Kikanator96 said:
I tried the bookman font that I can get in premiere but I personally don't like it as much.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1jjBHRpVdkTE-lkDkglY5hAQ6JokOz9ze/view?usp=sharing
You could get it to match better with the font of the film. Maybe
these credits aren't Bookman, or a different variation of it? I personally would just strive for consistency, but the "Hollywood" font you had before isn't a 'problem' unless you think so.
Kikanator96 said:
Can you tell me the name of the song at 24:58? I'll see if I can have it slowly fade in before the scene transition.
Don't know why you couldn't do this yourself... But it's
Tanya Tanning Butter Advertisement from the soundtrack.
Kikanator96 said:
I didn't change the films' aspect ratio. It is like this so that the 4:3 scenes can play. I don't know if I can do it like you want me to do, unless I nest all the black bar scenes and put them in their aspect ratio, but the final aspect ratio of the video would still be 1920x1080.
I didn't say you changed the film's aspect ratio, but you exported in 16:9 (1920x1080) when the film is widescreen (1920x800), so there's letterboxing. The film already had 4:3 scenes in it, that were letterboxed in the widescreen - stick to that, it's better. The final aspect ratio shouldn't be 1920x1080, it should be the same as the film was originally in 1920x800.
Kikanator96 said:
I personally disagree about removing the Sharon Tate scenes. I think they do serve a purpose.
I'd have to revisit the edit to be sure, which I'll do once you make some more of these changes, but if you "think they do serve a purpose" in your edit, please elaborate on what that is.
Kikanator96 said:
The flashback with the hippy girl isn't so bad to me. We see the question then later the rest of the exchange. It isn't repeating or anything. I don't think they can be edited together anyway since the second part enters with a j-cut.
It's not "so bad" but it's unnecessary. And I went back and looked at both clips, none of which seem to have much of a J-cut, not that it would matter anyways, you could just mask over the audio with a bit of ambient noise from the rest of the scene (of which there's lots). I think it'd be way better if the second scene was just "I remember you - hippie girl, fifty cents." without the other scene we just saw ~twenty minutes ago interjecting. This is something that's probably hard for you to notice, as you're familiar with the edit and the 'flow' of it (happens to me as well), but it's jarring to me and I think it would be to other viewers.