I'm going to take the contrarian position: I think the "to-do list" scene works better with the checklist. It helps to separate the several vignettes, gives you information about the gang Spider-Man beats up, and has the Lobot joke, which might be more hilarious to me than anyone else.
I certainly appreciate macmilln going back and doing some refinements on his edit, but I think I'll stick with V1 on my media server.