Masirimso17 said:
kinda ruins the “stars to Destroyer to DS reveal” shot.
I know what you mean. I considered removing the slow reveal star destroyer shot but it's such an awesome shot I wouldn't want to.
Masirimso17 said:
Also maybe font for “Thirteen years later” could be adjusted? I don’t know why but it looked off.
It's close enough. Here is a comparison with "A long time ago" done in the same font...
I think it's just looking off because it's against a starfield, against a moving background and in the middle of the movie... although doing that comparison makes me realise I forgot one of the four dots
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DigModiFicaTion said:
the drastic difference between the sudden music changes from the movie. Perhaps if you take out the new empire theme and just have the tie noise and some rumble for the destroyers it would blend better?
Oh really? I thought it was a smooth sound with one fading out and another coming in. I'm not keen on removing the Empire theme but that idea could work.
DigModiFicaTion said:
New thoughts. What if the scene played out in this order:
Jyn looks up > tie fighter screams across screen > sd emerges from shadow > zoomed ds scene > far custom shot (no panning down) with 13 years later text (honestly not a fan of the on screen text) > Krennic and troopers arrive on sd bridge.
So move from close, to far away instead? Nice idea and worth a try.
The onscreen text is unavoidable, unless we cut to Jyn waking up before the DS. Which is something I originally wanted to avoid because she isn't important until the Rebels discover her link to Galen. I'll have to decide which I dislike the most, cutting to adult Jyn for no goddamn reason (which neatly achieves the skip forward in time visually), or having un-SW like text on screen... hmmm.
DigModiFicaTion said:
Do you plan to animate the tiny star destroyers and the DS dish?
The SD, the dish (plus the shadow on and from the dish), the DS itself and the light on it are already animated but due to the vast scale they don't and shouldn't move much.
addiesin said:
the problem with it is inherent in the source. The movie starts for two minutes then restarts thirteen years later. The original film had no crawl to explain the information in the introductory few minutes. It seemed a weird choice to me even in the theatrical, like did nothing happen for thirteen years that would have been relevant to her character? How did she separate from Saw? Etc.
Could the intro be incorporated into the crawl and skipped entirely? Maybe not for this edit, you've already put a lot of work into this scene and the crawl separately. But it's something to think about, losing the time jumps would be more Star Warsy.
I totally agree on all of that but R1 is what it is and I don't think cutting a 7-minute scene that sets up 3 of the already sketchily setup characters is going to improve the film unfortunately.
Food for thought. Thanks all
. In other news, the opening crawl footage is all completed and ready to go (just no actual crawl yet).