Thanks a lot for this great review and for taking so much time and thought. You are right: Loomis is all about drama in RZ's version and not professional at all. What I removed was even worse.
The bitch thing: yes, several people have already mentioned that she is still no bitch, but again, compared to the original, she much more is. In my version I find her totally self centered, she pities herself and her losses, but she does not take real interest in Michael. I think, she only gave that photo to him, because Loomis was present, but that's pure speculation of course. And while watching a movie the many times you do while editing it, I might have lost the sense of "truly" watching it like an audience does.
The eye-poking scene: I actually cut this as much as I could. There is a flaw in the main movie, when his eyes are really poked out. A quite bloody scene. But in the next scene, he has no blood on his face and not even his eyes are swollen, hurt or red. So from what I tried, he just presses Loomis' head until he falls down, hurt and unconscious. If it still does not seem that way... damn!
As for the ending after the ending: well, I thought the true ending was rather expectable and boring, so I wanted to give it a fresh start by interrupting it with my credits. My test audience loved that.
Anyway, great input! That is exactly what I need. Once again, thanks for taking the time. Guys like you make fan editing worthwhile.