Seeing that it's been awhile since I posted to the thread, I've decided to post an update on how things are going regarding the editing. I've finished editing up to and through the Lone Islands and have began to do color correcting. Here's a semi-specific list of what has been cut/changed thus far:
-Added the deleted delirious Eustace scene
-Recolored the Lone Islands (colors are much more vibrant now, as opposed to the original which were flat)
-Cut the chase through the market, where Rhince attempts to save his wife.
-Cut 1st Lord giving the sword to Caspian, unfortunately this means that the 1st Lord doesn't get much screen time or a good conclusion either (I am open to suggestions on this)
-Cut dialogue from Eustace's narration regarding the "Green Mist" as well as the mystical sword Edmund receives.
-And finally I've edited out Gale (Rhince's daughter) from the scene where Eustace is dueling Reepicheep
Okay, so some things I have questions/want feedback for is, should I keep the deleted scene with Eustace in the film or remove it? I'm not sure if it exactly fits and I don't want to put it and mess up the flow of the film. The other question I have is, would it be a good idea to just remove the scene where Eustace is writing in his diary/narration on deck completely, as there's a lot of instances where dialogue has to be cut and ultimately even with adding sound fx it still stands out somewhat.
Anyways that's how far I've progressed with this edit, hopefully I'll get more done this week and again feedback is very welcome and appreciated.