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Carlito's Way: Escape to paradise

Dawnrazor

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This edit is a faster paced version of Carlito's Way.
current running time is 98 min (103 with end credits)
Original running time 144 min.

Gail is still in this version but her screen time is reduced a lot.
I haven't seen the @Adabisi edit "the last of the Mo'Ricans" who removes all scenes of Gail.
But I want to keep her in my version and still have a great pace.


-the court scene is gone (film starts at the club with Carlito and Kleinfeld celebrate and dancing)
-most scenes with Gail is gone but have kept when Carlito seeks her out and they meet a bar (trimmed)
-after that bar scene they're a couple again and all love scenes are gone.
- Lalin scenes (Viggo Mortensen) are gone (they're good but the story works without it so it had to go)


This clip crossfades from the bar on to the boat


 
The new intro!
*New shots of New York in black/white
*New Credits with red font more in line with the poster
*Removed courthouse scene and the edit starts with the party/dancing scene

 
This will be a December release!
The Edit is ready to pre-view.

Faster,Tighter storytelling and Less Scenes with Gail.

-New credits
-Cut the Courthouse scene (the edit now starts at the dancefloor)
-Cut Carlito searching for Gail (he knows where to find her)
-Cut Carlito watching Gail's dance lesson in the rain
-Trimmed the Cafe scene with Carlito and Gail
-Cut all scenes with Lalin (the story works without it)
-Cut the meeting with Carlito and Kleinfeld about Lalin
-Cut Carlito visit Gail at her work
-Cut Kleinfeld and Steffie dancing and going into the bathroom (to create more suspence when Benny wants to find her)
-Cut Carlito and Gail at Gail's apartment
-Cut the second scene at Gail's apartment
-Cut Cockroach scene at the club
 
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