This was a really well done edit by an obvious fan of the movie.
I liked some things about this one better,
and some things about Xenomorphs better.
Both are 10X improvements.
Kudo's for swinging for the fences,
but kind of like the prequal trilogy or ROTJ,
your still playing a game that just cant be won IMO.
At least not as a movie.
But congrats on a well earned win as an edit.