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Personally, I think you handled it. My only note is that the cut from Swanwick back to Superman/Lois is a bit jarring. The audio editing needs to transition better, but I can't think of a suggestion as to how to do that.Here's an expanded update of the rearranged scenes leading up to Superman's first encounter with Zod. TinyBreadMouse brought up the issue that the General might not have enough motivation to release Superman, and this update aims to fix that.
The difference in audio is from actually in the original. But it becomes less than ideal because now where the cuts fall, after a loud scene, now there is only one transition between the holding room and the viewing room, rather than back and forth 3 or more times making your ears get used to the reason for the difference. The fix is probably easy. Could just add the ambience from the viewing room into the holding room so they match.Personally, I think you handled it. My only note is that the cut from Swanwick back to Superman/Lois is a bit jarring. The audio editing needs to transition better, but I can't think of a suggestion as to how to do that.
1. Changed Audioslave music from scene with Clark “borrowing” clothes.
1. Zod dies on impact to the ground, no heat vision neck snap.