Ambulance-Cut to the chase (Michael Bay’s overlong heist film)

[Dawnrazor]

Wow, Michael Bay's film suffers some great dialog but have some amazing action scenes.
And it's way too long for an action packed heist/chase movie.

This edit will have the 80% of the scenes taken place in the Ambulance and we will have their p.o.v of the events.
The less time spent with the cops the better to keep the suspence higher.

-trim dialog
-trim drone shots (yes, there's a lot of them)
-keep the suspence higher (don't tell the viewer what's gonna happen., just let it happen)

The running time is planned to 90-95 min
Original Running time: 2h 16 min

 

[Dawnrazor]

This clip is the warehouse chase and I have cut out the dog part

 

[Dawnrazor]

Did a update on the first clip. I think this is smoother and works better.

 

[Dawnrazor]

This sequence goes from the escape out of the bank to the cop getting shot.
Original cut: 5 min
Fanedit: 3,38 min

 

[Dawnrazor]

Here's the cut list.
The Running time is at the moment 96min.

-Cut Will visit at Danny's place
-Cut Cam saving the little girl (Lindsey)
-Cut Cafe scene
-Cut car scene with the cops
-Cut captain Monroe and his dog
-Trimmed the heist
-Cut Cam and Scott after the cafe
-Cut meeting with cops
-Cut FBI agent introduction
-Cut cop scene
-Cut dead end street scene
-Cut scene at Papi's
-Cut out dog from chase scene
-Cut cops setting up scene
-Cut Danny and Will singing scene
-Cut the river scene
-Cut Lindsey at hospital

also reduced the overused drone shots

 

[Dawnrazor]

A pre-view version is ready to roll.

Original running time: 136min
Fanedit: 96min
Time cut: 40min

mega only for now.
the final version will also be uploaded to my vimeo channel.

 

[It'sOnRandom]

Cool idea for an edit. I'm apart of the (probably) small minority that actually quite enjoyed this film. Will definitely be checking it out.