilotâ
- Cut Batman lighting up bridge with batsignal made of fire.
- Cut Foleyâs son/FOley looking at flaming bat signal out the window.
- Cut Baneâs reaction: Impossible! Heâll come for her first.
- Cut Salinasâs âyou gonna wage a war to save your stuck up girlfriend?â
- Cut Batmanâs crazy screaming at Bane :WHERE IS IT? WHERE IS IT? WHEREâS THE TRIGGER? YOU WOULD NEVER GIVE IT TO AN ORDINARY CITIZEN? WHERE IS IT? Etcâ
- Cut Taliaâs âand though Iâm not ordinary, Iâm a citizenâ.
- Cut Blakeâs argument with the policeman to try and get the bus across the bridge.
- Shortened lingering shot over Foleyâs dead body.
- Cut Luciusâ ânothing like a little air superiority!â
- Cut police blowing up the bridge to stop children crossing.
- Cut Selinaâs âTake it out over the water and then eject?â B: âNo Autopilot!â
- Cut Agentâs âThatâs detonation!â
- Cut Agentâs âItâs out over the bay, itâs clear of the city!â
- Cut shots of police/children cheering/celebrating when the bomb goes off. Want to keep this a somber moment.
- Cut wide shot of bridge blown up, and nuclear cloud in the distance.
- Cut Blake throwing away his police badge
- Reordered reaction shots after the blast
- Horizontally flipped shot of Blake looking out over the Bay, to keep him looking out at the bomb blast. Also slowed shot down to linger on Blakeâs reflecting a little longer.
- Cut part of Gordonâs funeral speech to fit new sequence of shots.
- Cut conversation between Gordon and Blake about quitting the force: âYou know what you said about systems becoming shackles? I canât take it, the injusticeâ¦â etc.
- Cut âRobinâ reference.
- Cut Luciusâ autopilot scene
- Cut Alfred at Café in Florence completely. Bruce is dead.
- Rebuilt sound effects/replaced soundtrack over new scene order.
- Reordered/extended scenes of Blake entering Batcave and Gordon revealing new batsignal to better fit music.
- Added final shot of Blake in the batsuit overlooking Gotham, with Liam Neesonâs âLegend, Mr Wayneâ voiceover.
- Replaced âThe Dark Knight Rises' title card with Dark Knight Saga Recut â Part III.
- Added Bill Finger as co-creator of Batman in the end credits
- 8.5GB 720p MKV
- 4.7GB DVD
- 25GB Bluray
Editing Software: Premiere Pro CS6, Encore CS6, DVDFab, Bigasoft Audio Converter, Photoshop
BD artwork:
BD Disk Art
Special Thanks:
@Dwight Fry and INH5 for previewing and providing great ideas/feedback.