At work right now, so I can't see your clips (I'll watch 'em when I get home), but I'm very interested to see how you managed to fit "Clone Cadets," "Rookies," and "ARC Troopers" into one movie without it feeling choppy.
I'm working on a similar series of movie edits for my brother, and my Ep. I (clocking in at 89 minutes) is "Cat and Mouse," "Hidden Enemy," the Cristophsis scenes from the movie, "Clone Cadets," and the Ryloth scenes from "Supply Lines" (the intent being that my Ep. II will be built around the Ryloth trilogy). I wanted to include "Rookies" and "ARC Troopers," as you have, but I'm saving the former for Ep. II and the latter for Ep. III, since I really couldn't figure out how to wedge them in there with so little passage of time.
(Not trying to steal your thunder by any means. I don't plan on releasing my edits, as they're pretty strongly tailored to my brother's personal preferences - no Boba Fett, no Hutts, no Aurra Sing, Anakin never meets Grievous, etc. - and yours sounds much more comprehensive, so I have no real desire to "compete" with your edits with what is really just a watered-down version of the same thing!)