The "talking heads" was extremely well done.
Again, getting seasoned actors, with depth and gravitas in their delivery, aided immeasurably.
The opening CGI, on the other hand, particularly near the 30 second mark, was harsh, bright, and utterly fake looking.
I'm thinking almost any editor here could have softened that and made it appear more believable.
As far as barking at Paramount, you are not reasoning this out. (Viacom, I believe, owns Paramount)
Movie execs don't give a damn about decent storytelling.
They want teenage asses (male) buying tickets.
That translates into - "Make it loud" - "Make it dumb" - "Flash some tits n ass"
Witless studio honchos aren't totally blind. They pay attention right quick to low attendance.
Axanar has a modest budget ($650k), yet a lot of heart.
I am sure I am not alone in hoping, when Axanar is released, a roomful of Paramount flunkies will go, "What the hell?"