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First clip seems good to me. No complaints outside of some minor audio editing quibbles (am I right in thinking you've used multiple pieces of music for this?) Seemed to me like a couple of transitions were quite noticeable - but I'm being seriously nitpicky here.
Second clip works well, particularly the scoring. The cutting between an action scene (Maul) and the political situation is a great idea. Personally, I wouldn't have used the fan footage, since it doesn't look like part of the same film to me - the main giveaway being Mauls face, his makeup being noticeably less detailed. However, I wouldn't expect you to go back on this decision. What I would maybe do, is avoid closeups of Mauls face where you can (when using fan footage), or at the very least lingering on the shots for too long. I would also maybe insert another clip of them fighting in between the two that are there/splitting what you currently have between three clips (I hope that makes sense?). To me it felt like you waited too long before the second clip came in, and I was wondering if we were going to see the result of the battle. Having it switch between the two scenes slightly more frequently would ramp up the tension nicely.
Edit: Only just watched the 3rd clip. Naturally, not a fan due to the shots of Fan-Mauls face, though I'm not sure what footage is available that could help with that (is it possible to veil his face in shadow?). What you want to communicate with Yoda seems fine, though I'd have to watch it in context of the film. The last cutaway from his face to the establishing shot though is too abrupt.
Second clip works well, particularly the scoring. The cutting between an action scene (Maul) and the political situation is a great idea. Personally, I wouldn't have used the fan footage, since it doesn't look like part of the same film to me - the main giveaway being Mauls face, his makeup being noticeably less detailed. However, I wouldn't expect you to go back on this decision. What I would maybe do, is avoid closeups of Mauls face where you can (when using fan footage), or at the very least lingering on the shots for too long. I would also maybe insert another clip of them fighting in between the two that are there/splitting what you currently have between three clips (I hope that makes sense?). To me it felt like you waited too long before the second clip came in, and I was wondering if we were going to see the result of the battle. Having it switch between the two scenes slightly more frequently would ramp up the tension nicely.
Edit: Only just watched the 3rd clip. Naturally, not a fan due to the shots of Fan-Mauls face, though I'm not sure what footage is available that could help with that (is it possible to veil his face in shadow?). What you want to communicate with Yoda seems fine, though I'd have to watch it in context of the film. The last cutaway from his face to the establishing shot though is too abrupt.