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Edit submitted, thread moved to pending approval.
00.02.08 - The music still abruptly ends in silence after the prologue. You need to have it fade out more slowly, or have some sound for it to fade in to, in order to disguise the join. Could the music and radio chatter be brought together and crossfaded by trimming some more runtime from each scene? That would make blending the two easier. By the way, movies are rarely actually totally silent, even when things are super quiet there is normally something subtle going on in the soundmixx. The problem is you are going from a new prologue into the TOTAL silence before the movie originally started. It's never going to sound right that way IMO. It might be easier to make the transition smoother by moving the Marvel titles to the beginning before the flashback? That way you could add back the awesome fanfare music, which I personally missed. There are lots of options.
00.21.43 - You've added music over this action scene which is drowning out lines like "Where'd that come from?". Either remove it, or lower it a lot more in the mix. Spidey is hard to hear and the dialogue at 00.23.22 from Thanos' minion to Doc Strange is totally inaudible. Perhaps lower the volume overall a little, then lower it a lot more when anybody speaks.
01.56.22 - I really love the addition of the Doc Strange theme in this battle but when he and Thanos start talking at this point, none of it is in any way audible over the music. Either fade out the theme somewhere before the dialogue begins, or lower the volume of the music much more to a level where the dialogue can be heard again.
00.04.40 - The change in music is noticeable as Thanos mentions "The teseract". Try to smooth it some more.
02.14.18 - It doesn't look quite right where you've added your name to the end credits. The spacing between the letters/words is way too small, the font isn't bold enough and the line spacing is slightly to wide too. I get really nerdy about litle typographic details like that, sorry.
ErnestoTheEditor said:Thanks TM2YC i'll fix those issues
but are there other changes that you would like to see?
00.02.06 - The mix between the music from the Gamora flashback, to the new fanfare music is fine but could be improved some more to make it really seamless.
00.02.16 - The fanfare music is waaaaay too quiet. At a guess, it's probably half the volume it should be.
00.02.41 - The transition out of the fanfare music sounds fine now.
TM2YC said:Please take a week or two to really finesse these areas before submitting a new version. No need to rush. Thanks.
TVs Frink said:So....about the feedback?
TM2YC said:Once again:
TM2YC said:Please take a week or two to really finesse these areas before submitting a new version. No need to rush. Thanks.
Sorry but I'm refusing to watch another version for a week (that's Friday the 12th), so take that time, to finesse the edit and then re-watch the render to make sure it's correct please. Check it and then check it again.
Zarius said:it's good to finally have an Avengers edit on here that isn't just an extended cut of Ultron for the 14,000,605th time
TerryRL said:Great job! I really dug what you did with it.
Cavolon said:TerryRL said:Great job! I really dug what you did with it.
Glad you liked it but could you give a review on my ifdb page?