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To summarize: i loved the narrative you put together. The story flowed well. Great thoughts. Here and there i would’ve insert some more scenes e.g. the planning for the break in to get the methylene and the first observation of the compound. Walter son is a sidekick, thats unfortunate, the connection between these two isn’t existent in this cut. Especially the moment where he stands up for him in the store. This would have also worked great as a stepping stone for his growing self-confidence since he started cooking meth and ultimately walking into the house of tuco salamanca and gets his money. - the custom break in scene with the music from a later season didn’t work for me. - Absolutely loved the ending music from radiohead. Perfect fit! Minor thing: as mentioned the credits that got displayed when walter visited in his RV after getting his money back from tuco. That took me really out of it. Audiowise: as mentioned before, the music is often louder than the dialog. i had to adjust the volume several times on my speaker system.

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