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But where is here?  Canada?

Oh wait we're not Duragizer.
 

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Just read through a bunch of this thread. Its all over the place. Its in and out and out and in and back again. My head hurts. Just a few more posts. Wait...
 

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I want to move to Rochester New York and find a way into some film preservation job.
 

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Posting because I don't want to take out the trash.

Bah
 

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In the autobiographical screenplay I'm drafting, the main character (who is me) is unnamed.  I'm doing this to further express the theme of isolation, and the exploration/creation of personal identity.

But it seems pretentious and dumb when I do it.
 

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Isn't Fight Club the most famous example of an unnamed protagonist?

As I typed this, I clicked on the link and realized it was Hitchcock. I suppose that might be more famous then. Not to mention  I suppose my example isn't nameless for the themes of isolation, and I can't speak for the other. Handman wins. 

But anyways, I doubt it sounds pretentious and dumb, and even if it does, it doesn't matter, write the story that you want to tell.
 

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jrWHAG42 said:
Handman wins. 

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suspiciouscoffee said:
In the autobiographical screenplay I'm drafting, the main character (who is me) is unnamed.  I'm doing this to further express the theme of isolation, and the exploration/creation of personal identity.

But it seems pretentious and dumb when I do it.

Stylistically, anything unusual draws attention to itself.  The question is only if it's the sort of attention you want.

Aside from the other examples given so far, Ragtime used generic "Mother" and "Father" names for characters to emphasize the idealized homogeneous nuclear family.  That worked okay because the entire novel was engaged in wacky experiments with convention, and that was just another one on the pile.  Half Asleep in Frog Pajamas was written in second person, and that was very unsettling throughout the entire book, but again being forced out of your comfort zone may have been the point.  I remember Jasmine did a cool thing with dissociative states where a character who was in shock after a bombing described another woman screaming at first responders in a murderous tirade, but careful reading indicates it was herself -- the style choice telling you that the attack broke her mentally.

For a book, not naming the main character may not actually be that noticeable most of the time if written in first person, would be very noticeable in third person, and would be completely lost in the freakshow that is second person.  For a play, I'd say you're somewhere between first and third.

I think your worries about seeming pretentious are overblown.  Also, it's a screenplay -- you're already soaking in it!  In short, I think using unusual stylistic choices to create mood/atmosphere is completely legit.  Your only risk is that an author ultimately has no control over how their audience interprets their work.
 

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CatBus said:
suspiciouscoffee said:
In the autobiographical screenplay I'm drafting, the main character (who is me) is unnamed.  I'm doing this to further express the theme of isolation, and the exploration/creation of personal identity.

But it seems pretentious and dumb when I do it.

I think your worries about seeming pretentious are overblown.  Also, it's a screenplay -- you're already soaking in it!

I'm soaking in pretentiousness?
 

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suspiciouscoffee said:
CatBus said:
suspiciouscoffee said:
In the autobiographical screenplay I'm drafting, the main character (who is me) is unnamed.  I'm doing this to further express the theme of isolation, and the exploration/creation of personal identity.

But it seems pretentious and dumb when I do it.

I think your worries about seeming pretentious are overblown.  Also, it's a screenplay -- you're already soaking in it!

I'm soaking in pretentiousness?

Screenplays have a reputation I was making light of.  You don't.
 

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Oh he's got a reputation.  Is it a good one?  Stay tuned to find out.
 

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I've changed my avatar from Spock to the 12th Doctor.  I don't think I've ever been anything but Spock for, like, 5 years now, between here and OT.  But it was time for a change, I was starting to really not like that drawing.
 

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Spock has better quotes.  But you're right, that was an oversight.
 
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