Thank you, that honestly makes me feel a lot better
I am working on another grade, but I'll stick with the second one for now.
Now, here a few changes I have in mind-
-Removed Hoskin’s character entirely meaning all scenes that had him talking, thus getting rid of the whole ‘raptor/military’ subplot. (You only now see him in the background a few times).
-Removed Zach and Grey’s parents’ divorce subplot, as well as the parents themselves until the very end.
-Removed the ‘romance’ between Owen and Claire, as well as their one kiss.
-Replaced the opening music to that of JP 3’s music.
-Added a new Jurassic World Logo with the original 1993 jungle theme.
-Removed the theatrical JW logo in response to the above change.
-After the logo, we now start with the plane landing on Costa Rica.
-Removed Claire’s line ‘Welcome to JW’ (Roll credits!)
-Removed Larry’s soda falling into the trash without any spilling
-Removed the line from Owen about ‘siblings’ since the Indominus had one itself.
-Removed one shot showing the Indominus’s eye partially in it’s cage, thus giving a bit more mystery to what it looks like.
-Removed the monorail scene with Grey taking about the divorce emails.
-Added the deleted scene with Larry discussing how the Indominus camouflaged.
-Added the deleted scene where Zach and Grey begin there long journey back, giving more character growth.
-Added a blazing siren sfx to the pterodactyl attack scene.
-Replaced the final T Rex roar with a more triumphant one.