Thanks for all the feedback guys, I'd also be interested what you think about this...
Some context first ...
The first episode runs like the orginal film to the point Marty goes back to 1955, at that point it cuts to the end of the film where Marty awakes after all the time travelling adventure thinking he has had a nightmare. Then he see his family life has completely changed and realises it all happens and we follow the events of BTTF2 to revisit the 1955 events of the first film later on.
I've been experimenting and tried adding a little extra scene at the point he goes back in time, I'm trying to give the viewer a little context of what has happened in a very chaotic way via a sort of dream sequence to which in my mind he is having before he awakes that morning to find everything changed.
Do you guys think it works or am I better keeping my original cut of simply cutting to him waking up next day at the point the delorean reaches 88mph
heres a rough scene ive added for what im trying to achieve to give a first time viewer a little context of whats to come