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Anyone here an aspiring screenwriter/written a screenplay?
My dream job is to write and direct movies. We'll see if I ever get there, but I figure I may try to become a screenwriter in the next few years...
I wrote a script this past year for a college course. It's a romantic comedy called Mismatched, 110 pages. In the near-future San Francisco, a revolutionary dating service scans your brain and assigns you to a True Love Matchâ¢. But one night, a lightning storm hits the servers, and two people who think each other are merely okay are told they're soul mates.
Writing it was an interesting experience, and I had an outline but no super-clear or informed road map to start from. My family and friends have enjoyed reading it, but a movie producer friend of my father's ripped it a new one, saying the pace was deadly slow, the stakes were way too low and the conflict was nonexistent. All fair points...
So now I'm thinking of starting an action screenplay set in a dystopic, hyper-industrial parallel-universe Los Angeles. It's sort of like Zorro meets Aladdin, set in a vaguely-20th century Mexifornia, and with a female protagonist. A supporting character would be descended from Zorro himself, but while the original Zorro story is in the public domain, the character is still trademarked, so I might have to be very vague about it.
.... Anyone else rockin' the "INT./EXT. ..." style?
My dream job is to write and direct movies. We'll see if I ever get there, but I figure I may try to become a screenwriter in the next few years...
I wrote a script this past year for a college course. It's a romantic comedy called Mismatched, 110 pages. In the near-future San Francisco, a revolutionary dating service scans your brain and assigns you to a True Love Matchâ¢. But one night, a lightning storm hits the servers, and two people who think each other are merely okay are told they're soul mates.
Writing it was an interesting experience, and I had an outline but no super-clear or informed road map to start from. My family and friends have enjoyed reading it, but a movie producer friend of my father's ripped it a new one, saying the pace was deadly slow, the stakes were way too low and the conflict was nonexistent. All fair points...
So now I'm thinking of starting an action screenplay set in a dystopic, hyper-industrial parallel-universe Los Angeles. It's sort of like Zorro meets Aladdin, set in a vaguely-20th century Mexifornia, and with a female protagonist. A supporting character would be descended from Zorro himself, but while the original Zorro story is in the public domain, the character is still trademarked, so I might have to be very vague about it.
.... Anyone else rockin' the "INT./EXT. ..." style?