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Feedback for post 1
I really like the shortened funeral scene you came up with. My only feedback on that 9ne is a request to retain the drums. They are super present, drop out when the cut happens and then come back in when we see the dancers.
T'Challa's UN speech feels right here. I wonder if you could postpone the "one year later" text until a moment or two after he is done speaking. That would help the viewer take in his final words.
The mining ship feels rushed. This may be due to the audio edits. The audio during the sirens scene is a bit jumpy feeling and sound alike to doesn't quite fit together.
Ramonda and Okoye feels edited due to the intensity of the scene that ramps up without explaination. Is it absolutely necessary to remove Ramonda stripping Okoye of her rank? I can't see Okoye ever quiting.
I really like how you shared all of these. Aspiring editors would be wise to take note of your process here. Fantastic way to get feedback and to streamline the process!
I really like the shortened funeral scene you came up with. My only feedback on that 9ne is a request to retain the drums. They are super present, drop out when the cut happens and then come back in when we see the dancers.
T'Challa's UN speech feels right here. I wonder if you could postpone the "one year later" text until a moment or two after he is done speaking. That would help the viewer take in his final words.
The mining ship feels rushed. This may be due to the audio edits. The audio during the sirens scene is a bit jumpy feeling and sound alike to doesn't quite fit together.
Ramonda and Okoye feels edited due to the intensity of the scene that ramps up without explaination. Is it absolutely necessary to remove Ramonda stripping Okoye of her rank? I can't see Okoye ever quiting.
I really like how you shared all of these. Aspiring editors would be wise to take note of your process here. Fantastic way to get feedback and to streamline the process!