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That is some great feedback on your choices - thanks. I can definitely live with your edits, as I said. I prefer this one overall to SOS and the original. The ending is way less obnoxious. I guess the guest appearance of Jabba could really be fixed for me by removing his starting the race by spitting a frog at a gong.
To me, you actually rectified most of the Jar Jar problem with the exception that I think his conversation with Padme as she cleaned R2 was probably unnecessary (she took the handmaiden disguise all the way). I think your intent was to intro the fact that he is Gungan and that they have a "Grand Army."
I can definitely get on board with not revealing Sidious until much later.
Hopefully, I will be able to start downloading more of the edits on this site as I learn how things work. I look forward to reviewing other edits in the future.
To me, you actually rectified most of the Jar Jar problem with the exception that I think his conversation with Padme as she cleaned R2 was probably unnecessary (she took the handmaiden disguise all the way). I think your intent was to intro the fact that he is Gungan and that they have a "Grand Army."
I can definitely get on board with not revealing Sidious until much later.
Hopefully, I will be able to start downloading more of the edits on this site as I learn how things work. I look forward to reviewing other edits in the future.