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Awesome, thanks! I also noticed that you made a disc label to match my cover art - looks great!AvP said:DVD via BT on demonoid and soon on piratebay
Yep, it's all gone. I cut from "... a secret only fire can tell" to the exterior shot of The Green Dragon and directly from "But that would lead them here!" to "Take it, Gandalf!" I think these cuts work surprisingly well, both technically and story-wise.Haltiamieli said:If I understood correctly, the .avi version I have is already outdated with the DVD version having further edits, like cutting of the Nazgûl scenes before Frodo & co. encounter it - meaning at least the scene with wood chopping farmer Maggot? Probably also the scene with Nazgûl leaving Minas Morgul? If so, did you still retain the first camera pan of Barad-dûr (I think it's a bit unnecessary exposition at this point, especially with the problematic scream sounding like "Froooodoo")?
I remember thinking this the first few times I watched the EE, but I eventually got so used to it that I completely overlooked it when making this edit. It will be cut for the v.3, if I ever make it.Haltiamieli said:Speaking of calling names, I've never understood the "Frodo!" call after Bilbo's "Where is that boy?" The picture has already shifted to Frodo and so should have, imo, the audio - otherwise some viewer might erranously suppose, if only for a moment, that Bilbo has come to search for Frodo and is in the woods too or something like that. It's quite unnecessary anyway.
I tried to do that, but because of the music I couldn't get it to work right.Haltiamieli said:Couldn't the continuity problem you mentioned in Gandalf and Frodo's ride through Hobbiton (it did bother me a bit, call me a nitpicker if you will) be circuited if the Gandalf-and-Frodo-riding-through-the-marketplace shot after the yellow fields would be simply cut? There's no dialogue in it, and we've already seen some of the market in Bilbo's earlier monologue, so nothing really valuable would be lost.
Again, you're absolutely right. It should be easy to cut, too.Haltiamieli said:I've never really liked the way PJ chose to adapt Bilbo's speech, with Bilbo's overplayed uncertainty and the overall underlined tension building. I'm not sure if it could be cut any other way, but I'd really like a bit more tightly cut version, maybe removing "I've put this far too long" line.
Nitpick /?n?t.p?k/Haltiamieli said:There's a nice montage of walking shot before Sam's "farthest away from home" scene, but the last one irks me unbelievably much: there's big mountains on the background, in the Shire! They can't possibly pass for Green Hill Country! On the other hand, I don't know if there's any solution to this, as cutting the scene would probably shorten the montage sequence too much for it to work anymore, and computer-painting them away would need some serious SFX-wizardry. Besides, I've understood that nobody else is irked by this scene.
As mentioned, I kinda like the gag, but you might be right that the scene flows better without it. Again something that might be cut for v.3.Haltiamieli said:Broken carrot was already discussed in earlier comments, so I just use here my chance to say that I don't like it x) More than the actual joke, I find the cut from it to Sam's comment about trusting a Brandybuck and a Took is a bit, I don't know... hurried, not very well working? When watching Sharkey's edit I was somewhat surprised about how much better the scene flowed, in my opinion, without the carrot joke. But well, with or without the joke, this is not a very big thing.
The DVD version is like this.Haltiamieli said:I really like the book-wise idea of us getting the first shot of look at a ringwraith only at this point... even if I haven't seen such version yet!
You're right that the cut is a bit (or very) sudden. I don't feel too strongly either way on this issue, so I might end up reverting it to its original state. As for the bugs, I suppose those could be cut without losing anything.Haltiamieli said:But even if I agree that Merry throwing the vegetables is somewhat lame scriptwriting, I still prefer it to your way - with or without the sound of vegetable sack hitting the ground, the rushing speed of ringwraith's leaving - it nearly jumps away - is quite absurd with no other explanation than Frodo overcoming his temptation. Also it makes less sense how quickly the hobbits decide that this exactly is the moment to run. As a sidenote, I'd cut the unnecessary shot of ground crawling with bugs and such...
I briefly considered this, but figured it would be very difficult to pull off - both regarding finding appropriate musis and integrating it into the scene.Haltiamieli said:I've wondered if some "live" music/singing could be added to background noices in some scenes in the Prancing Pony. That would make the place instantly cosier, and could also serve as a nod towards book and "Merry Old Inn" sung by Frodo. But I suppose it would be very hard to add such noices believably, especially when there's some Shore music already?
You're right once again, that would be better. Should be easy to cut it that way, too.Haltiamieli said:Shouldn't Butterbur recognise Gandalf's name rightaway? "elderly chap... big grey beard, pointy hat" is a funny description, but Barliman of the book should know better - demented though he is. How about the conversation going like this:
Frodo: We are friends of Gandalf the Grey, can you tell him that we've arrived?
Barli: Gandalf?
[Frodo nodding]
Barli: Not seen him for six months.
I really wanted to cut it this way, but it doesn't work, because we only see Frodo removing the ring in the "ghost world".Haltiamieli said:Would it be possible to cut the entire "ghost/ring world" sequence from Bree? Just have Frodo accidentally put the ring on, crowd's reaction, first shot of the Ringwraiths turning around, Merry and Sam and Pippin's reactions (and maybe some menacing-looking breelander taken from other parts of the Inn sequence?), the ringwraiths speeding towards Bree, Frodo pulling the ring off and Strider dragging him away. The later scene on the Weathertop would get much added horror aspect if it would be the first time we'd see the "other side", as in the book.
Yes, it's just another case of your overnitpickiness .Haltiamieli said:I suppose this is just another case of my overnitpickiness, but I would cut the "second breakfast" scene because of the snow in the ground! There's no snow in any other scenes, and its the last day of September - a little early for snow. The scene is funny, but not invaluable.
I tried cutting that, but wasn't completely satisified with it, because the ringwraith with the torch in his face is part of the wide shot which shows that the ringwraiths have all fled.Haltiamieli said:Aragorn tossing the last ringwraith in the head with his torch is just corny beyond belief...
True, I suppose. But I didn't find another way to cut between the two scenes. And I feel that his calling out to Gandalf further emphasizes that these guys are on their own (particularly since we DON'T cut to Gandalf).Haltiamieli said:Frodo calling for Gandalf a little later doesn't make much (story-telling) sense with no cutting to Gandalf?
Well, I disagree. There are lots of poorly-delivered lines in these films, but I don't feel that this is one of them. Anyway, it's impossible to cut.Haltiamieli said:Even if Arwen pointing Aragorn with sword is cringeworthy and very unbookish, in my opinion its nothing compared to the "angel from heaven" scene you retained as her entry: "I am Arwen - I've come to help you" is quite a worthy contender for the worst-delivered line in the whole film saga.
I thought that was kinda cool, actually - that's how Arwen appears in the "shadow world" (or whatever Tolkien calls it - I'm too lazy to look it up). (Although I think only elves who had lived in the Undying Lands were visible in the "shadow world" - which excludes Arwen.)Haltiamieli said:It's mostly just strange too that Arwen's dress, hair-style etc. changes from hallucination to reality.
Well, I personally prefer my version. So thereHaltiamieli said:There's nothing we can do to the fact that Arwen is in Glorfindel's stead, and taking that in account I'd say retaining Arwen's original introduction is the lesser of the evils.
Yep. Away with it.Haltiamieli said:What is that green goo flowing from Frodo's eyes and mouth? Yuck. Once it is there, next moment it isn't... Away with it?
Why, thank you! Yes, I'll make covers for all the books - but they'll probably all look the same (but with different titles, obviously). I actually got the idea for the covers almost before I began editing (hence the "Red Book of Westmarch" title for the project) - I always thought it would look really neat with a cover in red leather with nothing but JRR Tolkien's monogram on it.Haltiamieli said:By the way, I do like your own version of DVD cover best, hopefully you'll do other "books" covers too?
That's how I am, always late anywhere I go. Sorry. :smile:kerr said:First off, thank you, Haltiamieli, for your long, detailed and insightful comments. But at the same time - darn you!
Most probably it isn't - as this is one of the things that bug only me. Just mentioned it for the sake of completeness...kerr said:I actually don't think the mountains would be too hard to remove in After Effects, but I'm not really sure it's worth the trouble.
Yep. Just wanted to mention it, as that might be pretty cool! Though it might just as easily feel only weird as no singer or music players would be shown...kerr said:I briefly considered this, but figured it would be very difficult to pull off - both regarding finding appropriate musis and integrating it into the scene.
Yeah, I feared so. Just haven't ever bother to look frame by frame when exactly the "ghost world" effects disappear when Frodo pulls off the ring.kerr said:I really wanted to cut it this way, but it doesn't work, because we only see Frodo removing the ring in the "ghost world".
Hmm, yeah... it might be. I have to watch the scene again with that in mind.kerr said:I tried cutting that, but wasn't completely satisified with it, because the ringwraith with the torch in his face is part of the wide shot which shows that the ringwraiths have all fled.
Good points, I have to agree.kerr said:But I didn't find another way to cut between the two scenes. And I feel that his calling out to Gandalf further emphasizes that these guys are on their own (particularly since we DON'T cut to Gandalf).
Yeah, that is the other way to see the scene, and obviously what PJ intended. I've just never grasped it that way, emotionally (or what ever?), while watching. Something just doesn't work for me. But if it works for others, I can safely be left rambling.kerr said:I thought that was kinda cool, actually - that's how Arwen appears in the "shadow world"
Yeah, I like simple and timeless designs. And certainly uniform red leather covers fit to your edits' style. Maybe there could, however, be some nice little blurb text on the back cover?kerr said:I always thought it would look really neat with a cover in red leather with nothing but JRR Tolkien's monogram on it.
Oh boy, I really did! The download finally finished earlier today and I've just watched it. If this part raised hopes, the second part started to claim them. After all, it's already a little trickier one, if still only a shadow of the challenges yet to come (on our viewpoint, as you've of course tackled with them already). Also, I'm really starting to buy this way of presenting the story in six episodes... I had serious doubts about how it would work overall (well, still have, but less so).kerr said:Hope you enjoy Book II
I won't make any promises, but yes, that's very likely. I'm hoping to give all six edits as a christmas present, which of course would be difficult without having finished the final part. So I'm aiming towards finishing both Book VI and the new version of Book II (and possibly III as well) in time for christmas.Captain Khajiit said:Lovely! The cuts to Bilbo's speech sound particularly good, and I won't miss Pippin's silly lines either. Thanks, Kerr!
I'm hoping to watch these all through again at Christmas. I know it's early days, but any idea whether we can expect Book VI by then?
kerr said:I won't make any promises, but yes, that's very likely. I'm hoping to give all six edits as a christmas present, which of course would be difficult without having finished the final part. So I'm aiming towards finishing both Book VI and the new version of Book II (and possibly III as well) in time for christmas.
Also, an avi of this new version is on its way, for those of you who don't feel like downloading the entire DVD.