Doctor Who: Deep Into The Dalek

[Zarius]

Fanmix time. I figured with the utter omnishambles Short Trips proved to be and the well-documented issues I was having with the Deep Breath portion, it was time to start afresh and come up with a completely different approach. To this end, I've come up with an alternative introduction episode for Peter Capaldi's Twelth Doctor, making use of some footage from Deep Breath and most of Into the Dalek

List of Changes

-Kicking things off in the edit right off the bat is the final third of Deep Breath, and the Doctor's companions knee-deep in danger. It's a typical Saturday night with the new Doctor introducing himself by pouring a glass and then debating life and death with The Half-Man. What serves as a decisive stand off becomes an enigmatic introduction to our favorite time lord.

-The titles kick in after Clara finds the TARDIS is missing from the courtyard 

-First use of Into the Dalek footage kicks off after the titles, with the new Doctor answering the distress call and reaching the asteroid base where he learns of the Dalek being held prisoner. We cut before we see what he sees

-Resume Deep Breath footage here with Vastra assuring Clara The Doctor will return for her. We end the footage once they arrive in Glasgow, but cut before they talk about buying chips and coffee.

-Cut to Danny Pink arriving for class. His drill sergeant routine with the boys has been cut

-Cut The Doctor and Clara talking about coffee and glasgow.

 

[Zarius]

Just to clear something up when the edit's released

At the 26: 29 mark of the edit , you hear a door clicking just before Clara closes the door in the shot, this is not a miscue with the audio, that is actually The Doctor opening the TARDIS door, which becomes clear in the next shot. I was worried people would mistake that for an error, but rest assured it isn't.

 

[Zarius]

A screener copy is available now.

 

[asterixsmeagol]

FYI there's a typo in the description on IFDB. It currently says 

An attempt at combining footage from "Deep Breath" and "Into the Dalek" to create an entirely different debut adventure for the Eighth Doctor.

 

[Zarius]

D'OH.


Thanks

Fixed it now.

 

[TM2YC]

Edit up on ifdb. Thread moved in space and time.