This edit is very good, great work fairfriend!
Many of the scenes I saw in the original on first viewing were terrible and I was constantly rolling my eyes. But in fairfriend's edit they hit harder and I can take them seriously. They have actual weight to them. I'm not doubting them.
I was thrilled to see how this edit fixed so many bad story and editing choices. It fixes a lot of character problems I noticed with the original, such as dialogue or actions that made Major look weak (ex: the ending of the sequence when she fights the guy in the water, which was thankfully removed) or characters performing actions that didn’t make sense or were unnecessary (like the suicide in the interrogation room).
Amazing what a good edit can do, really saves this film. I'll have to look more closely for all the changes, I got the sense a lot of things were tightened up, like removing the first shot of "the hacker" from the opening sequence, removing the consent stuff. It all adds up. The film is actually enjoyable to watch now.