Just finished a rough cut of my Rogue One edit. It's rough because I'm no professional editor for a reason, and the edit shows that in a couple key scenes. However, I think I improved the film. Some various things I cut:
*No CGI Tarkin
*No CGI Leia
*No Darth Vader
*No tentacle monster
*No C-3PO and R2-D2
*No lingering shot of blue milk
*No horrible iMovie stock text title card
*No "He doesn't like you either" cantina guy
*No one says the words "Rebellions are built on hope" in that order
*No Jyn Erso speech to the Alliance (I thought this was too cheesy)
*A couple of short space battle sequences were cut (These get too excessive)
*Saw Gerrera is only at the beginning and when everyone visits Jedha
*Riz Ahmed's character is seen for the first time when Cassian meets him
*Admiral Ackbar doesn't say "May the force be with you Rogue One" (Didn't fit with the ending)
*No scene of Cassian talking to his informant on the asteroid station they were on
*The ending is now Cassian and Jyn hugging on the beach and the blast encompassing them
Some of these changes are questionable, I understand, but I felt the movie catered far too much to major Star Wars fans, and left the general audience in the dust. With no context, a man with a cape, weird samurai helmet, and a red laser sword barging in to kill off a ton of the heroes, after all the main characters die is extremely bizarre and doesn't fit at all. So while I do like a few of the scenes I omitted, I really wanted to make this film into something a non Star Wars fan can enjoy from minute 1 to the end credits.
I didn't add a crawl, and I'm debating whether I should or not. The problem is that I've removed nearly every bit of fan service, and putting a crawl in where one didn't even exist in the first place would contradict that. But on the other hand, it would greatly help out people who have no idea when this film takes place.
As for the ending, trying to cut around CGI Tarkin and have the last shot be Jyn and Cassian hugging is much more difficult than I thought. I'll work this out sometime soon, but right now my ending just jolts around and is super noticeable.