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Friday the 13th [raymix] Series (12 films + documentary & soundtrack) V 2.0

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Main Project Intentions & Info:
This project aims to bring stronger continuity, tighter editing & improved pacing to all 12 films in the Friday the 13th movie series.
I've worked out a new timeline that makes everything easy to follow, instead of being the confusing mess it's always been.
On-screen dates have been added so that everything tracks out. Also, each film now happens on a real Friday the 13th, except Pt.s 3 & 4, which wouldn't.
Each film now opens with the classic cue, Overlay of Evil playing over the production logos & ends with a short post-credits scene.
Opening credits & recaps are removed & a new "A (directors name) Film" credit has been added to the beginning of each film.
New title cards replace the old ones, bringing visual continuity to the series. Each film's title card also closes the film, appearing before the end credits.

I've made extensive alterations to each film, slashing together my ideal versions.
Check the full changelist for each film below.
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NEW!- Introducing Version 2.0:
This is a major update for all 12 films, the documentary, the soundtrack & the artwork.
My editing skills have come a long way in the two years since I first released this series.
As this project was my first public release, I always knew I'd return to update it. So, here we are & here it is.
I've made additional alterations to each film, sometimes doubling the original changelists. I've also made many fixes to my original changes.

This update brings this entire project up to my current standards with improved audio/video & much more extensive editing.
This thread has been updated with all the current info, but for a layout of the 2.0 updates, changes & tech specs, check out this post.

Version 2.0 absolutely decimates 1.0 in every way- Video, Audio & Editing.
I really hope that everyone who has enjoyed my work will update.
To check your version, look for a V 2.0 during my opening production logo.
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Sources Used:
All 12 films are sourced from the 2020 Shout! Factory bluray boxset, featuring 4K sourced scans of Pt.s 1-4 & new 2K scans of JGtH & JX.
I'm using the unrated cuts where available- Pt.1 UNCUT, JGtH UNRATED & F13'09 KILLER CUT.
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The Changes:
The changes are listed in chronological order, scene-by-scene.
No hows or whys are given, but feel free to ask me about anything. I'd love to talk all about it!

FRIDAY THE 13TH
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Friday the 13th Changelist
SOURCES USED:
Main-

-Friday the 13th- Uncut (Shout! Factory bluray, 2020)
Additional-
-Friday the 13th Soundtrack (Waxwork Records remaster, 2014)
-Sound Effects (freesound.org & youtube.com)

CHANGES: (based on the UNCUT version)
PRODUCTION CREDITS-
-added the Fanedit.org logo
-added my production logo.
-scored the Paramount logo & director credit with Overlay of Evil.
-new "A Sean S. Cunningham Film" credit.
OPENING-
-new music continues over the opening scene.
-slight slo-mo on the opening pan-down shot.
-removed the "1958" text.
-added "Friday, July 13th 1969" text.
-white-out as the girl screams.
-cut the freeze-frame & zoom-in on the girl.
TITLE CARD-
-new title card.
-edited the Main Theme to match the new title.
-added sound effects during the new title.
-removed the opening credits.
ANNIE CATCHES A RIDE-
-cut the 1st shot of Annie so that both pre & post-title scenes open with a pan-down.
-removed "Preset Day" text.
-added "Friday, July 13th 1975" text.
-cut Annie talking to the dog.
-cut a shot of Enos helping Annie into the truck.
-cut Enos hesitating to tell Annie he thinks she should "Quit".
-removed the dates & events from Enos' story that don't align with my new timeline.
-switched two shots of Annie while Ennis tells the history of the camp.
-cut some of Enos' "Dumb kid" dialog.
-shortened the shot of Annie after she says "At least I'm not afraid of ghosts."
-Annie's laugh is heard over the shot of Ennis smiling.
ANNIE IN THE JEEP-
-cut Annie's "When you've had a dream this long..."
FUN BY THE LAKE-
-shortened the shot of Alice & Bill getting up from sunbathing.
SNAKE IN THE DORM-
-removed this entire scene.
COP TROUBLE-
-cut the group trying to explain that they're just getting the camp set up.
-cut the cop riding down to the lake to turn around & drive away.
JACK & MARCIE-
-color corrected the lightning flashes.
-shortened Marcie's 'Fear of Storms/Bad Dream' story.
-added additional thunder sounds before Jack & Marcie decide to go inside.
-cut Jack & Marcie getting into bed.
-shortened Jack & Marcie's sex scene.
-shortened a shot of Jack & Marcie cuddling.
-cut away from the Monopoly game after Brenda says "Alice draws 1st blood."
-shortened the last shot of Jack.
-shortened the shot of Marcie running to the restrooms.
-shortened the shot looking in from outside the restroom.
-added a splat sound when Marcie gets axed.
STEVE AT THE DINER-
-cut this entire scene.
BRENDA'S DEMISE-
-shortened Brenda brushing her teeth.
-cut Brenda lighting candles in her cabin.
-Brenda gets up after hearing Jason's first cry for "Help" instead of ignoring it.
-added the second cry for "Help" after Brenda gets up.
-longer beat between one of Brenda's "Where are you"s & "Hello"s.
ALICE & BILL INVESTIGATE-
-cut Alice standing around & then playing the guitar by herself.
-faster cut after Alice & Bill leave together.
-extended the duration of black frames after the power goes out.
-cut Bill gathering everything needed to light the lanterns.
-cut Bill lighting the 1st lantern.
-fade-in on Bill lighting the 2nd lantern.
-shortened the shot of Bill putting on his rain poncho.
-faster cut after Bill leaves Alice asleep on the couch.
-shortened the final shot of Bill for a tighter cut into the next scene.
ALICE MAKES COFFEE-
-cut this entire scene.
ALICE FINDS BODIES-
-Alice takes faster action after Brenda comes through the window.
ALICE MEETS MRS. VOORHEES
-cut Pamela saying the murders happened the year "after" Jason drowned.
-cut some of Pamela's dialog about Jason's death.
ALICE HIDES & IS FOUND-
-cut Alice looking at Brenda's body before turning the light out.
-several cuts for a faster, more brutal fight between Alice & Pamela.
-cut Pamela's silly slapping attacks.
ALICE RUNS & HIDES-
-we don't see Pamela speaking for Jason. (it's really him!)
-altered the pitch of Pamela's Jason voice to sound more like a boy.
-added a cue from Alice Runs to Light as Alice hides in the cabin.
FINAL SHOWDOWN-
-cut Alice grinning after the decap.
-shortened the shot of Alice kneeling by the lake.
ALICE AT THE HOSPITAL-
-cut this entire scene.
END CREDITS-
-added the title card before the credits roll.
-new music over the end credits. (The Last Fight & The Chop to the End)
POST-CREDITS-
-added a shot of the lake, cut earlier.
-added my production logo to the end.
-added a cue from the track Overlay of Evil.

ORIGINAL RUNTIME-
-95 mins.
TIME CUT-
-19 mins.
TIME ADDED-
-1 min.
FINAL RUNTIME-
-77 mins.












FRIDAY THE 13TH PART 2
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Friday the 13th Part 2 Changelist

SOURCES USED:
Main-

-Friday the 13th Part 2 (Shout! Factory bluray, 2020)
Additional-
-Friday the 13th Soundtrack (Waxwork Records remaster, 2014)
-Friday the 13th Part 2 Soundtrack (Waxwork Records remaster, 2014)
-Sound Effects (freesound.org & youtube.com)

CHANGES:
PRODUCTION CREDITS:

-added the Fanedit.org logo
-added my production logo.
-scored the Paramount logo & director credit with Overlay of Evil. (F1)
-new "A Steve Miner Film" credit.
ANNIE AT HOME / RECAP-
-cut this entire scene.
-added new text that explains the previous events.
TITLE SEQUENCE-
-new title card.
-edited the Main Theme to match the new title sequence.
-added sound effects during the new title.
-removed the opening credits.
ARRIVING IN TOWN-
-added "Thursday, June 12th 1980" text to the opening shot.
-shortened the shot of Jeff & Sandra getting out of the truck.
-sound of the truck door closing is heard over the shot of Crazy Ralph watching.
-Jeff's "OK, let's call Ted." is heard over the shot of Crazy Ralph watching.
-shortened the shot of Jeff & Sandra running toward the payphone.
GOING TO CAMP-
-cut Ted's Bear & Rabbit joke.
-shortened a watching POV shot as Jeff, Sandra & Ted get back into the truck.
AT CAMP-
-shortened a shot of Paul after he rings the bell.
-cut the closeup of Ralph after Ginny drives past him.
-added a zoom-in towards the "Counselor Training Center" sign after Ginny drives past.
-shot lingers longer on the counselor training camp sign.
-Paul's dialog begins over the shot of the training camp sign.
-cut Paul saying "This place is starting to look like a Burger King."
-cut Paul saying "Contrary to what everybody hears, bears are dangerous."
CAMPFIRE STORY-
-removed the events from Paul's campfire story that don't align with my new timeline.
-moved Scott's nervous reaction to a different part of Paul's story.
-cut Paul saying "He's ready to devour. Thirsty for young blood."
-cut several black frames before Ted's masked jump-scare.
GINNY WAKES UP-
-added "Friday, June 13th" text.
MORNING EXERCISE-
-cut Mark saying "You're letting the girls show you up!"
-shortened a POV shot walking through the woods.
GOING TO CAMP BLOOD-
-cut a shot of Jeff & Sandra walking towards camera.
-cut Sandra saying "OK, let's go." as they walk through the woods.
-shortened a shot of Jeff & Sandra walking through the woods.
-cut the rest of the group telling jokes by the lifeguard tower.
-augmented the music when the foot steps out with the track Mrs. V. Watches. (F1)
-edited Jeff & Sandra's "This must be it." / "Yeah." for clarity.
-cut Jeff & Sandra finding the dead dog.
COP TROUBLE-
-cut Jeff & Sandra's dialog about the dead dog as they walk to the lake.
-added a squish sound when the cop gets hit with the hammer.
LEAVING FOR A NIGHT OUT-
-quicker camera pan before we see the shadow.
-cut the shot before we see the shadow stop short of leaving frame.
-shortened the shot of Terry walking to the lake.
-extended the shot after Terry calls out "Muffin?"
GAMES IN THE CABIN-
-replaced the shot of the deer mount with a shot of the cabin, cut earlier.
-cut the scene after Vickie says "The one with the puck..."
SCOTT GETS TIED UP-
-cut a shot of Terry chasing Scott.
-cut the shot after Terry throws her shirt into the camera.
-extended the black frames after Terry throws her shirt into the camera.
-added an electrical sound when the lights go out.
-shortened Terry looking for her knife.
VICKIE GETS READY-
-cut Vickie spraying perfume everywhere.
JASON ATTACKS-
-Jason doesn't take as long to stab Vickie.
-cut Jason dragging Vickie's body down the stairs.
GINNY ON THE RUN-
-less of Ginny standing around calling for Paul after he's attacked by Jason.
-Ginny makes a quicker escape from her car after knocking Jason over.
-cut Jason getting kicked in the balls.
-cut Ginny hiding in plain sight in front of Vickie's car.
-removed the Running Montage.
-cut the rat (?) peeing under the bed.
-shortened the shot before Ginny arrives at a small stream.
FINAL SHOWDOWN-
-combined the shots of Ginny & Pamela saying "Jason, mother is talking to you."
-Ginny takes faster action after Paul returns.
-less slo-mo on Ginny's machete chop.
-additional sound effect when Jason falls.
FINALE-
-less slo-mo on Jason's smash n' grab.
-cut the shot of Mrs. Voorhees' head.
END CREDITS-
-added the title card before the credits roll.
POST-CREDITS-
-added the shot of Mrs. Voorhees' head, cut earlier.
-added my production logo to the end.
-added a cue from the track Overlay of Evil. (F1)

ORIGINAL RUNTIME-
-87 mins.
TIME CUT-
-19 mins.
TIME ADDED-
-1 min.
FINAL RUNTIME-
-69 mins.












FRIDAY THE 13TH PART 3
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Friday the 13th Part 3 Changelist

SOURCES USED:
Main-

-Friday the 13th Part 3 (Scream Factory bluray, 2020)
Additional-
-Friday the 13th Soundtrack (Waxwork Records remaster, 2014)
-Friday the 13th Part 3 Soundtrack (Waxwork Records remaster, 2019)
-Sound Effects (freesound.org & youtube.com)

CHANGES:
OVERALL CHANGES-

-centered the frame. (it was shifted to the right for the 3D effect)
OPENING CREDITS-
-added the Fanedit.org logo
-added my production logo.
-scored the Paramount production logo & director credit with Overlay of Evil. (F1)
-new "A Steve Miner Film" credit.
OPENING RE-CAP-
-removed this entire scene.
TITLE CARD-
-new title card.
-edited the Main Theme to match the new title sequence.
-added sound effects during the new title.
-removed the opening credits.
HAROLD & EDNA-
-added "Saturday, June 14th 1980" text to the opening shot.
-removed "ax wielding" from "...attacks by the ax wielding killer."
-removed the 'Snake in the Bunny Hutch' scene.
-cut Harold using the toilet.
PICKING UP FRIENDS-
-added "Sunday, June 15th" text to the shot of the van approaching.
HEADING TO THE LAKE-
-removed any mention of Debbie being pregnant.
-fixed fluctuating volume during some of Shelly's dialog.
-cut Vera asking about Shelly's box of tricks.
-cut the group having to eat their grass when they see the cops.
CRAZY OLD MAN-
-cut this entire scene.
AT HIGGIN'S HAVEN-
-cut Chrissy saying "Wasn't this door closed earlier?"
-cut Chrissy scolding herself for worrying about the door.
-cut Debbie having to get Chrissy's attention a second time.
-cut Shelly saying "I gotta get outta here, too." as Vera drives away.
TROUBLE AT THE STORE-
-cut Shelly saying "I was great!"
BACK AT THE FARM-
-cut Chrissy having to talk Rick into staying.
-augmented the music as Jason watches from the barn with the track In the Barn.
BIKER GANG AT THE FARM-
-shortened the shot of Ali siphoning gas.
-shortened the shot of Fox walking towards the barn.
-cut back outside to the guys siphoning gas, cut earlier.
-cut Fox messing around with the saddles & canteen.
-cut to the guys with the gas before Fox goes up the ladder.
-shortened the shot of Loco going towards the barn.
-cut hay falling & Fox asking "Who's up there?" before going up the ladder.
-removed Loco's weird mumbled dialog as he goes up the ladder.
-cut Jason bludgeoning Ali's head, making his return later on more believable.
CHRISSY & RICK'S MOONLIGHT CHAT-
-cut "The quiet can be deceiving." / "What do you mean?"
-cut "than I think I am" from "To prove I'm stronger than I think I am."
HANGING OUT-
-cut some of Andy's 3D yo-yoing.
CHRISSY'S TRAUMA REMEMBERED-
-cut Chrissy's "Everything's so clear in my mind..."
-cut some dead air from Chrissy's flashback story.
-smoothed a bad music loop during Chrissy's flashback story.
-cut Chrissy's implication that Jason was more than just murderous.
MORE HANGING OUT-
-cut some of Andy & Shelly's 3D juggling.
CHILI & CHUCK IN THE BARN-
-cut this entire scene.
WET-SUIT SHELLY-
-cut Shelly going to the porch before going to the barn after scaring Vera.
-tighter cut at Shelly's scare in the barn.
VERA'S DEMISE-
-cut Vera asking "what are you doing?" as Jason aims the speargun.
-Jason doesn't take as long to aim the speargun.
-shortened the shot of Jason sauntering away.
DEBBIE IN THE SHOWER-
-changed the music after Andy is killed to the track Debbie Takes a Shower.
-cut Debbie saying "Andy is that you? Quit messing around."
-additional shower sounds to replace the dialog.
DEBBIE IN THE HAMMOCK-
-cut Debbie asking "Where's this coming from" as blood drips down.
CHUCK CHECKS THE POWER-
-cut Chuck getting scared by the taxidermied animal.
-shortened two shots so Jason's attack is faster, more intense.
CHILI'S DEMISE-
-cut Chili going up & coming back down the stairs.
-tighter cut after Jason takes the fire poker from the fireplace.
CHRISSY & RICK BACK AT THE CABIN-
-shortened the shot of the two walking toward the cabin.
RICK'S DEMISE-
-Chrissy doesn't stand outside yelling for Rick as long.
-cut some frames of the fake Rick head.
-added crunching sounds as Jason crushes Ricks head.
-removed visible wires from the eyeball pop.
CHRISSY IN THE CABIN-
-Chrissy only battles two open windows instead of four.
-the falling books don't knock Jason down.
CHRISSY IN THE BARN-
-shortened two shots of Chrissy putting the noose over Jason's head.
-shortened the shot of Chrissy rolling Jason through hay door.
-added a cue from Mrs. V. Watches as Jason swings out the door. (F1)
-added a cue from Alice at the Lake as Chrissy opens the barn doors. (F1)
-augmented the music with Alice Goes to the Lake as Jason attacks. (F1)
-added a cue from Mrs. V. Watches as Jason reaches out for Chrissy. (F1)
CHRISSY DREAMS OF JASON & MRS. VOORHEES-
-removed this entire scene.
AFTERMATH-
-cut the cops talking about Chrissy's dream.
-cut Chrissy's freakout in the police car.
-cross-fade from Chrissy being led away, to a shot of the lake.
END CREDITS-
-added the title card before the credits roll.
-moved the copyright info from the beginning to the end of the credits.
-moved the cast credits from the end to the beginning of the credits.
-re-timed the credits to match the music.
-removed the "Also Starring" & "Featuring" tags.
POST-CREDITS-
-added a shot of Jason in the barn, cut earlier.
-slo-mo on the shot of Jason in the barn.
-changed the lighting & color grading so it appears to be at night.
-re-scored the shot with the track Dead in Barn.
-added rain & thunder sound effects.
-added my production logo to the end.
-added a cue from the track Overlay of Evil. (F1)

ORIGINAL RUNTIME-
-95 mins.
TIME CUT-
-20 mins.
TIME ADDED-
-1 min.
FINAL RUNTIME-
-76 mins.












PART 4- THE FINAL CHAPTER
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Part 4- The Final Chapter Changelist

SOURCES USED:
Main-

-Friday the 13th- The Final Chapter (Scream Factory bluray, 2020)
Additional-
-Friday the 13th Soundtrack (Waxwork Records remaster, 2014)
-Friday the 13th Part 2 Soundtrack (Waxwork Records remaster, 2014)
-Friday the 13th Part 3D Soundtrack (Waxwork Records remaster, 2019)
-Friday the 13th- The Final Chapter Soundtrack (Waxwork Records remaster, 2017)
-How Long You Wanna Live Anyway by Stray Cats (from the album Rant & Rave, 1984)
-Sound Effects (freesound.org & youtube.com)

CHANGES:
PRODUCTION CREDITS-

-added the Fanedit.org logo
-added my production logo.
-scored the Paramount production logo & director credit with Overlay of Evil. (F1)
-added "A Joseph Zito Film" credit.
RECAP-
-cut this entire scene.
TITLE CARD-
-new title card.
-edited the Main Theme to match the new title.
-added sound effects during the new title.
-removed the opening credits.
AFTERMATH AT HIGGIN'S HAVEN-
-shortened the shot of the helicopter searchlight.
-added "Sunday, June 15th 1980" text to the opening shot.
-cut the ambulance arriving & the driver's dialog.
-cut the paramedic telling the other to "belt him up."
-cut Jason's hand falling off the gurney.
-augmented the score with a cue from The Meat Cleaver. (F3)
-tighter cut from the ambulances leaving to the doors opening at the hospital.
AT THE MORGUE-
-cut the first close up of the TV in Axel's office.
-longer beat before Nurse Morgan enters Axel's office.
-TV switches over faster when Axel changes the channel with the remote.
-cut some of Axel's weird cursing.
-cut some of Axel watching the workout video.
-cut Nurse Morgan breaking the bottle.
JOGGING AROUND THE LAKE-
-added "Monday, June 16th" text to the shot of Trish & Mrs. Jarvis jogging.
AT HOME WITH THE JARVIS FAMILY-
-quicker cadence on "Honey, get a haircut, hm?"
-shorter beat before "Aw, mom."
-shortened the shot of Tommy in the mask before he takes his hat off.
-cut Tommy saying "Do I have to get a haircut?"
-Mrs. Jarvis' "You're getting pretty terrific..." starts over the previous shot.
-shortened a shot of Mrs. Jarvis.
-cut Tommy saying "I just customized it."
-moved Tommy's "Thanks" to later, as he sits down.
DRIVING TO THE LAKE-
-cut the group singing in the car.
-added music coming from the radio. (How Long You Wanna Live Anyway by Stray Cats)
-tightened the editing during Jimmy & Ted's "B.J. Betty" conversation.
-cut "So, I'm a dead fuck." / "Like I said, the computer don't lie."
-removed the Roadside Graves scene.
AT THE JARVIS HOUSE-
-cut the "Jarvis Family Hug".
AT THE PARTY HOUSE-
-cut some of the groups dialog as they unpack the car.
-cut Samantha telling Sara, "I only do it with Paul."
-cut Samantha & Sara discussing the sleeping arrangements.
WALKING TO THE LAKE-
-added "Tuesday, June 17th" to the shot of the group walking.
-tight cut from Jimmy saying he doesn't "know anyone new" to the Twins arriving.
-cut the Twins saying "That's where we're going."- they were going the other way.
SWIMMING AT THE LAKE-
-Jimmy's "Oh..." is heard over the previous shot, before "We have no suits.".
-shortened the shot of Jimmy responding to the request to swim.
-cut the shot of Ted cheering after Doug jumps into the lake.
-cut a shot of Ted taking his vest off.
-cut a shot of the twins throwing their suits onto the shore.
FIXING THE CAR-
-cut Tommy saying "The only thing it could be is the cylinoid."
DANCING-
-shortened the shot of everybody slow dancing.
-cut Jimmy trying to talk to Ted & Ted ignoring him.
-Ted's "Can you believe this guy?" is heard over a different shot.
SAM'S DEMISE-
-re-timed one of Sam's calls for Paul.
-cut a shot from Sam's POV.
-cut a far-away shot of Sam.
-much shorter swim to the raft.
-cut Sam saying "I know you're out there."
-added a cue from The Meat Cleaver as Sam is killed. (F3)
BACK AT THE HOUSE-
-cut a shot of one twin signaling to the other that she wants to leave.
PAUL'S DEMISE-
-cut Paul walking to the water & taking his shoes off.
-moved a shot of the raft as Paul makes his way into the water.
-cut Paul's swim to Sam's raft shorter.
ROB ON THE HUNT-
-cut Rob finding that Jason has wrecked his stuff.
BACK AT THE HOUSE-
-swapped the scenes of Jimmy making out with Tina & Ted finding the film reels.
-cut Jimmy & Tina's chat before they start making out on the bed.
-shortened the shot panning across the living room.
-cut a shot of the projected film.
-shortened a shot of Ted laughing.
TERRI LEAVES THE PARTY-
-added more realistic thunder sound effects.
-re-scored the attack with Part 2 Main Title. (F2)
MRS. JARVIS' DEMISE-
-cut some of Mrs. Jarvis looking around the house.
-added thunder sound effects as Mrs. Jarvis screams.
GETTING READY FOR BED-
-cut Jimmy & Tina talking in bed.
-cut some of Sara looking at herself in the mirror.
TRISH & ROB-
-cut a bad shot of Rob's tent.
-cut Trish's delayed reaction after Rob finds her in his tent.
TINA'S DEMISE-
-cut some of Tina looking out the window.
IN THE SHOWER-
-shortened a shot of Sara & Doug making out.
-cut Sara getting a towel.
-shortened the shot of Sara blow drying her hair.
DOUG'S DEMISE-
-smoothed odd audio after Doug says "Who is it? Pauly?"
-shortened a shot looking at Doug through the shower door.
-added bass rumble when Jason smashes through the shower door.
-cut some frames of the fake Doug head.
-Sara reacts faster to finding Doug dead.
BACK AT THE JARVIS HOUSE-
-added an electric sparking sound when Jason rips the phone line.
-shortened the shot of Trish & Rob walking to the house next door.
ROB'S DEMISE-
-shortened the shot of Rob's flashlight shining on things.
-Jason is already attacking Rob when Trish arrives.
-moved a shot of Trish reacting to latter, as Rob tells her to run.
-cut Rob yelling "He's killing me! He's killing me!"
-Trish doesn't leave & come to back to the basement.
-Jason grabs Trish as soon as she starts to run up the stairs.
-added bass rumble when Jason's' hand breaks through the stairs.
FINAL SHOWDOWN-
-cut a shot of Tommy cutting his hair.
-replaced a haircut shot with Tommy shaving his head, cut later.
-cut a shot of Tommy shaving his head. (now used earlier)
-added a thunder sound as Tommy shaves his head & Trish fights Jason.
-added a thunder sound as Jason looks at his cut hand.
-cut some of Trish yelling "Tommy!" while he attacks Jason.
END CREDITS-
-added the title card before the credits roll.
-moved the list of characters & actors from the end to the beginning.
-added a credit for the Stray Cats song.
POST-CREDITS-
-added a shot of Jason's mask to post-credits.
-added my production logo to the end.
-added a cue from the track Overlay of Evil. (F1)

ORIGINAL RUNTIME-
-91 mins.
TIME CUT-
-16 mins.
TIME ADDED-
-1 min.
FINAL RUNTIME-
-76 mins.












PART 5- A NEW BEGINNING
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Part 5- A New Beginning Changelist
SOURCES USED:
Main-

-Friday the 13th Part 5: A New Beginning (Scream Factory bluray, 2020)
Additional-
-Friday the 13th Soundtrack (Waxwork Records remaster, 2014)
-Friday the 13th Part 5: A New Beginning Soundtrack (Waxwork Records remaster, 2018)
-Sound Effects (freesound.org & youtube.com)

CHANGES:
PRODUCTION CREDITS-

-added the Fanedit.org logo
-added my production logo.
-scored the Paramount production logo & director credit with Overlay of Evil. (F1)
-new "A Danny Steinman Film" credit.
TOMMY'S DREAM-
-cut several shots of Tommy walking through the rain.
-added thunder sound effects.
-added bass rumble at the sight of Jason's grave.
-fixed a gap in the rain sound effects.
-cut some of the grave robbers Woo's & Yee-Haw's.
-shortened a shot of the robbers digging up the grave.
-cut a shot of Tommy watching.
-cut a shot of the robbers digging.
-added bass rumble as Jason looks at Tommy.
-shortened a shot of Jason before he grabs his machete.
-added knife blade & slicing sounds as Jason pulls the machete out of the dead body.
-added bass rumble as Jason begins walking toward Tommy.
-altered the music as Jason begins walking toward Tommy.
-added a thunder sound as Jason brings the machete down on Tommy.
-added a white-flash transition from the dream to Tommy waking up.
GOING TO PINEHURST-
-added bass rumble as Tommy wakes up.
-shortened Tommy's POV looking at the guys driving the van.
TITLE CARD-
-new title card.
-edited the Main Theme to match the new title.
-added sound effects during the new title.
-removed the opening credits.
ARRIVING AT PINEHURST-
-added "Wednesday, April 11th 1984" to the shot of the van arriving at Pinehurst.
-cut the driver saying "Anytime, doll."
AT PINEHURST-
-shortened Tommy's reaction to the toy spider.
-shortened the shot of the dangling toy spider.
-shortened the shot of Tommy looking at the toy spider.
-shortened the shot of Tommy putting the mask down on his bed.
-cut Tommy getting mad at Reggie for touching his masks.
THE SHERIFF, ETHEL & JUNIOR-
-switched a shot of Tommy at the window & a shot that seems to be from his POV.
-cut Matt saying "I'll take care of it Jim."
-shortened a shot of Sheriff Jim & Matt talking.
-the sound of Ethel's motorbike fades in earlier.
-switched a shot of Tommy at the window & a shot that seems to be from his POV.
DOING CHORES-
-tighter edit from Tommy looking out the window to the axe striking the log.
-Joey doesn't stand on the porch watching Victor chop wood as long.
-removed the sound of someone saying "Hellooo" in the background.
-cut Joey telling Victor his whole life backstory.
-moved a shot so the girls call Victor an "asshole", not Joey.
-cut Joey putting the candy bar on the log & Victor chopping it.
PARAMEDICS ARRIVE-
-cut the paramedic calling the kids a "bunch of pussies."
-cut the paramedic telling Roy to get his "hands dirty."
-added a bass rumble as Roy looks up after covering Joey's body.
-re-scored with a different part of the track Roy Reacts.
VINNIE & PETE-
-the track Roy Reacts continues into this scene.
-cut Pete sounding the horn while Vinnie is under the hood.
-cut Vinnie saying the kids at Pinehurst should be killed.
VINNIE'S DEMISE-
-cut a few frames of the fake Vinnie head.
-slight speed-up on the fake Vinnie head.
PETE'S DEMISE-
-cut some of Pete trying to start the car.
BREAKFAST AT PINEHURST-
-added "Thursday, April 12th" text to the shot of Reggie setting up breakfast.
-cut Violet setting places for Joey & Victor as well as the ensuing conversation.
-cut Tommy standing around & having to be asked to get Eddie a second time.
CHOPPING CHICKEN-
-cut some of Ethel & Junior's stupid dialog.
PARAMEDICS & COPS-
-cut the shot of Roy after the cops mention a "Maniac on the loose."
BILLY & LANA-
-cut some of the "To-go order" conversation.
-shortened Lana at the mirror.
BILLY'S DEMISE-
-cut the shot of Billy knocking his coke over as he's smashed in the head.
LANNA GETS READY-
-cut Lana saying "Gurl, you are so hot."
-cut some of Lanna getting ready to go.
-cut the cat jump-scare.
-cut Lanna scolding the cat as she leaves.
LANNA'S DEMISE-
-cut the jammed car door when Lanna is attacked.
-smoothed bad audio edit after Lanna is killed.
NEXT MORNING-
-added "Friday, April 13th" to Tommy looking out the window at the apparition of Jason.
MAYOR AT THE POLICE STATION-
-cut the mayor saying "I mean, shit, Tucker" before "What the hell is going on?"
-cut the long pause before Sheriff Calvin states that he knows who the killer is.
-cut Mayor Cobb & Sheriff Calvin mentioning that Jason was cremated.
-cut the Mayor using the ashes in the ashtray as a metaphor for Jason.
-cut Sheriff Calvin throwing the ashtray after Mayor Cobb leaves.
TINA & EDDIE-
-shortened a POV shot, watching through the bushes.
-shortened a POV shot, looking up at the trees.
-shortened the first shot of Eddie after he rolls Tina's body over.
VISITING REGGIE'S BROTHER-
-cut the drive to see Reggie's brother shorter.
-replaced the frantic music during the drive with the track Tommy Alone.
-rebuilt all of the sound effects during the drive. (truck, wheels, road, wind, neon sign)
-re-scored Tommy looking at the neon light with the track Tommy Alone.
--added new footstep & sign buzzing sounds.
-shortened a shot of Tommy reacting to the oncoming headlight.
-shortened the first shot of the oncoming headlight.
-cut Junior saying "What, are you dumb or something?"
-cut Junior saying "Mamma's gonna chop you up."
-cut Junior repeating "Are you hearing me?"
-shortened the shot of the truck backing up.
DEMON IN THE OUTHOUSE-
-shortened the first shot of Demon on the toilet.
-cut Demon & his girlfriend singing to each other in the outhouse.
BACK AT PINEHURST-
-cut Pam saying "Calm down, Jake."
JUNIOR & ETHEL'S DEMISE-
-cut some of Junior riding around screaming.
-cut Ethel saying "You talk? You dumb?"
-shortened the shot of the stew pot before Ethel falls into it.
-cut Ethel's hand releasing the tomato after she dies.
PAM SEARCHES FOR THE KIDS-
-shortened the shot of the truck stopping when it breaks down.
-shortened the shot of Pam's feet as she tries to restart the truck.
JAKE'S DEMISE-
-tightened the editing while Jake tries to flirt with Robin.
-removed the exterior shot after Jake is killed.
REGGIE & PAM FIND BODIES-
-cut Pam saying "What is it Reggie? It's Pam. What's the matter?"
-Pam doesn't go into Tommy's room, instead she sees the bodies from the doorway.
REGGIE & PAM ON THE RUN-
-cut a shot, removing a continuity error with Pam's sweater.
-cut a shot of Reggie running away after they see 'Jason'.
-cut another shot of Pam to remove a continuity error.
-cut two shots of Reggie running.
-cut a shot of Pam crawling.
-shortened a shot of Pam crawling.
-shortened a shot of 'Jason' raising his machete.
-cut a close-up of Pam screaming.
-shortened a shot of Pam & Reggie approaching 'Jason' after the tractor attack.
-cut a shot of 'Jason' walking toward the barn.
FINAL SHOWDOWN-
-Pam's chainsaw attack is faster & more intense.
-shortened a shot of Pam approaching with the chainsaw.
-cut a wide shot of Pam & 'Jason' as Pam tries to restart the chainsaw.
-shortened a shot of 'Jason' looking around the barn loft.
-cut a shot of 'Jason' stepping around some hay.
-Tommy doesn't take as long to help Reggie & Pam.
AT THE HOSPITAL-
-shortened the shot of the nurse filing her nails.
-removed Tommy's murder-dream at the hospital.
-slo-mo & fade-out on the shot of Tommy after he sees the apparition of Jason.
-removed Pam going to Tommy's hospital room.
END CREDITS-
-added the title card before the credits roll.
-changed part of the End Theme to the Opening Theme.
-moved the list of characters & actors from the end to the beginning.
POST-CREDITS-
-moved the shot of Tommy's destroyed hospital room to post-credits.
-slo-mo & fade-out on the shot of Tommy's destroyed hospital room.
-added my production logo to the end.
-added a cue from the track Overlay of Evil. (F1)

ORIGINAL RUNTIME-
-92 mins.
TIME CUT-
-16 mins.
TIME ADDED-
-1 min.
FINAL RUNTIME-
-77 mins.












PART 6- JASON LIVES
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Part 6- Jason Lives Changelist

SOURCES USED:
Main-

-Friday the 13th Part 6: Jason Lives (Scream Factory bluray, 2020)
Additional-
-Friday the 13th- The Final Chapter (Scream Factory bluray, 2020)
-Friday the 13th Soundtrack (Waxwork Records remaster, 2014)
-Friday the 13th Part 6: Jason Lives Soundtrack (Waxwork Records remaster, 2019)
-Smooth Operator by Sade (from the album Diamond Life, 1984)
-Sound Effects (freesound.org & youtube.com)

CHANGES:
PRODUCTION CREDITS-

-added the Fanedit.org logo
-added my production logo.
-scored the Paramount production logo & director credit with Overlay of Evil. (F1)
-new "A Tom McLoughlin Film" credit.
AT THE CEMETERY-
-added "Thursday, September 12th 1985" to the shot of Tommy's truck driving past.
-replaced the 1st shot of Jason's headstone with an extended version of the 2nd.
-added a bass rumble when Jason's headstone is revealed.
-added a bass rumble when Tommy first sticks the shovel into the ground.
-superimposed footage from FRIDAY THE 13th PT. 4 as Tommy looks at Jason's corpse.
-lightning only strikes the fence post once instead of twice.
-removed several repeated shots after the lightning strike.
TITLE CARD-
-new title card.
-edited the Main Theme to match the new title.
-added sound effects during the new title.
-removed the James Bond homage.
-removed the opening credits.
DRIVING TO CAMP-
-cut a shot of Elizabeth in the mud.
-cut a shot of Jason looking down at Elizabeth.
-Jason doesn't take as long to walk around the car.
AT THE POLICE STATION-
-added "Friday, September 13th" to the shot of Tommy waking up in the jail cell.
AT THE CEMETERY AGAIN-
-Martin's "Some folks got a strange idea of entertainment" is over a different shot.
PREPARING FOR THE KIDS TO ARRIVE-
-shortened a shot of Megan.
-cut Megan saying "...Looking for the counselor who caused him to drown."
-Megan's "Searching for the one who decapitated his mother" is over a different shot.
-cut a shot of Megan.
PLAYING PAINTBALL-
-cut some of Stan & Larry's bickering back n' forth.
-cut the smiley face on the tree after Burt is slammed into it.
-cut Roy bumbling around in the woods.
-cut some of Roy running from Jason so that Jason doesn't seem to teleport.
AT THE POLICE STATION AGAIN-
-cut Deputy Rick explaining how a laser sight works.
AT THE CEMETERY ONCE MORE-
-cut Marvin's "fart head" line & the subsequent "Yeah!" from the kids.
MARVIN WALKS HOME-
-cut Marvin's dialog about being lost.
IN THE RV-
-cut some of Nikki & Court's PG sex scene.
-Nikki doesn't stand around holding the frayed wire as long.
-cut Court mentioning "that Jason guy."
-cut Nikki getting thrown backwards when Court takes off in the RV.
-cut Nikki telling Court to pull over & let her drive.
RV WRECK-
-added a bass rumble as Jason climbs out & stands atop the burning RV.
-improved music cue as Jason stands atop the burning RV.
AT THE POLICE STATION ONCE AGAIN-
-replaced the weird telephone ring with a normal 80's phone sound.
-cut Deputy Rick mentioning "Jason's old M.O."
TOMMY SEARCHES FOR ANSWERS-
-removed Tommy buying & flipping through the Occult books.
MEGAN AT THE POLICE STATION-
-removed 2 quick shots of Jason in the woods while Megan is balancing on the chair.
INVESTIGATING THE CRIME SCENE-
-tightened the editing when Deputy Rick shows Sheriff Garris the bodies.
AT THE CAMP-
-added music coming though Sissy's headphones. (Smooth Operator by Sade)
-added a sound effect when Sissy stops her walkman.
MEGAN & TOMMY AT THE POLICE STATION-
-cut the first time Deputy Rick tries to get Sheriff Garris to answer the phone.
-cut sheriff Garris saying "You just sit tight, Jason."
LOCKED UP AT THE POLICE STATION-
-cut Deputy Rick smashing the bug on his desk.
-cut a shot of Tommy & Megan kissing through the bars.
-cut Tommy's callback to Rick's laser sight explanation.
MEGAN & TOMMY HEAD TO THE CAMP-
-slight speed-up on a shot of Megan's car driving past.
-removed Tommy referring to Crystal Lake as Jason's "original resting place."
COPS CHECK THE CAMP-
-added a bass rumble when Sheriff Garris finds the blood splattered room.
-added a distant thunder sound as Officer Thornton checks the dock.
-added a bass rumble when the flash light shines on Jason.
-cut Sheriff Garris checking the first of the kids cabins.
-cut Sheriff Garris running to the second of the kids cabins.
-added a thunder sounds as Officer Pappas checks the bushes.
-improved the EQ of Officer Pappas gun shots.
-added additional crunching sounds as Officer Pappas' head is smashed.
-added bass to all of sheriff Garris' shotgun blasts.
-shortened the shot of Jason on the ground after Sheriff Garris shoots him.
-shortened the shot of sheriff Garris running with Jason following.
MEGAN & TOMMY AT THE CAMP-
-fixed bad audio when cutting from Megan in the dorm to Tommy on the dock.
-quicker cadence on Megan's "Daddy, please, help us!"
-added additional cracking sounds as sheriff Garris is crushed.
FINAL SHOWDOWN-
-added a thunder sound as Tommy wraps the chain around the boulder.
-removed the kids talking under the bed.
-added a sound effect when Jason drops Megan.
-Jason doesn't turn around when Megan yells for Tommy.
-cut some of Tommy's taunts at Jason.
-added a sound effect when Jason drops Megan.
-cut two shots of Tommy looking around after Jason goes under water.
-added a thunder sound as Tommy looks around for Jason.
-shortened the above shot of Tommy in the boat.
-cut the little girl asking "Is he killed?"
-cut Tommy saying "Jason's home."
END CREDITS-
-added the title card before the credits roll.
-different music over end credits. ( F13 P6 Main Theme )
-moved the list of cast & characters from the end to the beginning.
POST-CREDITS-
-moved the shot of Jason's eye opening to post-credits.
-added a bass rumble when we see Jason's open eye.
-added my production logo to the end.
-added a cue from the track Overlay of Evil. (F1)

ORIGINAL RUNTIME-
-86 mins.
TIME CUT-
-7 mins.
TIME ADDED-
-1 min.
FINAL RUNTIME-
-80 mins.












PART 7- THE NEW BLOOD
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Part 7- The New Blood Changelist

SOURCES USED:
Main-

-Friday the 13th Part 7: The New Blood (Scream Factory bluray, 2020)
Additional-
-Friday the 13th Soundtrack (Waxwork Records remaster, 2014)
-Friday the 13th Part 7: The New Blood Soundtrack (Waxwork Records remaster, 2020)
-Sound Effects (freesound.org & youtube.com)

CHANGES:
PRODUCTION CREDITS-

-added the Fanedit.org logo
-added my production logo.
-scored the Paramount production logo & director credit with Overlay of Evil. (F1)
-new "A John Carl Beuchler Film" credit.
-removed the recap.
TITLE CARD-
-new title card.
-new title sequence music. (New Blood Theme [raymix] )
-added sound effects during the new title.
-removed the opening credits.
OPENING FLASHBACK-
-removed the shot of Jason in the Lake. (he wouldn't have been there during the flashback)
-added "Friday, July 13th 1979" text to Tina's flashback.
-cut the shot where you can see a calendar with different date.
-the telekinetic dock destruction scene is faster & more intense.
-Tina doesn't cry out about what she's done until after the dock collapses.
-added a sound effect when Tina's dad is hit by the rubble underwater.
GOING BACK TO CRYSTAL LAKE-
-added "Thursday, February 12th 1987" text to the shot of Tina in the car.
BACK AT THE OLD HOUSE-
-cut Mrs. Sheppard telling Dr. Crews "You'll help her."
-cut Sandra & Russell in the van.
TINA ON THE DOCK-
-cut a shot of Mr. Shepard as Tina stares into the lake.
-added bass rumble when we see Jason underwater.
-added sound effects when Tina falls.
-re-scored part of the scene with a different part of the track Tina Summons.
-added bass rumble when Jason walks out of the water.
-cut Mrs. Shepard & Dr. Crews finding Tina on the dock.
-fade-in on Tina laying on the couch.
MICHAEL & JANE'S CAR TROUBLE-
-shortened a shot of Jane after Michael walks away to pee.
-shortened a shot of Michael walking past some trees.
-shortened the shot of Jane as she laughs at Michael's remark about being cold.
MICHAEL'S DEMISE-
-shortened the shot of Michael backing away after finding Jane's body.
-Michael doesn't run as far from Jason so that Jason doesn't seem to teleport.
TINA GOES NEXT DOOR-
-added bass hits to augment the music during Jason's POV.
-improved the sound of the music coming from the living room stereo.
-cut Russell's head popping up awkwardly for several frames in the kitchen.
-extended the shot of David exhaling his smoke.
-added an exhale sound effect.
CAMPERS IN THE WOODS-
-shortened the first sot of Daniel walking to get wood.
-additional sound effects as Daniel chops the wood.
-shortened Jason's POV as he watches Daniel gathering wood.
DANIEL'S DEMISE-
-smoothed an audio edit when Daniel is killed.
JUDITH'S DEMISE-
-smoothed an audio edit when Judith is killed.
AT THE PARTY HOUSE-
-slight slo-mo on the lake house establishing shot.
-added "Friday, February 13th" text.
-added outside ambiance to the house establishing shot.
-Eddie's dialog begins over the house establishing shot.
NICK & TINA TALK-
-Nick doesn't go investigating the snapped twig sound.
-cut Nick's "big pink elephant" dialog.
-cut Nick & Tina's kiss.
TINA LOOKS FOR NICK-
-added bass rumble as Tina stares at Melissa & breaks her necklace.
TINA WANTS TO LEAVE-
-cut Tina's badly dubbed "Mom, please" & Mrs .Shepard's "In the morning."
-shortened a shot of Dr. Crews.
-added bass rumble when Tina throws the TV.
TINA WARNS NICK-
-quicker cadence on "Did your cousin ever show up?" / "No, he didn't."
-cut Tina stuttering before saying "What does he look like?"
NIGHT SWIMMING-
-cut Sandra & Russell's talk about love & money.
PARTY HOUSE BLUES-
-cut Kate & Ben talking on the stairs.
DR. CREWS FINDS DANIEL'S BODY-
-cut Dr. Crews walking toward Daniel's body after picking up the tent spike.
-improved the EQ of the thunder sound.
MRS. SHEPARD SEARCHES DR. CREWS' DESK-
-added distant thunder sound when the tent spike is discovered.
TINA TAKES THE KEYS & LEAVES-
-cut Tina's hallucination of Jason killing her mom in the middle of the road.
--instead, she crashes when swerving to miss Daniel's broken-down car.
-cut a shot of Tina driving.
-speed-up on a shot of the car approaching camera.
-speed-up on a through-the-windshield shot of Tina driving around the corner.
-speed-up on a quick shot the car going off the road.
-swapped two quick shots of Tina for continuity.
-cut Tina trying to restart the car.
MADDY GETS A MAKE-OVER-
-cut Maddy saying "'Need a little touch-up work' my ass."
-shortened a shot of Maddie walking past the trees.
-cut a shot of Maddie's hands searching the ground for her earring.
-less slo-mo on a shot of Russell's body falling.
-added a bass rumble when Jason steps out from behind the tree.
-replaced the thunder sound when Maddie is hiding with a more realistic sound.
TINA FINDS NICK-
-cut "I just saw" from Tina's "I just saw my mom. We have to find her."
JASON ARRIVES AT THE PARTY HOUSE-
-cut Melissa letting Eddie make-out with her. (his loose underwear grosses me out)
-cut Jason's POV ducking & going around the side of the van.
-altered the 2nd of Ben's whistle sounds to sound less repeated & more distant.
-added bass rumble when Ben is grabbed.
-added additional crunching & squishing sounds as Ben's head is smashed.
-new sound effect when Jason stabs Kate in the eye with the party whistle.
TINA & NICK SEARCH DR. CREWS' DESK-
-added bass rumble when Tina finds the newspaper clippings.
-extended the shot of the newspaper clippings.
-re-scored the scene with a different part of It Was Him in the Lake.
-cut Nick asking "What are you talking about?"
-cut Tina's meltdown.
EDDIE ALONE-
-cut Eddie opening Michael's birthday gifts.
ROBBIN'S DEMISE-
-cut a shot of Robbin reacting to the severed head.
-cut a shot of the terrible-looking severed head.
-cut the cat-in-the-closet scare.
-shortened a shot for a smoother edit from inside to outside the window.
NOBODY'S HOME-
-smoothed an audio edit during the cut from Nick searching the house to Jason in the woods.
MRS. SHEPARD'S DEMISE-
-Mrs. Shepard & Dr. Crews don't run as far from Jason so that Jason doesn't seem to teleport.
NICK & MELISSA AT THE SHEPARD HOUSE / TINA FINDS DR. CREWS-
-re-scored the transition from one scene to the other with the track Human Body Shield.
TINA & DR. CREWS IN THE WOODS-
-cut Dr. Crews yelling "Don't go in there!" as Tina runs into the woods.
DR. CREWS' DEMISE-
-Dr. Crews doesn't run as far from Jason so that Jason doesn't seem to teleport.
-new sound effect when Jason punches Dr. Crews.
-cut two shots of Tina running through the woods after Dr. Crews is killed.
TINA FINDS JASON-
-added a trio of bass hits when Tina sees Jason.
-added a bass rumble as the tree roots reach out for Jason.
-added more realistic thunder sounds as Tina hides at the party house.
-cut the fake head in the potted plant.
-cut Tina throwing the plant at Jason.
-added additional sound effects when the porch collapses on Jason.
-added a rumble when Jason's hand comes through the rubble.
-cut Melissa saying "I don't believe you. You people give me the creeps."
-added a more realistic thunder sound.
-added rumble as Jason grabs the ax.
-shortened a shot of Jason in the doorway.
MELISSA'S DEMISE-
-shortened several shots to make Jason's attack faster & more intense.
-added an additional splat sound as Jason's ax makes contact.
FINAL SHOWDOWN-
-added a rumble when Tina focuses on the light.
-moved a shot of Tina swinging moving the light to before it hits Jason.
-shortened the shot of Jason before he pulls the nail out of his head.
-shortened the shot of the burning basement after Tina & Nick escape.
-slo-mo on the house explosion.
-added additional burning sounds as Tina & Nick lay on the dock.
-re-scored the dock scene with Ambulance.
-removed Mr. Shepard's return.
AFTERMATH-
-the track Ambulance continues to re-score the scene.
END CREDITS-
-added the title card before the credits roll.
POST-CREDITS-
-added a shot of Jason's mask to post-credits.
-added my production logo to the end.
-added a cue from the track Overlay of Evil. (F1)

ORIGINAL RUNTIME-
-88 mins.
TIME CUT-
-13 mins.
TIME ADDED-
-1 min.
FINAL RUNTIME-
-76 mins.












PART 8- JASON TAKES MANHATTAN-
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Part 8- Jason Takes Manhattan Changelist

SOURCES USED:
Main-

-Friday the 13th Part 8: Jason Takes Manhattan (Scream Factory bluray, 2020)
Additional-
-Friday the 13th Soundtrack (Waxwork Records remaster, 2014)
-Friday the 13th Part 8: Jason Takes Manhattan Soundtrack (Waxwork Records remaster, 2020)
-Bop 'Till You Drop by The Ramones (from the album Halfway to Sanity, 1987)
-Sound Effects (freesound.org & youtube.com)

CHANGES:
PRODUCTION CREDITS-

-added the Fanedit.org logo
-added my production logo.
-scored the production logos & director credit with Overlay of Evil [ray's Ghost mix].
-new "A Rob Hedden Film" credit.
TITLE CARD-
-cut the title card.
-removed the opening credits & New York montage.
ON THE HOUSE BOAT-
-added "Thursday, May 12th 1988" text to the opening shot.
-removed Jason being resurrected by electrocution.
-added an echoing bass hit as Jason's hands grab the ladder.
-added rumble when Jim scares Suzy with the hockey mask & fake knife.
-cut the fake knife stab when Jim scares Suzi with the hockey mask.
-cut Jason loading the speargun.
-cut a shot of Jason after he kills Jim.
TITLE CARD-
-new title card.
-new title music. (The Ghost People [raymix] )
-added sound effects during the new title.
ARRIVING AT THE PIER-
-shortened a shot of Mrs. VanDeusen handing Rennie the gift.
-Mrs. VanDuesen's "Rennie.." begins on the previous shot.
-shortened a shot of Mrs. VanDuesen speaking to Rennie.
-Mrs. VanDuesen's "...it's you." is heard on the following shot of Rennie.
BOARDING THE SHIP-
-added "Friday, May 13th" text to the shot of the graduates arriving at the pier.
-cut Mrs. VanDuesen & Charles discussing what's best for Rennie.
-the boat's horn begins to sound on the shot of Jason climbing out of the lake.
-cut the nameless Deckhand doing the Crazy Ralph routine.
SETTING SAIL-
-cut the shot of guys shooting targets.
-shortened the shot of Rennie walking towards Sean.
-shortened the shot of Sean before he kneels down to pet Toby.
-removed some strange rustling sounds before Sean pets Toby.
-shortened the shot of Sean petting Toby.
-moved Rennie's "We changed our Minds" to make the conversation more natural.
-cut "But I didn't get you one." / "Oh forget it." after Sean give Rennie a gift.
-shortened the shot of Rennie looking at the necklace.
-Rennie's "Sean, I love it" is heard over the following shot.
J.J. ROCKS OUT-
-replaced the music while J.J. shoots her video with a better mix of the track.
-cut Wayne saying "Your parents really came through, huh?"
-shortened the shot of Jason's feet as J.J. goes down to the engine room.
IN RENNIE'S ROOM-
-cut Rennie hallucinating, seeing young Jason out the window.
BELOW DECK-
-cut Tamara calling Renne a "Real space cadet."
-cut Tamara plotting against Rennie.
IN THE SAUNA ROOM-
-cut a few frames to remove the fake torso catching fire during the steam room kill.
RENNIE GOES OVERBOARD-
-cut Rennie hallucinating, seeing young Jason underwater.
-cut Rennie & Mrs. VanDeusen's talk about not being able to swim.
-cut Charles showing up & yelling at everybody.
-cut the Deckhand doing the Crazy Ralph routine, again.
-cut Rennie hallucinating, seeing young Jason in the bathroom mirror.
FRAMING THE PRINCIPAL-
-cut the POV of Wayne walking down the hallway; He's already in place filming.
TAMARA'S DEMISE-
-added a bass rumble as Jason stabs Tamara.
AT THE HELM-
-Jason doesn't take the spear off the wall so slowly.
-cut Admiral Robertson's fatherly advice to Chief Carlson.
-added thunder sounds when Jason appears behind Chief Jim.
-augmented the music during the attack on Jim with part of the track Sayonara Tamara.
-augmented Jason's stabs with rhythmic bass hits.
-added a more realistic thunder sound when Admiral Robertson finds Jim's body.
-added rumble when Jason appears behind Admiral Robertson.
-less slo-mo when Admiral Robertson is killed.
-less slo-mo when Admiral Robertson is dropped.
-added sound effects when the Admiral's body hits the floor.
-added a thunder sound after the Admiral is killed.
-fade-out on the shot of Jason after he drops the Admiral.
RENNE & SEAN SIGNAL THE COAST GUARD-
-cut Sean saying nobody wants him around, or whatever.
-fade-in on the shot of Sean & Renne entering the bridge.
IN THE KITCHEN-
-cut the Deckhand doing the Crazy Ralph thing for the third time.
EVA'S DEMISE-
-added a rumble as Eva finds Tamara's body.
-cut Eva running up stairs.
-music can be heard before Eva opens the danehall doors.
-increased the volume of the music when Eva enters the dancehall.
-improved the EQ of the music in the dancehall.
-Eva doesn't look around the dancehall as long.
-added a neck-break sound effect.
-added an additional sound effect when Eva hit's the ground.
PREPARING TO FIGHT BACK-
-shortened the shot of Jules before he grabs the shotgun.
-new sound effect of the shotgun cocking.
WAYNE'S DEMISE-
-shortened the overhead shot of Wayne looking around.
-cut Wayne going around a corner.
-made Wayne's glasses-less POV shots even more unfocused.
-added some low-end to the sound of Wayne's shotgun blast.
-slight speed-up of the through-the-camera shot.
-cut a shot of Wayne looking through the camera.
-merged the two through-the-camera POV shots into one.
-added some low-end to the sound of the explosion.
MILES'S DEMISE-
-cut a shot of Jason watching Miles climb.
-cut a shot of Miles climbing.
-added a rumble when Julius finds Miles' body & gets thrown overboard.
AT THE HELM AGAIN-
-cut Charles mentioning that he's looking for the Deckhand.
-cut Charles mentioning the Deckhand's "Jason" rumor.
IN RENNIE'S ROOM AGAIN-
-cut Rennie hallucinating, seeing young Jason in her room.
-augmented the music during Jason's attack with the track The Ghost People.
-added an additional squish sound as Jason pulls the pen out of his eye.
FIRE ON THE SHIP-
-cut Shawn saying "it's Jason's fault!"
-cut the lightning striking the mast.
-cut the Deckhand saying "Get back."
ESCAPING THE SINKING SHIP-
-the group get into the lifeboat much faster.
-cut the odd daytime-looking shots during the lifeboat row away.
-cut some of the celebrating at the sight of New York City.
WELCOME TO MANHATTAN-
-cut the thugs injecting Rennie with drugs.
-cut the thug saying "Lay back & enjoy it, baby."
-cut the third shot from the thug's gun.
-cut Rennie's druggy POV visuals.
-cut Charles telling Shawn to "shut up about Jason."
-added bass rumble when Julius' head is found & the cop is grabbed.
-cut Rennie hallucinating, seeing young Jason while she's driving the police car.
-the car passes through Jason instead of hitting him.
RENNIE'S FLASHBACK-
-shortened the shot of the burning puddle as Rennie stares into it.
-added a cross-fade from the burning puddle to Rennie's flashback at Crystal Lake.
-added "Friday, August 13th 1976" text to Rennie's flashback.
-cut Charles mentioning Jason drowning & being at the bottom of the lake.
-Charles' "Time for your first swimming lesson" is over a shot of young Rennie.
ON THE SUBWAY TRAIN-
-cut Rennie yelling for "Help" & people looking at her.
TIMES SQUARE-
-added the track Livin' in the City by King Lou as Rennie & Sean look around Times Square.
-changed the music coming from the punk kids boombox. (Bop 'Till You Drop by The Ramones)
-replaced the sound effects during the 'Punk Boombox' scene. (street traffic, footsteps, car horns, people talking)
-cut the punk kids threatening Jason after he kicks their boombox & getting scared when he takes his mask off.
IN THE SEWER-
-cut a POV shot of Rennie & Sean running.
-shortened a shot of Jason walking in pursuit.
-cut a shot of Rennie & Sean running.
-cut a shot of Jason walking.
-cut the sanitation worker saying the sewers flood with toxic waste "every night at midnight."
-cut two shots of Rennie, Sean & the sanitation worker walking.
-speed-up on the silhouette during the sanitation worker's death.
-cut a shot of Jason in slow pursuit of Rennie.
-cut a shot of Jason's face after Rennie throws toxic waste on him.
-cut a goofy shot of Jason stumbling after being splashed by the toxic waste.
-removed the voice of young Jason as the sewer floods.
-extend a shot of the flooding sewer tunnel.
-cut a shot of the silly Jason puppet in the toxic waste.
-removed the sewer catching on fire.
-cut the Statue of Liberty getting struck by lightning.
-removed the shot of young Jason crying in the sewer.
THE END-
-different music during the final scene. ( Sean & Rennie / Safe At Last )
END CREDITS-
-added the title card before the credits roll.
-different selection of songs. (Jason Breaks It Up & The Darkest Side of the Night [raymix] )
POST-CREDITS-
-added a shot of Camp Crystal Lake to post-credits.
-added my production logo to the end.
-added a cue from the track Overlay of Evil. (F1)

ORIGINAL RUNTIME-
-100 mins.
TIME CUT-
-18 mins.
TIME ADDED-
-1 min.
FINAL RUNTIME-
-83 mins.












JASON GOES TO HELL
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Jason Goes to Hell Changelist
SOURCES USED:
Main-

-Jason Goes to Hell- Unrated Version (Scream Factory bluray, 2020)
Additional-
-Friday the 13th Soundtrack (Waxwork Records remaster, 2014)
-Jason Goes to Hell Soundtrack (Edel Screen Records,1993)
-Sound Effects (freesound.org & youtube.com)

CHANGES: (based on the UNRATED version)
PRODUCTION CREDITS-
-added the Fanedit.org logo
-added my production logo.
-scored the production credits with Overlay of Evil [Ray Goes to Hell mix].
-new "An Adam Marcus Film" credit.
GOING TO THE LAKE HOUSE-
-scored the opening scene with F13 Main Title. (F1)
-added "Friday, May 13th 1994" to the shot of the car driving past.
AT THE LAKE HOUSE-
-new music stops when the light burns out.
-shortened a shot of the lady looking around for light bulbs.
-shortened the shot of the lady looking around after the front door opens.
-cut a strange overhead shot of the living room.
-cut a close-up on the lady's face as she looks up at Jason.
-cut a shot of a guy firing a ground-mounted machine gun.
-cut a shot of Jason being shot.
-removed the guy looking into the camera as he yells "Incoming!"
-cut the guy looking into the camera & saying "Clean this shit up."
-moved Duke's "I don't think so..." to after the agents congratulate each other.
TITLE CARD-
-new title card.
-new title music. (JGtH Main Theme [OST version] )
-added sound effects during the new title.
CORONER'S REPORT-
-removed the credits during the coroner's report.
-added a cue from Overlay of Evil [Ray Goes to Hell Mix] as the heart beats.
-shortened a shot of the beating heart.
-shortened a shot of the coroner looking at the heart.
-added a cue from Overlay of Evil [Ray Goes to Hell Mix] as the possession ends.
-cut some of the coroner's assistant mocking Jason.
-cut the coroner's assistant's security pat-down.
TV NEWS SPECIAL-
-removed dates & events from the report that don't line up with my timeline.
-removed Creighton Duke's "Hot dog though a doughnut" line.
AT THE DINER-
-cut Duke being a jerk; Sheriff Landis is naturally protective of Diana & untrusting of Duke.
HITCHHIKING CAMPERS-
-cut Alexis saying "We're thinking about going skinny dipping later."
-cut Alexis kissing Stephen.
-cut Stephen yawning (?) before he drives away.
-fade-out on the Camp Crystal Lake sign.
-fade-in on the trio running to get warm by the fire.
-cut "Shrank my pod." / "Your pod looks good from here."
-cut Deborah leaving the tent to pee & get a condom.
-added a sound effect when Jason kicks the sleeping bag.
DIANA CLOSES UP-
-shortened a shot of Diana leaving the restaurant.
-shortened a shot of Diana walking across the parking lot.
EDNA'S DEMISE-
-added a squishing sound when Edna's head is smashed in the car door.
S&M SHAVING-
-cut this entire scene. (yeah, Josh's mustache just disappears. whatever.)
DIANA ON THE PHONE-
-cut Diana pausing the conversation to go start a fire.
JOSH ATTACKS DIANA-
-added some bass to the sound of Diana's gun shot.
-shortened the shot before Josh's eyes open.
-shortened the shot after Josh pulls Diana down.
-added a bass rumble when Stephen notices that Josh's body is gone.
JESSICA COMES HOME-
-cut Vicki asking Jessica if the baby is hers.
STEPHEN GOES TO JAIL-
-cut the shot right after Stephen says "OK."
BABY AT THE DINER-
-cut Joey telling Vicki to get the baby "The fuck outta here."
-cut Joey saying the baby "will be just as cute if you put it outside."
STEPHEN AT THE VOORHEES' HOUSE-
-cut Stephen stopping & dramatically looking at the house before going in.
-cut Stephen looking in a closet.
-cut the ironing board jump-scare.
-added Overlay of Evil [Ray Goes to Hell Mix] when Stephen finds the Necronomicon.
-shortened a shot of Josh after the demon transfers into Robert.
JESSICA TAKES A SHOWER-
-cut a shot of Jessica taking her panties off.
-cut some of Jessica crying in the shower.
-different sound effect when Robert turns the power off.
ROBERT ATTACKS-
-filled a gap in the audio as Stephen punches Robert.
-added some bass as Stephen punches Robert.
ROBERT AT THE DINER-
-shortened Joey's goofy reaction to getting her mouth smashed.
FINAL SHOWDOWN-
-cut the shot of the demon entering Diana.
-cut some of the creature in the basement.
-Duke gets pulled out of the hole in the floor quicker.
-cut "Duke" from Stephen's "Duke, that thing's in the basement..."
-added crunching sounds as Jason crushes Duke.
-shortened the shot of Amanda hiding the baby jumping into the basement.
-shortened the shot of Jason's feet as he approaches Stephen.
-cut Jason's POV after he gets stabbed with the dagger.
-Jessica takes faster action as Stephen is being pulled underground.
END CREDITS-
-added the title card before the credits roll.
POST-CREDITS-
-moved the scene of Jason's mask being pulled underground to post-credits.
-cut the dog walking up to & away from Jason's mask.
-removed the music during the 'Mask Pull Under' scene.
-replaced all the sound effects during the 'Mask Pull Under' scene. (wind, sand, leaves)
-added my production logo to the end.
-added a cue from the track Overlay of Evil. (F1)

ORIGINAL RUNTIME-
-88 mins.
TIME CUT-
-7 mins.
TIME ADDED-
-1 min.
FINAL RUNTIME-
-82 mins.












JASON X
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Jason X Changelist

SOURCES USED:
Main-

-Jason X (Scream Factory bluray, 2020)
Additional-
-Friday the 13th Soundtrack (Waxwork Records remaster, 2014)
-Jason X Soundtrack (Varèse Sarabande records, 2002)
-Sound Effects (freesound.org & youtube.com)

CHANGES:
PRODUCTION CREDITS-

-added the Fanedit.org logo
-added my production logo.
-removed the opening credits.
-removed the title sequence.
-scored the New Line production logo & director credit with Overlay of Evil. (F1)
AT THE RESEARCH FACILITY-
-re-scored the opening scene with F13 Main Title. (F1)
-shortened the guard walking toward camera with the blanket.
-shortened the shot of Jason as the guard approaches.
-cut the guards dialog as he covers Jason with the blanket.
-added "Friday, June 13th 2008" text to the shot of Dr. Wimmer walking down the hall.
-added rumble when Rowan realizes Jason is behind her.
-cut the shots of Jason following Rowan down the stairs.
-cut the zoom-in shot of Jason entering the cryo-room.
-added heavy reverb to the final buzz of the alarm.
TITLE CARD-
-new title card.
-new title music. (Jason Thaws Out [raymix] )
-added sound effects during the new title.
FINDING JASON-
-long fade-in as the explorers descend the stairs.
-added "Friday, September 13th 2455" text to the shot of the explorers unmasking.
-cut Azrael's line about a "freezer thing."
-cut K.M. giving data about the freezer.
-cut the ice falling on Azrael before frozen Jason falls on him.
-cut Azreal telling K.M. "You're so pretty." after she injects him.
-cut the conversation about the hockey mask.
-cut Fat Lou's reaction to finding out the survivor is female.
-cut a few frames of the shuttle launching.
ABOARD THE SPACESHIP GRENDEL-
-cut Tsunaron's "You'll get an elbow where your wrist should be." after "Stay still."
-cut K.M. saying how long Rowan has been frozen.
-cut Stoney calling Kinsa "smart & sexy." in the examination room.
-cut Tsunaron mentioning that Jason has a small brain.
-cut Stoney & Kinsa making out beside Jason's un-thawing corpse.
-cut Adrienne kicking Stoney & Kinsa out of the examination room.
-cut Adrienne removing Jason's bad eye.
ROWAN AWAKENS-
-slo-mo & fade-out after Rowan says "2455..."
-cut Rowan mentioning how many years it's been since she was frozen.
PROFITEERING & MAINTENANCE-
-cut Dieter telling Lowe that "a box of DVDs is not a goldmine."
-cut any mention of how long Rowan was frozen from Lowe & Dieter's conversation.
-cut Tsunaron trying to put nipples on the K.M. android.
JASON THAWS-OUT-
-cut Janessa twisting Lowe's nipples.
-shortened the shot of Adrienne preparing the microscope as Jason un-thaws.
-Adrienne doesn't look around the room as long after Jason's first convulsion.
-cut the shot of Jason entering the hallway after he kills Adrienne.
ROWAN EXPLAINS IT ALL-
-cut Rowan saying they tried to execute Jason "for the first time" in 2008.
-Lowe's "...must be carefully preserved" is heard over a shot of Rowan.
-cut Lowe saying "Just like you" after explaining that Jason is an important artifact.
-Rowan's "...unstoppable killing machine" is heard over a shot of Sgt. Brodski.
-cut Rowan saying "He's not dead."
-Lowe's "Believe me..." is heard over the shot of Sgt. Brodski.
-added rumble when Adrienne's body is found.
VARIOUS HAPPENINGS-
-cut Tsunaron & Janessa's hallway interaction.
-removed the soldiers startling each other & their conversation.
-cut Janessa's reaction when Geko gets killed.
-cut the soldier shooting Jason's legs after he's impaled on the spike
-removed Sgt. Brodski's POV shot.
-cut all of Jonathan's dialog after the soldiers are killed.
-added bass rumble as the Grendel crashes through the Solaris.
-cut "Can't you beam us off?" / "'Beam us off'??"
-cut Kinsa saying she's going to meet Stoney.
-cut Kinsa asking "What's a bike?"
-cut Tsunaron & K.M.'s kiss.
GOING TO THE ESCAPE SHUTTLE-
-cut Rowan threatening to break Kinsa's neck is she's not quiet.
-Rowan's "I think someone's alive over there" is heard over a shot of Sgt. Brodski.
-cut Janessa saying "We don't have time for this."
-cut Rowan asking "Which way to the shuttle bay?"
-cut Kinsa telling Rowan "Just don't wreck my pants."'
-added a shot of Sgt. Brodski, reversed from earlier.
-added a cue from the track Old Time Machete.
-cut Rowan fidgeting with the gun & turning on the flashlight.
CHECKING THE BRIDGE-
-cut Crutch saying "I've seen worse."
-cut some of the discussion about moving Sgt. Brodski.
-Kinsa's "Hey, guys" is heard from the bridge.
-cut Crutch's comment about "the Microsoft conflict".
-cut Crutch laughing at Jonathan's severed head.
LOCKED OUT OF THE ESCAPE SHUTTLE-
-swapped two shots so Kinsa seems to push the thruster just before the shuttle crashes.
-shortened the shot before the shuttle crashes into the bottom of the ship.
-cut the "what happens now?" conversation.
-added rumble when Jason arrives.
-cut Kinsa joking "You hold him while I run."
-added rumble when the gun doesn't work.
-cut Tsunaron saying "Gave her an upload."
-cut a quick shot of Jason looking at the upgraded K.M.
-cut a shot of K.M. seeming to be surprised by her own weapons.
-cut K.M. saying "I had it under control."
-cut Tsunaron & K.M.'s kiss.
RISE OF THE UBER-JASON-
-cut a shot of a monitor featuring Windows-95-esque graphics.
-shortened the sot panning up to the alert monitor.
-slo-mo & zoom-in on the nano tech computer's "Alert" message.
-slo-mo on the nano tech computer's "Synthetic Cellular Replacement" message.
ESCAPE!-
-cut Janessa's "This sucks" line.
-cut a shot of Janessa being sucked across the room for continuity.
-slight slo-mo on the shots of Janessa being sucked across the room.
-slo-mo & fade-out on the shot of Rowan & Tsunaron looking out the window at Earth2.
-different music cue during the window scene. (All's Well That Ends... Well)
END CREDITS-
-added the title card before the credits roll.
-different music over the end credits. (The Wind Tunnel & Birth of the Über-Jason)
POST-CREDITS-
-moved the scene of the campers on Earth2 to post-credits.
-added a bass rumble when Jason's mask hits the bottom of the lake.
-added my production logo to the end.
-added a cue from the track Overlay of Evil. (F1)

ORIGINAL RUNTIME-
-92 mins.
TIME CUT-
-11 mins.
TIME ADDED
-1 min.
FINAL RUNTIME-
-82 mins.












FREDDY VS. JASON
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Freddy vs. Jason Changelist

SOURCES USED:
Main-

-Freddy vs. Jason (Scream Factory bluray, 2020)
Additional-
-Freddy vs. Jason Deleted Scenes (Scream Factory bluray, 2020)
-Friday the 13th Soundtrack (Waxwork Records remaster, 2014)
-Freddy vs. Jason Soundtrack (Varèse Sarabande Records, 2003)
-Sound Effects (freesound.org & youtube.com)

CHANGES:
OVERALL CHANGES-

-new shot-by-shot color correction. Check it out!
PRODUCTION CREDITS-
-added the Fanedit.org logo.
-added my production logo.
-new "A Ronni Yu Film" credit.
JASON'S RESURRECTION-
-scored the opening scene with Overlay of Evil. (F1)
-cut the shot of Jason slowly walking toward the girl.
-the girl doesn't run as far before falling.
-removed the morphing victims talking to Jason.
-cut Pamela telling Jason that his "gift" is that he can "never die."
-cut Freddy's 4th wall breaking "I've been away for far too long" line.
-removed the opening credits.
TITLE CARD-
-new title card.
-new title sequence music. (Freddy's Dream World)
-added sound effects during the new title.
JASON ON ELM STREET-
-added new rain sound effects to the shot of Jason's shadow on Elm Street.
-added "Friday, September 13th 2002" text to the first shot of the Elm Street House.
-cut Kia pointing out how young Lori & Will were.
-cut Lori saying "We were young, but what we had was real."
-cut Kia telling Lori "You need to meet a guy."
-removed the house exterior shot after Gibb & Trey go upstairs.
POLICE STATION DREAM-
-removed the blood drops in the hallway.
BACK ON ELM STREET-
-cut Freddy's 4th wall breaking exposition after he fails to kill Blake.
AT WESTIN HILLS PSYCH HOSPITAL-
-cut Mark farting as he presses his ass against the window.
AT SCHOOL-
-cut Kia's reference to the Columbine shootings.
-cut Kia's Nose-Job Dream scene.
-cut Lori putting her hand on Will's face, removing a continuity error.
-Will's "I thought you might be scared so..." is heard over a shot of Lori.
GIBB'S NIGHTMARE-
-added a low rumble during Jason's POV.
IN THE VAN-
-cut Mark saying "...man, kids are gonna start falling asleep!"
LEAVING THE RAVE-
-cut Bill saying "That goalie was pissed about something."
LORI & WILL TALK-
-cut Will's nervous laugh after he tells Lori that her dad killed her mom.
-cut Will's nervous laugh after he tells Lori that he saw the murder happen.
-added a white-flash transition into Will's flashback.
-added a sound effect as we enter Will's flashback.
-de-saturated the color during Will's flashback.
LORI CONFRONTS HER FATHER-
-added a low rumble as Lori's dad reveals that he works at Westin Hills.
-added a subtle rumble as Lori's dad tells her to "Get some rest."
AT MARK'S HOUSE-
-added rumble as Mark's brother appears in the bath.
-cut Freddy's exposition while disguised as Mark's dead brother.
-removed the eels on the bathroom floor.
-harder thud sound when Mark is thrown against the wall.
-additional fire/burning sound effects as Mark is set on fire.
-cut Mark falling & getting back up before his face is slashed.
-additional sound effects when Mark's face is slashed.
IN BILL'S BASEMENT-
-cut the dates & events from Deputy Stubbs' Jason story that don't fit my new timeline.
-cut Lori's "Freddy died by fire, Jason by water. How can we use that?"
-cut Charlie explaining that he's not a virgin.
-Kia's "Look, we all know who.." begins over a shot of Charlie.
-shortened a shot of Kia.
-added a splat sound when Freddy's ear hits the floor.
-extended the shot of Freddy's ear on the floor.
-removed Freddy's severed ear turning into maggots.
-cut Deputy Stubbs stomping on the maggots.
BACK AT WESTIN HILLS-
-added an establishing shot of Westin Hills. (earlier shot reversed)
-added dialog about splitting into groups, taken from the deleted scenes.
-cut Bill talking to himself as he smokes a joint.
-reversed a shot so that a closing door gets Bill's attention instead of opening.
-new sound effect when the door closes.
-removed the Freddy Caterpillar & the Hookah scene.
-added the sound of Freddy laughing when Bill finds the bottles of Hypnociyl.
-cut the Freddy Caterpillar going down Bill's throat.
JASON'S DREAM-
-cut some of Pamela's dialog.
-re-scored Jason's arm chopping with a mash-up of Comatose Nightmare & Jason's 1st Dream.
-cut Freddy saying "Not my arm!"
-added low rumble as Freddy's arms re-appear.
-cut Freddy making the jerk-off motion.
-cut Freddy saying "So you are afraid of something after all."
-cut the synapses snapping as Freddy's blade goes into young Jason's head.
-added a white flash transition to Jason's house.
-added low rumble to the thunder sounds.
LORI'S CRYSTAL LAKE DREAM-
-cut Lori being scared of young Jason while helping him at the dock in her dream.
FINAL SHOWDOWN-
-cut some of Kia taunting Freddy.
-re-arranged some shots as Kia taunts Freddy.
-shortened Kia looking confused after Freddy motions for her to look behind her.
-slo-mo on the final shot of Lori & Will escaping on the burning dock.
-moved the scene of Jason rising from the lake to post-credits.
END CREDITS-
-added the title card before the credits roll.
-removed the stylized production credits & cut straight to the classic credit roll.
-different music over the end credits. (Jason's Surprise Attack & Jason Unmasked)
POST-CREDITS-
-added the scene of Jason rising from the Lake to post-credits.
-added my production logo to the end.
-added a cue from the track Overlay of Evil. (F1)

ORIGINAL RUNTIME-
-98 mins.
TIME CUT-
-9 mins.
TIME ADDED-
-1 min.
FINAL RUNTIME-
-90 mins.












FRIDAY THE 13TH (2009)
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Friday the 13th (2009) Changelist

SOURCES USED:
Main-

-Friday the 13th 2009 (Scream Factory bluray, 2020)
--Theatrical Cut, Killer Cut & deleted scenes
Additional-
-Friday the 13th Soundtrack (Waxwork Records remaster, 2014)
-Friday the 13th 2009 Soundtrack (Unofficial Release, 2010)
-Sound Effects (freesound.org & youtube.com)

CHANGES: (based on the KILLER CUT)
PRODUCTION CREDITS-
-added the Fanedit.org logo
-added my production logo.
-augmented the music over the production logos with Overlay of Evil. (F1)
-removed the Platinum Dunes production logo.
-new "A Marcus Nispel Film" credit.
OPENING FLASHBACK-
-Overlay of Evil continues over the opening flashback. (F1)
-added additional rain sounds.
-re-framed the opening shot to remove the date.
-added "Friday, June 13th 1980" text to the opening shot.
-extended the shot of the Camp Crystal Lake sign.
-removed the opening credits during the flashback.
-cut Pamela mentioning Jason drowning.
-re-timed some shots during the opening flashback.
-added two shots of Pamela's locket that are exclusive to the Theatrical Cut.
-reversed the first of the two Theatrical Cut shots so the light fades in instead of out.
-slight slo-mo on the final shot of Pamela.
-added an additional thunder sound as Pamela says "Kill for mother."
-added a white-out transition to end the flashback.
NEW TITLE CARD-
-new title & title card. (Friday the 13th- Retold)
-new music. (a remix of Overlay of Evil (F1), Alice Goes to the Lake (F1) & First Kill)
GOING CAMPING-
-removed "Present Day" text.
-added "June 13th, 2007" text
-cut Richie & Wade's "We're gonna be rich" conversation.
-removed details from Wade's Jason story that don't match my new timeline.
-removed the conversation about drinking pee.
-removed the conversation about eating a leg to survive.
-added a shot of Amanda that is exclusive to the Theatrical Cut.
-cut Richie calling Wade's GPS explanation "Dumb shit."
WADE'S DEMISE-
-augmented the music cue when Wade spots Jason with the cue Alice Goes to the Lake. (F1)
IN THE ABANDONED HOUSE-
-cut the rotten food on the table & Mike asking "You hungry?"
-removed the synth sting as the camera pans to the busted TV.
-cut Mike saying "It's a little kid's room."
-cut Mike pointing out the name "Jason" on the bed's headboard.
AMANDA & RICHIE IN THE TENT-
-moved an exterior shot of the tent to the beginning of the scene to establish place.
-cut Richie saying "Right?" after "Let the perv watch."
-cut the two beginning to have sex again after Richie yells to Wade.
-new branch snapping sound effects get their attention the second time.
-cut Amanda having to talk Richie into going out to deal with Wade.
AMANDA'S DEMISE-
-cut a shot of Amanda yelling "Richie!" while inside her burning sleeping bag.
-removed a quick & shaky shot of Amanda inside her burning sleeping bag.
BACK AT THE ABANDONED HOUSE-
-augmented the music cue when Jason attacks Mike with the cue Mrs. V. Watches. (F1)
-augmented the music cue when Jason attacks Whitney with the cue First Kill.
RICHIE'S DEMISE-
-added cracking & splat sounds as Jason's machete makes contact with Richie's head.
-added the cue First Kill as Jason's machete comes down on Whitney.
ORIGINAL TITLE CARD-
-cut the title card.
AT THE GAS STATION-
-removed the "6 Weeks Later" text from the shot of the SUV arriving at the gas station.
-added "Six Weeks Later" text to the shot of the SUV arriving at the gas station.
-tighter edit after Trent asks Lawrence for "a little help."
-Lawrence's "Dude, that's not a good look" begins over a shot of Trent.
-cut Nolan & Trent's "I give a wicked blowjob, too" / "We'll try that later."
-cut Clay saying "Guess I'm an asshole."
AT THE OLD LADY'S HOUSE-
-augmented the music cue when the Lady says "so does HE." with the cue Alice at the Lake. (F1)
AT THE LAKE HOUSE-
-cut the conversation about the bobcat.
-quicker beat between "Hoodlums!" / "What do you think they're gonna do?"
-cut Trent asking Jenna to bring him a beer after the "go for a hike" talk.
AT THE WOOD MILL-
-added the sounds of the machinery coming from inside the barn as Clay approaches.
-cut Donnie saying he almost "started the whoop-ass machine" after Clay startles him.
-cut Donnie saying "I wish I had." after Clay asks if he's seen his sister.
-added a shot of Clay after Donnie takes the Missing flyer. (reversed from earlier)
-cut Donnie telling Clay "It's your fuckin' loss, dude."
-cut Donnie calling Clay a "Fucker" as he walks away.
BACK AT THE LAKE HOUSE-
-cut some of Nolan's charades behind Chelsea as she invites Trent & Jenna to the lake.
JASON & THE HOCKEY MASK-
-added the Deleted/Alternate version of Jason finding the hockey mask.
-tied Donnie talking to the "Beaver Bear" from the Killer Cut into the Deleted Scene.
-cut Donnie looking at & licking the porn magazine.
-augmented the music cue when Donnie is decapitated with the cue Mrs. V. Watches. (F1)
-tied the Deleted Scene back into the Killer Cut as Jason puts the hockey mask on.
BEER PONG AT THE LAKE HOUSE-
-cut Chewie's toast before he "Shoots the Boot".
-improved the cut from "Shooting the Boot" to Nolan & Chelsea on the boat & skiing.
CHELSEA & THE BOAT-
-re-framed & reused a shot of the boat to give it more time to reach Chelsea
-removed the underwater shot of Chelsea before she gets hit by the boat.
-added reverberating bass as Chelsea is hit by the boat.
-augmented the music cue when Chelsea sees Jason with the cue Overlay of Evil. (F1)
-added bass rumble as Chelsea spots Jason on the shore.
CLAY & JENNA GO SEARCHING-
-new music cue continues until Clay & Jenna enter the cabins- Overlay of Evil. (F1)
CLAY & JENNA HIDE-
-augmented the music cue as Clay & Jenna hide from Jason with the cue Overlay of Evil. (F1)
JASON'S UNDERGROUND LAIR-
-added the voice of Jason's mother urging him to kill.
-augmented the music during Jason's tantrum with Mrs. V. Watches. (F1)
-cut to black as Jason slams the door.
-removed Whitney finding Clay's backpack, picking her lock & escaping.
CHEWIE BREAKS THE CHAIR-
-cut Chewie's "Wood Wizard" comment.
-cut Trent telling Chewie to "grab a flashlight."
CHEWIE IN THE STORAGE SHED-
-cut Chewie taking a second drink from the bottle.
AT THE HOUSE-
-cut Trent's stupid dialog while he's having sex with Brie.
-cut Lawrence preparing to masturbate.
-cut the shot of Whitney running toward the house.
CHEWIE'S DEMISE-
-cut Chewie comparing the hockey stick to his penis.
-augmented the music when Jason appears behind Chewie with Alice Goes to the Lake. (F1)
-increased the volume of the track Chewie Dies during the attack.
AROUND THE HOUSE-
-added an electrical sound when the power goes out.
-cut the rest of Trent & Brie's sex scene along with all the stupid dialog.
-removed Whitney arriving at the house & being re-captured by Jason.
LAWRENCE'S DEMISE-
-cut three shots during Lawrence's walk to the work shed shorter.
-cut a shot of Lawrence walking to the work shed.
-cut Lawrence looking in the work shed window.
-moved a shot of Trent at the window & the group looking around, cut later.
-added a bass rumble when Jason finishes Lawrence off.
-cut Brie yelling "shut up!" as Lawrence is killed.
BACK IN THE HOUSE-
-cut a shot of Trent at the window & the group looking around, now used earlier.
-cut a shot of Trent at the window.
-reversed a shot of Trent at the window.
-cut the shot of Jason on the roof.
-cut the other shot of Jason on the roof.
-Trent doesn't look into the room as long before yelling "He killed Brie!"
ON THE RUN-
-cut a shot of Clay & Jenna running as everyone runs away from the cop car.
-cut Trent's "Where are you, gun?" after he drops it in the water.
-Trent doesn't splash around looking for the gun as much.
-cut Trent's "Fuck it" before he scrambles up out of the water.
-cut Clay & Jenna finding Lawrence's body in the hot tub.
TRENT'S DEMISE-
-shortened the shot of Trent approaching the truck after the driver waves him on.
-cut a shot of Trent walking toward the truck, pointing his flashlight.
-added ripping/cracking/gore sounds as Jason pulls his machete though Trent.
-removed looped audio from Trent's struggling sounds.
-augmented the music after the kill with the classic "Kikiki Mamama" cue.
-removed Clay & Jenna finding Chelsea's body at the dock.
CLAY & JENNA IN THE ABANDONED HOUSE-
-cut several shots of the couple sneaking through the house.
-cut a shot of Trent rushing into a room.
-cut a POV shot looking into a room.
CLAY & JENNA IN THE TUNNELS-
-cut a shot of the two walking through the tunnels.
ESCAPE WITH WHITNEY-
-added a bass hit when Jenna is stabbed.
-cut Clay's head being smashed through the bus windshield.
-Whitney takes faster action after Clay tells her to run.
-cut a quick shot of Jason beginning to climb down into the bus.
-Whitney says "Fuck you" as she kicks Jason, instead of before.
FINAL SHOWDOWN-
-cut a shot of Whitney sneaking out from her hiding spot.
-cut the montage of various locations.
ON THE DOCK-
-re-scored the scene with the track Opening Titles.
-slo-mo & fade-out on the shot of the locket sinking into the lake.
-removed Jason's return.
END CREDITS-
-added the title card before the credits roll.
-music is a remix of Opening Titles, End Credits, Overlay of Evil (F1), Alice at Lake (F1), First Kill.
POST-CREDITS-
-moved the shot of Jason's mask at the bottom of the lake to post-credits.
-added underwater sound effects.
-added my production logo to the end.
-added a cue from the track Overlay of Evil. (F1)

ORIGINAL RUNTIME-
-97 mins.
TIME CUT-
-8 mins.
TIME ADDED-
-3 min.
FINAL RUNTIME-
-92 mins.












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Extras:
Documentary-

This is an edit of the essential Friday the 13th doc, Crystal Lake Memories.
I've removed segments related to moments cut from my edits of the films, making this a companion to the [raymix] Series.
I've also cut out some filler, removed some odd comments, corrected erroneous statements & added some deleted bits.
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Crystal Lake Memories changelist
Sources Used:
-Crystal Lake Memories- The Complete History of Friday the 13th (RLJ Bluray, 2017)

CHANGES:
I've made so many alterations that it would be a nightmare to list every one.
So, this list only covers the major changes.

PRODUCTION CREDITS-
-added the FE.org logo.
-added my production logo.
-stabilized the fake gateweave on the production credits.
TITLE CARD-
-added the subtitle "The Friday the 13th Compendium."
OPENING-
-removed the "campfire story" wraparound.
-cut the series overview.
MAKING FRIDAY THE 13TH-
-cut the info about Cunningham's early soft-core nudie films.
-cut the part about killing the snake.
-cut the bit about the ending hospital scene.
-many other cuts & alterations throughout.

MAKING PART 2-
-added "Chapter 2" to the title.
-cut the bit about Jason being dead at end end of Pt.1
-cut the part about the original opening with Alice.
-cut the pervy comments about Kirsten Baker.
-cut the erroneous report that the wrong side of the machete was used.
-cut the part about the pee under the bed.
-many other cuts & alterations throughout.

MAKING PART 3-
-cut some of the talk about the 3D gimmick.
-cut mention of the crazy old man.
-cut the scripts sexual abuse implications.
-cut everybody taking credit for the mask.
-removed discussion about Debbie being pregnant.
-cut the part about the dream-ending.
-many other cuts & alterations throughout.

MAKING THE FINAL CHAPTER-
-added "Chapter 4" to the title.
-cut the part about the roadside graves scene.
-cut the talk about timeline continuity errors.
-cut the alternate ideas for Jason's death.
-many other cuts & alterations throughout.

MAKING A NEW BEGINNING-
-new title: "Copy Cat Killer".
-cut the part about the 'chicken scene'.
-cut the paramedic calling the kids a "bunch of pussies."
-cut the singing in the outhouse.
-cut the bit about Tiffany Helm's original death scene.
-cut the bit about the continuity with the sweater.
-cut Shavar Ross saying Reggie's red jacket was the "Blood of Jesus."
-cut the part about the "Possessed Tommy" ending.
-cut all the shade being thrown at the film.
-many other cuts & alterations throughout.

MAKING JASON LIVES-
-cut shade being thrown at Pt.5.
-cut the part about the James Bond intro.
-cut some parts about returning Jason to his "resting place."
-cut the bit about writing "The Man Behind the Mask."
-VERY MANY other cuts & alterations throughout.

MAKING THE NEW BLOOD-
-altered the colors of the title sequence.
-cut the bit about trying to get FvJ made.
-cut comments about an unclear timeline.
-removed the erroneous report that Susan Jennifer Sullivan is dead.
-cut comments about "FriGay the 13th".
-cut the section about the original ending.
-cut the part about a "final girls" sequel.
-added a clip about Hugh Jackman wanting to play Jason.
-many other cuts & alterations throughout.

MAKING JASON TAKES MANHATTAN-
-cut the bit about competition from the NoES series.
-cut the info about Jason resurrecting via electrocution.
-cut mention of an inconsistent timeline.
-cut everything about Jason turning back into a child.
-VERY MANY other cuts & alterations throughout.

MAKING JASON GOES TO HELL-
-cut the bit with the girl who played the baby.
-cut the part about the shaving scene.
-VERY MANY other cuts & alterations throughout.

MAKING JASON X-
-cut the producers throwing shade at the Leprechaun & Hellraiser movies.
-cut the part about K.M. wanting fake boobs.
-VERY MANY other cuts & alterations throughout.

MAKING FREDDY VS. JASON-
-cut some info about the unmade drafts.
-cut the producer throwing shade at the previous films.
-cut some of the complaining about Kane not playing Jason.
-cleared up that Jason is NOT afraid of water in the film.
-cut shade being thrown at the film.
-cut the part about comic books.
-many other cuts & alterations throughout.

MAKING FRIDAY THE 13TH '09
-new title & title card.
-cut the part about "is it a reboot or a remake or a whatever".
-cut the part about the original actress for Amanda.
-cut the part about the re-shot/official version of the Mask scene.
-cut the bit about the stupid dialog during the sex scene.
-cut the part about the jump-scare ending.
-cut the part about "remake backlash".
-many other cuts & alterations throughout.

REFLECTIONS-
-new title & title card.
-altered colors of the title sequence.
-VERY MANY other cuts & alterations throughout.
-removed the "campfire story" wraparound.
END CREDITS-
-cropped out the actors reciting dialog during the end credits.
-changed the end credits music to Pt. 3 Theme [raymix] & Main Theme. (F3 & F1)
POST-CREDITS-
-added clips of Victor Miller & John Shepard to post-credits.
-added my production logo to the end.

FINAL RUNTIME-
-314 mins.


















Soundtrack-
This is a collection of various songs & pieces of score used the the Friday the 13th [raymix] Series.
I've used the best available mix/master of each track & adjusted the gain to make them all sound cohesive.
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Tracklist -
01. Overlay of Evil- Harry Manfredini (all films)
02. Pt.3 Main Theme [raymix]- Michael Zager (Pt.3)
03. Hard Rock Summer- Alice Cooper (Pt.6)
04. How Long You Wanna Live Anyway?- Stray Cats (Pt.4)
05. First Kill- Steve Jablonsky (Re)
06. The Darkest Side of the Night [raymix]- Metropolis (Pt.8)
07. J.J.'s Blues- Fred Molin (Pt.8)
08. Bop 'Til You Drop- Ramones (Pt.8)
09. His Eyes- Pseudo Echo (Pt.5)
10. Mrs. V. Watches- Harry Manfredini (Pt.1 Pt.2 & Re)
11. Love Is a Lie- Lion (Pt.4)
12. Banjo Travelin'- Harry Mandredini (Pt.1)
13. Tommy Alone- Harry Manfredini (Pt.5)
14. K.M. Kicks Butt- Harry Manfredini (JX)
15. Jason Goes After Freddy [raymix]- Graeme Revell (FvJ)
16. Tick Tick Boom [raymix]- The Hives (Re)
17. Trouble at the Station- Harry Manfredini (JGtH)
18. Bill Plays Guitar- Harry Manfredini (Pt.1)
19. Sail Away Tiny Sparrow- Harry Manfredini (Pt.1)
20. Alice Goes to the Lake- Harry Manfredini (Pt.1, Pt.2 & Re)




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Peroration:
The long-running Friday the 13th series always had it's own shelf at the video store, where all the VHS covers would be lined up next to each other. This alone made them seem legendary. Through the late 80's, I was constantly changing my mind on which one was gonna be the scariest.
Through my teens I rented em on VHS & spent many Friday nights watching with friends. Jason was always on our minds when we were on the river or in the woods!
In my 20's I got the DVD set & once again had fun going through the series with friends. Now I've got the big blu-ray boxset, which is a fans dream come true.
Documentaries, books, commentaries, interviews, articles. I've hacked through it all.

I realize the Friday the 13th films aren't high art; they're silly slashers made quick n' cheap. The acting is uneven. The plots are simple, repetitive & occasionally stupid.
But I think this series is very fun & full of iconic characters & moments. Great for screaming & laughing along with. Perfect for movie marathon nights with friends.
I hope these versions will enhance that experience for you. Whether you're familiar with the series or a casual camper, I hope you have fun at Crystal Lake!
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Available Now!
PM me for the link!
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Funny timing of this project.....last week I visited the camp where they filmed the first movie. It has me in the Jason mood, so I look forward to seeing your progress on this!
 
I've updated the OP with some clarifications & my final change lists for the first 4 films.
If anybody has any input or ideas, I'd love to hear it!
Otherwise, I should have the first 4 ready to go Friday, October 8th!
 
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OP updated with an explanation of the new timeline & a visual comparison added to the Pt.1 changes.
(I'm mostly making editorial changes to these films, so I thought I'd throw in a visual change comparison where I could)
 
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OP updated with details on the new re-worked backstory.
While it may seem to counteract some of what we learn in Pt.1, keep in mind we only hear rumors from people in town & the ravings of an insane person.
(also, my edit changes a few facts in Pt.1. The story is set straight at the beginning of my edit of Pt.2.)
 
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Volume One- Parts 1-4 available now!
PM me for the link!


(EDIT- false alarm! sorry!)
 
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Sorry, but the previous post was a bit premature...
Last night I came up with another idea for Part 1.
Keep the PMs coming. I'll get the link to everybody ASAP!
Again, I'm sorry for the delay, but this will be worth it!

(edit- new idea didn't work out. new release date below!)
 
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I'll be sending out the link on Wednesday!
PM if ya want it!
 
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Hey, I just wanted to reiterate that the versions I'm sending out may not be final.
I'll be taking all your feedback into consideration & making a final pass on each film before releasing the full 12 film set, Part1-Remake.
PM for the link to Volume One.
I'm looking forward to hearing any & all thoughts!
 
OP updated with even more project info.
Screeners for Volume One: The Crystal Lake Massacre are ready for Halloween!
Also!
Volume Two: Resurrections should have screener versions ready by Thanksgiving.
Volume Three: Variations should have screeners by Christmas. (I hope...)
The final Three Volume Twelve Film Set should be ready to go by New Years Eve.

Happy Holidays!
 
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VOICE ACTOR WANTED!
I'm looking for a good voice actor who can sound like a 15ish year old American boy. Four lines of dialog. 12 words.
All dialog is off-screen, so no worries about sync.
PM if you wanna be the original JASON VOORHEES!
 
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OP updated with more project info, story outlines, new artwork & full info for Volume Two!

Happy Halloween!
 
Very much so. I'm starting work on JGtH this morning!
 
preview versions of VOLUME TWO (Pt.s 5-8) will be available this Saturday the 13th!
 
Added the changelist for FREDDY VS. JASON to the OP!
That's 10 movies down, 2 to go! JASON X is now on the operating table.
 
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JASON X changelist added to the OP!
That just leaves the 2009 Reboot left to edit.
 
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