A bit of good news and bad news
The bad news is that I lost the edit's original version a while ago, first by a crash, and then when my original Vimeo account was deleted.
The good news is I've created a brand new edit, but I've switched things around, now the Orson Pink half of the story takes center stage. I've removed most references to the toy soldier, tweaked the ending (to avoid referencing the soldier) and even joined together both of Clara's dates with Danny to create a brand new post-credits intro.
Finishing up the IFDB entry now.