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The Amazing Spider-Man 2 - Spark of Life

Bobson Dugnutt

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I think I've settled on a name

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But I have no idea about how to make a good looking title card to replace the one from the end credits in a convincing fashion.

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Have you looked into toning down the vibrance of the end battle which turned the contrast and vibrance to 11.
 

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Have you looked into toning down the vibrance of the end battle which turned the contrast and vibrance to 11.
I never had an issue personally with the colour grading in this film, I haven't touched the colours anywhere besides the reinstated deleted material.


Here's a final draft of the new ending, including the title.

- Cut all of the Rhino and the last action scene
- New score
- Brightened the Spider-Logo just a tad
- Added fanedit title
- Changed end titles from blue to red (just for fun)

 

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I never had an issue personally with the colour grading in this film, I haven't touched the colours anywhere besides the reinstated deleted material.


Here's a final draft of the new ending, including the title.

- Cut all of the Rhino and the last action scene
- New score
- Brightened the Spider-Logo just a tad
- Added fanedit title
- Changed end titles from blue to red (just for fun)

That looks seamless. Can't wait to see the final product.
 

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The clip looks great! Obviously, the tracking on the new logo's little off.
I've fiddled with it a little more to get it just right, and it looks a little better.

That looks seamless. Can't wait to see the final product.
I'm replacing the proxy file I was using for editing with the full encode, so it should be all done for tomorrow (fingers crossed)

Here's the final cutlist

- Reverted opening logos back to their original soundtrack, as opposed to the film's soundtrack which leads into the opening scene
- Film now opens with Norman/Harry Osbourne, but the scene has been cut to remove the scotch story and something about forgiveness
- Cut 7-minute long opening scene with the Parkers on the run and the whole plane thing
- Replaced all shots of the truck ramming the barricades and police cars. Originally it was 5 shots in 2.14 seconds, now it's simply just new 2 shots borrowed from the Blu-Ray documentary
- Cut Paul Giamatti shouting his characters name and laughing maniacly. This is now replaced with an alternate take of him grumbling
- Cut Go-Pro footage of the truck running over the cop car
- Added 2 extended shots of the truck to cover the Go-Pro shot
- Cut someone yelling "SPIDER-MAN!" and Spidey's subsequent responce
- Cut Spidey's prolonged banter as he sits on top of the truck, poking his head in while Paul Giamatti shoots him
- Moved up Spidey's "woah okay" from the cut footage to the new end of the shot
- Cut Spidey steering the truck as it rams into traffit, damaging property
- Added 2 extended shots of Max seeing the car flying towards him and Spidey's rescue of him
- Cut Spidey's "It's written on your badge" as an explaination for him knowing Max's name
- Replaced dialogue with Max saying "nobody knows my name" as Spidey grabs his badge
- Replaced 3 shots of the truck driving down the alley with the cop cars in pursuit with 1 extended shot
- Replace 60s Spidey ringtone with simple vibration
- Cut Peter lying to Gwen about the sirens and him seeing Cpt. Stacy
- Cut Spidey jumping back onto the truck saying "hello"
- Cut the truck's wiper fluid spraying onto Spidey
- Cut Go-Pro footage of the truck slamming into a bus, it was mostly covering the lens, making the shot entirely darkness
- Added 2 alternate angles of the truck crashing to replace Go-Pro footage
- Cut Spidey whistling the 60s theme
- Cut Paul Giamatti yelling that "this isn't over Spider"
- Added Spidey saying that Paul Giamatti has "cute underwear" while Giamatti remarks he is funny
- Cut Peter Parker saying "and my folks" when Aunt May mentions she wishes Uncle Ben could've attended Peter's graduation
- remove the first "I've gotta find my aunt" from Peter (him repeating things twice is a wierd trait)
- Cut Gwen's "I break up with you" x2, we get it enough in her other lines, we don't need it spelt out to us
- cut a bit of the Spidey-Sniffles
- RCut scene of Aunt May trying to enter Peter's room while he removes his costume
- Cut scene of Peter arguing with Aunt May when trying to wash his costume
- Max's apartment and his wierd shrine to Spider-Man, we get enough that he likes Spider-Man in the elevator and the VO during the later montage.
- Cut Max daydreaming of yelling at Alistair Smythe for joking about being Spider-Man
- Max's fake party thing in the elevator
- Max's tooth gap filling in during the Electro transformation
- Cut any mention of Peter's parents while he and Harry Osborn are skipping rocks
- cut "you don't have to explain any of it to me" during the rock skipping
- Peter "Just one Spider-Man, or woman we don't really know...for sure" bad delivery of a bad joke
- cutting a bit of the flirty dialogue stuff between Gwen and Pete
- trimming down the whole stalker dialogue so its made less creepy
- Spidey calling Electro "sparkles" and some dialogue from him talking about anger or something
- recut Electro being hit with the truck using some extended shots
- Electro "it's my birthday, so i'm gonna light my candles"
- added an extended shot as Spidey flips over the cop car
- added 2 extended shots as Spidey webs the cop car in front of the staircase
- Cut scene of Peter assembling the wall of clues and leads regarding the disappearance of his parents
- cut the Youtube scientist and simply have Peter experiment with the batteries
- replace 60s Spidey ringtone with simple vibration when he wakes up in the garage
- Added deleted scene of Felicia Hardy greeting Peter at Oscorp, followed by Gwen entering soon after
- Harry "Does whatever a spider can", bad delivery and spelling it out too much
- Cut Electro commenting on all the Oscorp tech at Ravencroft
- Cut Electro "you do realise this prison runs on electricity...etc."
- Cut Dr Deutsch Sterotype "who are you?" and the response "I'm Electro"
- Cut scene of Aunt May discovering Peter's investigative wall in his bedroom and that whole thing
- cut Harry's "everyone wants my money"
- Cut Peter mentioning his parents when venting to Gwen that everything is falling apart
- added Gwen getting accepted to Oxford and Peter sitting on a rooftop peacefully thinking about Gwen instead of...
- Cut scene of Peter throwing a temper tantrum in his room and throwing his father's calculator against the wall
- Color corrected scene of Harry being fired from Oscorp to make it appear earlier in the day
- Removed scene of Peter entering the subway to investigate his father's secret lab
- Added deleted scene of Gwen visiting Peter's house to inform him that she has been accepted into Oxford
- Cut all shots of Peter watching the recorded message his father left behind
- Edited all shots of Harry breaking into Ravencroft into one cohesive montage
- Re-edited all audio present the scene of Harry breaking Electro out of Ravencroft, allowing it to flow as its own standalone scene
- Cut Dr Deutsch Sterotype from Harry's Ravencroft visit and the dialogue refering to Electro by name
- Cut everything at Ravencroft after Electro kills everyone in the room as he floats around
- Cut Peter leaving the subway while listening to a voicemail Gwen left him saying that she's leaving for Oxford
- Cut Electro: "Remember me?" to Menken, I suppose somehow he saw him while at Ravencroft, unlikely though
- Cut Harry: "Am I right? (right as rain)" "Grant me a wish" "That's not the answer we were looking for" "Welcome back to the bonus round, fairy godmother"
- Added extended Goblin birth scene, but replacing low-FPS shots with unused shots from other sources to maintain the same scene length
- Added deleted scene of SWAT team members guarding the elevator exit with Menken, but not the Pumpkin Bomb exploding
- Added deleted scene of Peter returning home only to be informed by Aunt May that Gwen stopped by earlier to say she was leaving for Oxford
- Added shots of Gwen in a cab on the bridge from an earlier scene where Peter is listening to Gwen's voicemail
- Cut Gwen telling her cab driver to stop the cab, as well as the cab driver responding with "Lady, I ain't even moving!"
- Cut everything refering to the plane crash that is about to happen over NYC
- Added deleted scene of Felicia talking to the Green Goblin in the now destroyed Oscorp building, this audio in this scene has been completely redone
- Cut everything with Aunt May in the hospital during the climax
- Trimmed Harry's realisation that Spider-Man and Peter Parker are the same person
- Replaced 2 half second shots of the Goblin lunging at Spidey with one new single second shot (from BTS Doco)
- Added 2 extended shots to replace one shot of the Goblin's stunt double being clearly visable
- Cut Harry and the man in black at Ravencroft discussing the Sinister Six and Rhino
- Removed the final battle with Rhino, he only appears in the news report on TV discussing rising crime rate
- Rescored last scene of Peter looking at the Spidey mask with a new track that leads into the end credits
- Added "Spark of Life" title card to the Spider-Logo at the beginning of the end credits
- Changed end credits sequence from blue to red (I think it looks cool)
- added faneditor credit during end-credits
 

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Already, this is so much more tightly paced and edited like a genuine action sequence rather than a clusterfuck of quick shots.
 
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