- Messages
- 99
- Reaction score
- 64
- Trophy Points
- 38
Like my season 4 edit, my plan is to do the standard trimming and only incorporating the episodes I think are worth including. But there's two major things in particular I want to take care of.
1. Tone down Max's behavior towards David to build better consistency from the season 2 finale.
2. Remove Cameron's redemption arc that began with this season, so the last time we see him is during Cameron Campbell the Camp Campbell Camper. This leaves out the events of City Survival and Camp Corp.
Episodes included:
- Ered Gets Her Cool Back
- Dial M for Jasper
- Cameron Campbell the Camp Campbell Camper
- Charlie Tango Foxtrot
- Arrival of the Torso Takers
- Culture Day
- Ered Gets Her Cool Back starts here.
- Removed Nikki wondering if Space Kid died.
- Cut Neil's 4th wall break on what will happen in the future.
- Removed the campers laughing at Ered after her accident.
- Cut Max thanking the campers for trying to be cool while screwing it up.
- Removed Cameron's drunken rant when everyone arrives at the half pipe.
- Charlie Tango Foxtrot starts here
- Removed Nikki asking if the Wood Scouts overturned girls not being allowed to join.
- Culture Day starts here.
- Nurf doesn't ask Neil if the 8 days of presents part of Hanukkah is still real.
- Cut Gwen and Quartermaster relaxing at the Girl Scouts.
- Arrival of the Torso Takers starts here.
- The red Cult Camp filter slowly appears when Daniel gives Max his monologue, then disappears right after.
- Removed Daniel messing with Max if he was kidding or not.
- To improve the passage of time, regraded the sequence when Max searches through the counselors cabin all the way through Max hitting Daniel with David's guitar to take place during the evening.
- Removed David asking Max how he knew Daniel wasn't him.
- Removed Max preparing to shoot both David and Daniel and telling David he overestimates their relationship.
- Removed Daniel bursting from the ground and the platypus biting his arm.
- Dial M for Jasper starts here.
- Removed Gwen shutting the door when David screams.
- Removed Max telling David trees and birds don't count for friends.
- Added an establishing shot of Spooky island after David and Jasper find Cameron's folder.
- Trimmed Max going through Cameron's folder so he only mentions movie ideas.
- Removed David offering the kids spelunking on Spooky island.
- Cameron Campbell the Camp Campbell Camper starts here.
- Removed Cameron laughing after Gwen and Quartermaster point him out. Added an establishing shot of the Counselors cabin afterwards.
- Removed Cameron asking David if he could speak louder.
- Reduced the agents having their gun contest.
- Max saying "Cut out? I run this fucking camp!" has been replaced with him simply smiling at David.
- Removed Nikki wondering if Space Kid died.
- Cut Neil's 4th wall break on what will happen in the future.
- Removed the campers laughing at Ered after her accident.
- Cut Max thanking the campers for trying to be cool while screwing it up.
- Removed Cameron's drunken rant when everyone arrives at the half pipe.
- Charlie Tango Foxtrot starts here
- Removed Nikki asking if the Wood Scouts overturned girls not being allowed to join.
- Culture Day starts here.
- Nurf doesn't ask Neil if the 8 days of presents part of Hanukkah is still real.
- Cut Gwen and Quartermaster relaxing at the Girl Scouts.
- Arrival of the Torso Takers starts here.
- The red Cult Camp filter slowly appears when Daniel gives Max his monologue, then disappears right after.
- Removed Daniel messing with Max if he was kidding or not.
- To improve the passage of time, regraded the sequence when Max searches through the counselors cabin all the way through Max hitting Daniel with David's guitar to take place during the evening.
- Removed David asking Max how he knew Daniel wasn't him.
- Removed Max preparing to shoot both David and Daniel and telling David he overestimates their relationship.
- Removed Daniel bursting from the ground and the platypus biting his arm.
- Dial M for Jasper starts here.
- Removed Gwen shutting the door when David screams.
- Removed Max telling David trees and birds don't count for friends.
- Added an establishing shot of Spooky island after David and Jasper find Cameron's folder.
- Trimmed Max going through Cameron's folder so he only mentions movie ideas.
- Removed David offering the kids spelunking on Spooky island.
- Cameron Campbell the Camp Campbell Camper starts here.
- Removed Cameron laughing after Gwen and Quartermaster point him out. Added an establishing shot of the Counselors cabin afterwards.
- Removed Cameron asking David if he could speak louder.
- Reduced the agents having their gun contest.
- Max saying "Cut out? I run this fucking camp!" has been replaced with him simply smiling at David.
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