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Hi there. Sent you a private message. Thanks for your interest!Hi where can I watch your version?
Please read the forum rules. Thanks for your interest in this excellent edit.Hi where can I watch your version?
Thanks very much for your feedback.As a follow-up to my prior comment, I have watched a portion of it. I really like what you did with the use of subtitles that allows the audience to understand that Syfo-Dias was the one who secretly ordered the army with knowledge of the senate. This was a simple, but clever solution to a glaring plot hole.
This is not a criticism against you, but there are still a few plot holes remaining that should be clarified within the movie. If possible, we should get some dialogue from Sidious indicating he secretly approved the clone project previously with senate support. This could possibly be done at the end of the movie while he is talking with Dooku (who also was apparently involved). This would require some sort of voice generating software to replicate the voice of the actor McDiarmid with 1 - 2 extra sentences. I personally would not know how to do this, as this type of editing is far beyond my capabilities.
The other major issue I had was that the jedi were very quick to use the clone army. This makes them look foolish to use a military that they know nothing about. However, some additional dialogue could resolve this. For example, either Yoda or another Jedi could indicate they accepted the use of the clones given their desperate situation with a massive droid army leaving them without much of a choice.
I do know in other movies editors were able to use voice generators and deepfakes in movies. If those could be incorporated into this movie by adding a maximum of 4 extra sentences of additional dialogue, it could close the biggest holes left in the movie.
I have liked what I saw from you so far. Heck, there could be a more simple solution that the ones I mentioned.
Sent a PMWow!! Can I also see this faboulous edit of yours please? Can you also PM me?