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For A Few Dollars Less

thepotatoparadox

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The PotatoParadox Edit
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I'm taking the recent 4K release of this classic and removing unnecessary dialogue and scenes. The character motivations will remain the same, it's just a matter of removing the fat. Would you watch this?

Cut List:

- Removed Indio smoking after killing Tomaso (Indio's Traitor)
- Removed Manco checking into the hotel
- Removed Manco kicking Martinez from his room
- Removed Manco enteering in his hotel room
- Removed Indio getting woken up by a the church bell getting shot
- Removed the boy telling Manco 4 of Indio's gang have arrived at El Paso.
- Removed Manco visiting the Prophet.
- Removed Indio's first flashback.
- Removed everything from the bank robbery to Indio letting the bountyhunters escape, so that the bountyhunters go directly to Aguas Calientes to hunt the bandits.
- Removed a line when Groggy confronts Indio, so that Groggy is the one that betrays him.
- Removed all scenes of Groggy holding Indio hostage.
- Trimmed the rape scene to make it less awkward and remove Mortimer's sister's unrealistic suicide.
- Trimmed final shootout.
- Removed shot of Manco retrieving the money from the tree
 
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Do you have a cut list and examples for members to view to get an idea of what your edit would be like?
 
I love that film, and would be very curious as to what you would remove! Would you happen to have a list of what dialogue / scenes / interactions you would remove?
 
I'd certainly watch. Big Leone fan here! Looking forward to finding out more about the project.
 
Phase3 said:
I love that film, and would be very curious as to what you would remove! Would you happen to have a list of what dialogue / scenes / interactions you would remove?
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- Removed Indio smoking after killing Tomaso (Indio's Traitor).

- Removed Manco kicking Martinez from his room.

- Removed Indio getting woken up by a the church bell getting shot.

- Removed the boy telling Manco 4 of Indio's gang have arrived at El Paso.

- Removed Manco visiting the Prophet.

- Removed Indio's first flashback.

- Removed everything from the bank robbery to Indio letting the bounty hunters escape, so that the bounty hunters go directly to Aguas Calientes to hunt the bandits.

- Removed a line when Groggy confronts Indio, so that Groggy is the one that betrays him.

- Removed Groggy laughing like a stereotypical villain.

- Removed Groggy's second search scene for the money.

- Removed Indio's proposition to Groggy.

- Trimmed the rape scene to make it less awkward and remove Mortimer's sister's unrealistic suicide.

I finished the v1 recently. I can send you a link if you want.
 
You've made some interesting editing choices! I'd love to see your edit. :)
 
Gotta love that title and trailer.
 
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Alt title suggestion: 'For a Few Dollars Less'
 
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