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I'm editing Riddick (2013) and positioning it as a sequel to Pitch Black (2000) rather than the third movie in the series. This movie will be called "Riddick: Mercenary Station P7". The planet doesn't have a name (aside from "not Furya"), but the mercenary station is called "P7", so I'm going to work with that.
Primary changes
- Remove Necromonger framing story.
- Remove as much of the misogyny as possible.
- Dog lives.
- Added FE warning.
- Changed music in first scene.
- Removed Riddick strangling creature.
- Improved quality of voice-over.
- Removed Karl Urban's credit.
- Added custom title.
- Added dedicated credit for David Twohy.
- Removed flashback to Necromonger storyline.
- Removed the "back to my roots" scene (keeping the voice-over, just removing the visuals).
- Removed the "dominance" scene (wasn't present in the theatrical cut anyways; mostly removing because the lighting isn't great).
- Removed Riddick grabbing dog. Dog gives up the golf ball peacefully on the second ask.
- Added music when Riddick activates the beacon.
- Removed the prisoner/slave execution.
- Added music during "long night" (soundtrack & diagetic)
- Removed Riddick's creepiness in the bathroom.
- Shortened Dahl's grooming scene considerably.
- Removed some creepiness with Santana when Dahl leaves the bathroom.
- Removed fight between Santana and Dahl. It still happens, we just don't see it.
- Dahl interrupts Santana and punches on "Whor-" instead of letting him finish his sentence.
- Removed "I don't fsck guys..." line.
- Removed Vargas being condescending to Dahl re: power nodes.
- Changed music for "Dahl, get your sniper rifle".
- Changed music for "Look south...".
- Removed "retard bingo".
- Changed music for "Box boy..." (Riddick capture).
- During capture scene, dog escapes instead of being killed by Santana.
- Removed Dahl painting toe nails during interrogation.
- Added flashback to Johns Jr's death from Pitch Black
- Removed "dead animal pickup...balls deep...sweet-like...only cause she asked me too...etc."
- Removed "any special requests?" .
- Removed "matches your nipples" .
- Removed Lockspur's "I know what they are" line.
- Removed "...is that before or after I'm supposed to fsck him?"
- Changed music during Space Harleys.
- Removed Riddick's Space Harley barrel roll (he still burns the creatures, but in a more believable way).
- Changed music during "ground game".
- Changed music during Riddick's final scene on the cliff, and compressed the scene slightly.
- Dahl still rescues Riddick, but without the, "I need to ask you something" bit. Movie ends here.
- Removed spaceships-in-the-sky epilogue.
- Removed Necromonger postscript.
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